Talk:HMS Tribune (1918)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 10:00, 17 July 2022 (UTC)

I will get to this one shortly. Zawed (talk) 10:00, 17 July 2022 (UTC)

Apologies for the delay in coming back to this, comments as follows:

Design and development

• one of thirty-three Admiralty S class destroyers...: is the Admiralty supposed to be there? In the lead only S class is used.

• Removed.

• The converted p.p length doesn't quite match what is in the infobox, ditto the speed figures

• Made consistent.

• Should shp be linked/converted in the infobox?

• Linked and converted.

• The sentence that starts The ship was designed to mount two 18-inch... is quite long with a lot of commas. It could be broken up.

• Split in two.

Construction and career

• On 21 September 1923, Tribune was recommissioned...: there is no mention of being decommissioned?

• Amended.

Other stuff

• Image tags OK
• dupe links: long tons

That's it for me. Zawed (talk) 09:40, 1 August 2022 (UTC)

@Zawed: Thank you for this review. I believe I have completed the changes. simongraham (talk) 02:53, 2 August 2022 (UTC)

Yes, the changes look fine. I am going to pass this as GA as I believe that it meets the necessary criteria. Cheers, Zawed (talk) 09:23, 2 August 2022 (UTC)