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editThis interesting article contains a great deal of information about Bhanda Kansara. I congratulate the author(s). Unfortunately, the source for most of this information is rarely specified in the article. In the absence of any evidence of a source for the information, it appears to be original research, which is not appropriate for Wikipedia. The information sources need to be specified, and any material not documented should be removed. I will add some [citation needed] tags to the article in some of the places where the problem is especially clear. Thank you. Tim Ross (talk) 10:44, 4 November 2009 (UTC)
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editI'm a new Wiki editor, and decided to try my hand at editing this short article. I'm open to feedback! Mainly, I created sections, reorganized the information, improved the grammar and sentence structure, and left the content unchanged. I also added several links, since this article was an orphan. The existing content lacked citations, and I removed a few sentences that didn't give any substantial information. However, some of the information is intriguing, and perhaps someone with more knowledge can add specific references.
One substantial change I made was to present the information about the traditional occupation of the Kansari caste in a neutral manner. Octopet (talk) 16:43, 25 January 2011 (UTC)