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Do not refer the article to another article without references. Please relate the film only after the plot section is added, and only if there are enough comparisons. Sushruth 10:56, 8 September 2015 (UTC)
"During the filming of Vedam (2010) in Vishakhapatnam, Krish visited a museum which displayed a bomb dropped by the Imperial Japanese Army on the city during World War II. " -do we know the museum?
"January 2015; Ramoji Rao was to produce the film under the banner Ushakiron Movies jointly with Krish's banner First Frame Entertainment.[4] Pragya Jaiswal, who auditioned for Gabbar Is Back, was signed as the film's female lead.[5] The film was officially launched on 27 February 2015 in Hyderabad and was titled Kanche.[6] Kanche translates to fence in English and Krish relates that the film focuses on the effects of a fence on friendship.[7] On the 75th anniversary of World War II, Krish told the Indo-Asian News Service on 1 September 2015" -I think you can avoid saying 2015 in the second two instances.
"The construction of the palace where Sitadevi lives took four to five days to complete and ₹4 million was spent" -try ", at a cost of ₹4 million" after "complete"
"The film's crew accepted the help of the Government of Georgia and huge sets were erected, which included a German military base camp. " -try "With the assistance of the Government of Georgia, huge sets were erected, including a German military base camp fitted with trenches and bunkers"
"For the film's shoot, Krish hired a few telegraph machines, typewriters, and coffee cups and saucers manufactured during the timeline of the World War II.[18] Some key action sequences were filmed in a few old, dilapidated buildings located near Georgia and Varun Tej performed his stunts without a body double. " -this is poorly constructured, you'd making three different points at once. The whole section could probably do with some copyediting and shifting around to improve structure.
" tabla tarang and sarod " -perhaps put what they are in brackets for non Indian readers
"The song "Itu Itu Ani Chitikelu Evvarivo" was composed using Natabhairavi raga; the song "Bhaga Bhagamani" was composed using Kamavardani raga; the song "Raa Mundadugeddam" was composed using both Charukesi and Kamavardani ragas.[27]" -can you find a way to reword and avoid repeating "composed"?
" Devi Dundoo of The Hindu called Kanche a film that does not: "stand out merely by being different, but also because it’s earnest". Dundoo added: "Step across the fence to a new world of storytelling, [Krish] seems to say. He doesn’t do this like a fence sitter — wanting to push the envelope but holding back for box office acceptance — he just plunges in"." -awkward wording. I've reworded and shortened it.
A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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Though the structure in the production section in places might still be sharper this is very well written and meets the GA criteria. Good job!♦ Dr. Blofeld16:41, 28 February 2016 (UTC)Reply