Talk:Ernie Shore

Latest comment: 1 hour ago by Muboshgu in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 17:30, 24 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

 
Ernie Shore in 1915

5x expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self-nominated at 03:12, 4 March 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Ernie Shore; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 21:39, 12 March 2024 (UTC)Reply


GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Ernie Shore/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Muboshgu (talk · contribs) 15:43, 31 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 07:02, 1 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

I will be reviewing this! Arconning (talk) 07:02, 1 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Muboshgu Here are my comments! Hope they can be addressed. Arconning (talk) 07:03, 1 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Prose and MoS

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Lead and infobox

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Early life

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Baseball career

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Later life

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  • Mentions of "current dollar terms" should have like "As of [DATE]..." to retain consistency.
  • President Franklin D. Roosevelt.., remove the extra period.
  • It was named Ernie Shore Field, add a comma at the end.
  • World Series champion, World Series-winning.

Images

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  • Images have proper licenses and are relevant to the article.
  • On the third image, why is the "(right)" italicized?

Refs

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  • Random ref check: 1, 13, 15, 29, 46, seems good.
  • Earwig picks up nothing.

Misc

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  • No ongoing edit war, pretty broad information on the topic, focused.
Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed