Talk:Clarence McGeary/GA1
Latest comment: 10 months ago by Gonzo fan2007 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:34, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:34, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
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editto late to be eligible to
the first "to" should be "too"He returned to the Bison in 1948 and played end. He moved from end to center in the 1949 season.
probably an opportunity to combine these two sentences to soften up the short, choppinessFargo, North Dakota
need a comma after North Dakotabut choose to remain
-> "chose"Bismarck, North Dakota
need a comma after North Dakota- Ref spot check: #4, 5, 11, 17, 21, 22
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:22, 19 October 2023 (UTC)
- @Gonzo fan2007: Issues addressed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:54, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
- Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:20, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
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