Talk:Harpya

Latest comment: 2 years ago by Theleekycauldron in topic Did you know nomination

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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 01:45, 29 November 2021 (UTC)Reply


Hi there! Will be reviewing this article. Looks pretty neat at first glance, expect a full review in several hours. GeraldWL 01:45, 29 November 2021 (UTC)Reply

Lead and infobox

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  • There's no need for reference 2, as Servais' position as writer-director has been cited in the body, and leads shouldn't have citations whenever possible.
  • Link short film
  • Other than that, everything here looks good.

Plot, themes

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  • "...finds a man strangling a woman in a fountain." Previously there's already "the cries of a woman" and there's only one woman in this film, so it should be "the woman in a fountain."
  • Linking chips is WP:OVERLINK.
  • "Servais' 1968 film Siren" --> "Servais' Siren (1968)".

Production

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  • "He made his first animated short film in 1959"-- link animation and short film.
  • "He envisioned it as a comedy horror film"-- link comedy horror.
    • It was linked above as "horror parody", but this looks better.
  • "...about a harpy, a winged, female monster from Greek mythology." I don't think we need this definition of harpy here since it's already stated in the plot section; if you feel like this extension is useful you can put it in the plot, but it shouldn't be here as it's repetition.
  • "Harpies are for example known from the Argonautica" --> "Harpies are for example known from the Greek poem Argonautica"
  • "...traditional cartoon"-- link Traditional animation.
  • "the spontaneous to visuals close to interwar"-- is this referring to Interwar period? Or other stuff?
    • Yes, I reworded it and added a link.
  • Link frames per second.

Release

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  • Above at the infobox there's ref 1 for the 9 minutes claim. To make the lead citation-free, I'd suggest modifying the second sentence to "With a running time of nine minutes,[1] it was the third time one of Servais' short films was selected for the festival; he had previously participated with Goldframe in 1969 and Operation X-70 in 1972.[27]"

Reception

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  • "...and Wim de Poorter of Ons Erfdeel"-- remove "Wim de" and "of Ons Erfdeel" as it has been established in Production who Poorter is and where he worked for.
  • Link Phantasmagoria.
  • "...the director's most individual film"-- you mean individualist? Or...? Because individual means "single; separate" nnd "of or for a particular person"
    • Changed to "unique", which is the word used in the source.
  • "1979 Annecy festival --> "1979 Annecy International Animation Film Festival".

Legacy

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Thank you very much, Gerald Waldo Luis! I think I have addressed everything above. Let me know if anything else is needed. Ffranc (talk) 10:24, 29 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
Ffranc: awesome! One last thing to note, at the sources section, I'd suggest linking CRC Press and Les 400 coups, as well as the locations in the =location parameters. All while I review MOS to make sure I'm not missing anything. GeraldWL 12:26, 29 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
Linked everything I could in the source section now. Ffranc (talk) 12:42, 29 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
And that wraps the GAN for this article! Probably one of the fastest (but still thorough) GANs I've reviewed. It's comprehensive, written well article for a masterpiece.   Passed GeraldWL 13:59, 29 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for the fast review! Ffranc (talk) 14:23, 29 November 2021 (UTC)Reply
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Criteria: 1a. prose ( ) 1b. MoS ( ) 2a. ref layout ( ) 2b. cites WP:RS ( ) 2c. no WP:OR ( ) 2d. no WP:CV ( )
3a. broadness ( ) 3b. focus ( ) 4. neutral ( ) 5. stable ( ) 6a. free or tagged images ( ) 6b. pics relevant ( )
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked   are unassessed

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk07:15, 15 December 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that Raoul Servais invented a new technique for combining animation and live action for his short film Harpya? Source: "...I wanted to try out something new, something that lay between animation and live action. ... So I had to develop a technique of my own that would allow me to combine the two film techniques." Raoul Servais: The Wizard of Ostend
    • ALT1: ... that critics have discussed whether or not the short film Harpya is misogynist? Source: "The film is little shocking but it would be a mistake to read it as misogynist." Animation: A World History, "Ça l'ennuie quand on dit que c'est un film misogyne." [It annoys him when one says it's a misogynist film.] Cinergie, "On the face of it, the film is a misogynist fable... And yet Harpya doesn't seem that offensive." Notebook

Improved to Good Article status by Ffranc (talk). Self-nominated at 14:47, 3 December 2021 (UTC).Reply

  •   Just watched the film. Quite bizarre... and oddly appetizing. Article was promoted to GA within seven days of nomination, is plenty long enough and written in a neutral tone. Earwig revealed no close paraphrasing. Checking the few English e-book sources I couldn't spot any close paraphrasing between them and the article either. QPQ done. I approve ALT0 as the more interesting of the two; hook fact checks out. DigitalIceAge (talk) 05:45, 15 December 2021 (UTC)Reply
ALT0 to T:DYK/P7