Talk:Mitchelene BigMan

Latest comment: 2 years ago by ProfessorBeaver in topic Untitled

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In the info box - is "performing" the right word here?

Start cleaning up the wording. The second sentence in the early life section should probably be broken up into 2 sentences. Jingle dresses do not need quotation marks. I think it would be helpful to hear a little more about the racism she experienced, if the sources discuss any specifics.

Still feel like the color guard purpose/role needs some explanation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by ProfessorBeaver (talkcontribs) 18:35, 23 February 2022 (UTC)Reply