Talk:Rodney Parker/GA1
Latest comment: 10 months ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 10:05, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Notes
edit- Added cats
- "Francis T. Nicholls High School" PFA has a different one
- Was Nicholls per [1].
- Can you add that source to that sentence? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 16:54, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- Was Nicholls per [1].
- remove maulers from lead or add a line saying he was also a member of the maulers becauss it doesnt look like he played any games? Ill keave it up to you Done
- See later comment.
- "September, to replace" remove comma Done
- Done.
- "football..." i cant figure out if there should be a period after that or not? Done
- That's how the source had it - I think its better if it stays.
- "He impressed in the minicamp was invited" change to and was invited Done
- Done.
- "where made" where he made Done
- Done.
- "Ron Jaworski then" remove ron Done
- Done.
- in the video caption "Parker's touchdown which was called back is shown from 5:58–6:48" put comma after touchdown and after back Done
- Done.
- "quarterback Ron Jaworski" remove ron Done
- Done.
- "had gotten past" change gotten to something else probably Done
- What wording do you think would be best?
- I don't know. Let's just leave it.
- What wording do you think would be best?
- "In week nine, against " remove comma Done
- Done.
- "a 10–6 record, before" remove comma Done
- Done.
- having PHI next to each other in the stats column makes it look like he played for the eagles for 3 years Done
- Changed the stars abbreviation.
- are we sure he was even with the maulers? I have seen those empty usfl profiles on statscrew (formerly Just Sports Stats) before and i am not sure what they are because some other people still havd games played listed. Done
- Thinking about it - I decided to remove the Maulers as I was unable to find any other sources confirming that he was with them.
- adjust maulers row in table if we change anything. Done
- Done.
- i think maybe we should remove falcons and eagles 1982 from the stats table because i dont think we usually put offseason teams in the tables. I think we onlt put "DNP" if they were active or injured reserve. Done
- Removed.
That's all I think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 10:45, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
@BeanieFan11: only thing left is can you add that source for the high school to the article WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 16:55, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 17:08, 27 October 2023 (UTC)