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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:29, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
I will review. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:29, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
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edit- I copyedited the article here. Let me know if you disagree with any edits.
- The lead seems short, maybe add a sentence about his academic administrative career?
becoming head principal.[19] He retired at the end of 1971.
maybe combine, likeprincipal until he retired at the end of 1971.
- Spot check: 4, 7, 9, 13, 17, 20
- The non-newspaper articles need access-dates
- Ref 7 and 17 needs "agency = Associated Press"
- I archived the reference links.
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:41, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: I believe I've addressed all of the issues. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:36, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
- Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:39, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.