Kumari 21F has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: January 19, 2016. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Kumari 21F/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 12:14, 19 January 2016 (UTC)
I'll have this done soon. JAGUAR 12:14, 19 January 2016 (UTC)
Initial comments
edit- "Siddhu realises the same and unites with Kumari after an incident; this is the film's centrepiece" - might sound better as The film's centrepiece revolves around Siddhu's realisation and his attempts to unite with Kumari after an incident
- "Neither Prasad nor Rathnavelu charged remuneration for the film" - was charged remuneration for the film
- "Siddhu is a chef leading a middle class life with his mother" - link middle class?
- "The official soundtrack of Kumari 21F consisting of five songs was composed by Devi Sri Prasad" - The official soundtrack was composed by Devi Sri Prasad and consists of five songs
- "and mute several objectionable lines of dialogues" - dialogue (no need for plural)
- No dead links
This is an excellent article! I couldn't find many things wrong with it, so it explains the short review. Once all of the above are addressed I'll be happy to promote. JAGUAR 12:48, 19 January 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Jaguar! I've addressed all the above comments and i hope the article is good to go. Pavanjandhyala (talk) 13:44, 19 January 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for addressing them so quickly! This is good to go now. Well done JAGUAR 14:48, 19 January 2016 (UTC)