Talk:Lee Weigel/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 21:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:30, 17 October 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• Missing a period at the end of the lead.
  • Added.
• NAIA should be spelled out for its first use.
  • Done.
• in a scrimmage against the Los Angeles Raiders. does this mean a preseason game? If so, just say that.
  • It doesn't sound like it was a preseason game (which, if I remember correctly, took place in August rather than July) - looking at this report, it seems like it was some kind of exhibition / practice at the Raiders training complex between rookie players of the two teams? What would you suggest?
• NFLPA should be spelled out.
  • Done.
• Ref spot check: #4, 9, 10, 15, 17, 20

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:30, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

• @Gonzo fan2007: Responded to each of your points. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:49, 18 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Looks good. I amfine with scrimmage. Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:57, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

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