Talk:Kannum Kannum Kollaiyadithaal

GA Review

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Reviewer: DreamRimmer (talk · contribs) 18:15, 24 November 2023 (UTC)

hi! — Karnataka ^talk 18:29, 24 November 2023 (UTC)

done everything here so far. — Karnataka ^talk 20:58, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

Lead

• ~~Gautham Vasudev Menon and Uday Mahesh play a supporting role. Replace "play a supporting role" with "play supporting roles" to match the plural subject.~~
• ~~Replace Principal photography took place in Goa and Delhi, in the period from 18 November 2017 to 24 July 2018. with Principal photography took place in Goa and Delhi from 18 November 2017 to 24 July 2018.~~

Plot and cast

• The plot section is within the 700-word limit, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT
• No problem with the #Cast section.

Production

• Replace Design Periyasamy wished to have Dulquer Salmaan as the lead protagonist of his film after seeing his performance in Vaayai Moodi Pesavum, who agreed and chose to make the film before another proposed Tamil film by director Ra. Karthik. with Desingh Periyasamy wanted Dulquer Salmaan as the lead protagonist in his film after being impressed by Salmaan's performance in Vaayai Moodi Pesavum. Salmaan agreed to do the film before committing to another proposed Tamil film by director Ra. Karthik. for clarity.
• Replace The film was initially set to begin production in July 2017, but was delayed as the team looked for a suitable lead actress. Ritu Varma joined the team to play the lead actress during September 2017. with The film was initially scheduled to start production in July 2017, but faced a delay while the team searched for a suitable lead actress. Ritu Varma joined the team as the lead actress in September 2017.
• Replace which was inspired by a song by A. R. Rahman in Mani Ratnam's Thiruda Thiruda (1993). with inspired by a song by A. R. Rahman from Mani Ratnam's Thiruda Thiruda (1993).

• The shoot was however briefly disrupted by the smog in Delhi during the period. - The use of "however" might be slightly awkward here. It could be rephrased for smoother flow. However, the shoot was briefly disrupted by the smog in Delhi at that time.
• ...revealed that the film was close to being completed, with only five days of shoot remaining. - The phrase "with only five days of shoot remaining" could be improved for better clarity. ...revealed that the film was nearing completion, with only five days of shooting left.

Soundtrack

• Replace The first single track was released on 14 February 2020. The album was released on 21 February 2020. with The first single track was released on 14 February 2020, and the entire album was released on 21 February 2020.

Images

• pass, tagged with valid rationals.

references

• spot checked. pass

WP:NOR, WP:Copyvio

• pass.

• Overall: pass. – DreamRimmer (talk) 15:44, 6 December 2023 (UTC)

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