Talk:The Wrath of the Gods (1914 film)

Latest comment: 10 years ago by Jaguar in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 19:36, 29 August 2014 (UTC)Reply


Will leave some initial comments some point tomorrow. Jaguar 19:36, 29 August 2014 (UTC)Reply

I'm changing the format of my reviews now (so it's less awkward):

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose is "clear and concise", without copyvios, or spelling and grammar errors:  
    B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:  
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. Has an appropriate reference section:  
    B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:  
    C. No original research:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:  
    B. Focused:  
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:  
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

Initial comments

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  • The lead is well-written and can see no problems here, so this meets the GA criteria
  • "Toya decides to convert and marry Tom at the local Japanese-American mission" - marry at the local Japanese-American mission? I don't quite understand?
The American mission in Japan.♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:25, 30 August 2014 (UTC)Reply
  • "Ince had constructed a very large village in his studio Inceville" - where was his studio located?
  • "Four months prior to the release, New York Motion Picture Corporation put an ad"- advertisement?
  • "The film was released in a new theater called The Strand, on 7 June 1914" - was it premièred here? Where was The Strand located?
  • The film's DVD was released in the United States on 18 March 2008." - is there a reference for this?
  • All the references are fine and the citations are in the correct places so this meets the GA criteria.

@Dr. Blofeld: This is a generally well-written article, there are very few prose problems here so the review is somewhat short! The only minor problems I found were a few confusing sentences that needs clarifying. I'll put this one on hold for the standard seven days. Jaguar 18:15, 30 August 2014 (UTC) @Jaguar: OK now?♦ Dr. Blofeld 18:36, 30 August 2014 (UTC)Reply

Close - promoted

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Thanks for addressing those concerns so quickly! The article is well-written and referenced so in short it meets the GA criteria. I couldn't find any other problems with it despite the review feeling short. Just out of curiosity, is this film in the public domain now? I thought I have seen this one before but I'd like to watch it! Anyway well done on the extra work. Regards Jaguar 18:43, 30 August 2014 (UTC)Reply