Talk:Bethwel Henry

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 talk 16:46, 17 November 2024 (UTC)

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• ... that Bethwel Henry was the first Micronesian to receive a degree in his field and served as a United Nations delegate at age 25?

• Source: degree, UN (the source says he was 26, but he was born in 1934 per [1] and his own words ([2]) and thus would have been 25)

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Empire Brunei
• Comment: QPQ will be done within 24 hours.

Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 262 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:46, 20 October 2024 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article is well sourced, hook is somewhat interesting and QPQ is completed. Playing a bit loose with the timing, but I don't see that being an issue, so I approve. TheBritinator (talk) 15:12, 25 October 2024 (UTC)

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 23:19, 27 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 01:40, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• This article is pretty big to only have a three-sentence lead.
  • Expanded.
• "However, after a year" comma after year
  • Done.
• "Trust Territory District Administrator's office" Is there a link for Trust Territory?
  • Linked.
• Added cat: University of Hawaiʻi
• "Pohnpei Congress was reformed into the Pohnpei District Legislature" are there links for either of those?
• "Chairman of the Political Committee" no link for that I guess?
• "first legislative secretary of the House of Assembly (later House of Representatives" links for any of that?
  • Micronesia is pretty obscure and has poor coverage (this is the second longest Micronesian bio on the site); there should be links for those but no one has written them yet.
• I guess you don't know where he died?
  • Not sure.
• "In 1964, Henry was elected unopposed to the newly-established Congress of the Trust Territory of the Pacific Islands " but infobox says "Member of the House of Representatives of the Trust Territory of the Pacific Islands" Is those the same thing??
  • Same thing (its like how the U.S. Congress has both the Senate and House – same format for the Trust Territory Congress) – re-worded.
• Infobox says he was born in "South Seas Mandate". What's that? Body doesn't say anything.
  • Added to body.

That's all. Really nice research. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 01:40, 28 October 2024 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:55, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

  Looks good now. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 16:10, 29 October 2024 (UTC)

• I did a spot check of the sources and didn't find any more issues. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:53, 31 October 2024 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.