Talk:Theatre Development Fund

Edit request from Theatre Development Fund (TDF)

• Specific text to be added or removed:

TDF presents its first audio-described Broadway performance, Grease, in 2008 - to be placed in the TDF Accessibility Program (TAP) section.

TDF and The Broadway League launch TheatreAccessNYC, a website highlighting accessibility information for Broadway shows - to be placed in the TDF Accessibility Program (TAP) section.

In December 2017, TDF launches its Veterans Theatregoing Program, which brings NYC-area veterans to Broadway shows at no cost to participants - to be placed in the TDF Accessibility Program (TAP) section.

In June 2023, TDF celebrates the 50th anniversary of the TKTS Discount Booth in Times Square - to be placed in Ticketing Programs, TKTS Discount Booths.

After a six-month trial run, TDF's TKTS Discount Booth in Lincoln Center becomes permanent in 2017.- to be placed in Ticketing Programs, TKTS Discount Booths (though I see this citation is already being used).

In 2011, TDF launches its Autism Theatre Initiative, which presents sensory-friendly performances of Broadway shows. The program was later renamed Autism Friendly Performances - to be placed in the TDF Accessibility Program (TAP), Autism Friendly Performances section.

• Reason for the change: Additional details with citations.
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Divaraven5 (talk) 18:30, 7 December 2023 (UTC)

 Not done for now: Please see Spintendo's comments, we need to know where to put these requested items, please amend the original request or reply below to let us know. Thanks :) Lewcm Talk to me! 21:31, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

Reply 7-DEC-2023

  Clarification requested  

1. It's unclear from your request where this information is to be placed within the article. The article itself is strictly segmented into varying sections. Please elaborate on where each sentence is to be placed.
2. When ready to proceed with the requested information, kindly change the {{Edit COI}} template's answer parameter to read from |ans=y to |ans=n. Thank you!

Regards,  Spintendo  01:34, 8 December 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for your speedy review. I included my edits in a version of the article and then undid my changes. Can you please review what I did, and see if you can accept it? Thank you! https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Theatre_Development_Fund&diff=prev&oldid=1190597112 --Divaraven5 (talk) 20:21, 18 December 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for reply, but we need to have to specifics placed here on the talk page. WP:ER states In general, if you want to make an edit request (1) propose a specific change on a talk page as well as the acronym SUNY, where S refers to any edit request must be accompanied by a detailed and specific description of what changes need to be made (the italicized emphasis is in the original text), and clearly indicate which sections or phrases should be replaced or added to, and what they should be replaced with or have added. Examples: Change X to Y; Insert X after/before Y; Remove X. As you can see, placing the specific information on a different page (in the form of a diff) other than the talk page, means your request is not accompaning its specific details as WP:ER suggests. Please place that information here and then relaunch the Edit COI template. Thank you! Regards,  Spintendo  00:11, 19 December 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for your response. Please add the following citations:

Request 1: On October 2, 2011, TDF launched a new program, Autism Friendly Performances (originally known as the Autism Theatre Initiative), to make theatre accessible to children and adults on the autism spectrum as well as their families.

The next three requests should all appear under the TDF Accessibility Program (TAP) section of the Article.

Request 2:

Audio described performances

TDF presents audio described performances for audiences who are blind or have low vision. The organization presented its first audio described Broadway performance, the musical Grease, in 2008.

Request 3:

Theatre Access NYC

In 2016, TDF and The Broadway League partnered to launch TheatreAccessNYC, a website highlighting accessibility information for Broadway shows.

Request 4:

Veterans Theatregoing Program

In December 2017, TDF launched its Veterans Theatregoing Program, which brings NYC-area veterans to Broadway shows at no cost to participants.

Request 5: Citations 1 and 2 are the same article. Please combine.

--Divaraven5 (talk) 16:14, 3 January 2024 (UTC)

 Done @Divaraven5: changes implemented. STEMinfo (talk) 01:38, 18 January 2024 (UTC)

Thank you! I appreciate the speedy turnaround. --Divaraven5 (talk) 18:47, 22 January 2024 (UTC)

New citations and language tweak

I would like propose additional changes.

Proposal 1: Add the following citation to the first sentence of the The Wendy Wasserstein Project section.

Proposal 2: Add the following citation to the first sentence of the Irene Sharaff/Robert L.B. Tobin Awards section.

Proposal 3: Add the following sentence and citation to the beginning of the TDF Costume Collection section: In 1974, the TDF Costume Collection opens, renting costumes to nonprofit and commercial productions.

Proposal 4: Citations 1 and 2 of the Theatre Development Fund article are the same. Please combine.

Proposal 5: In the TDF Accessibility Program (TAP) section, the last line uses the phrase "handicapped people." In the disability community, the phrase is "people with disabilities," to align with people-first language.

References

Thank you for considering! Divaraven5 (talk) 18:57, 22 January 2024 (UTC)

 Done Encoded Talk to me! 07:41, 23 February 2024 (UTC)

Thank you so much! --Divaraven5 (talk) 18:18, 26 February 2024 (UTC)

Request to add additional citations please!

Proposal 1: In the intro paragraph, after "Created in 1968 to help an ailing New York theatre industry" please add this citation:

Proposal 2: Under Ticketing Programs, please add this citation to the TDF Membership Program:

Proposal 3: Under Ticketing Programs, please add this citation to after "Times Square TKTS Booth on June 25, 1973":

Proposal 4: Under Ticketing Programs, it says "TDF operates satellite TKTS booths at the South Street Seaport and in Downtown Brooklyn." Both of these booths have been closed for years, so please delete them. Also note that there's no citation for these TKTS booths.

Proposal 5: Under the TDF Accessibility Program (TAP) section, can we please rewrite the Sign language interpreting performances blurb like so and add the citations: TDF presented the first American Sign Language-interpreted performance on Broadway in 1980 at The Elephant Man.

Since then, TDF regularly presents ASL-interpreted performances on Broadway and beyond.

Thanks for considering all this!

References

--Divaraven5 (talk) 18:35, 26 February 2024 (UTC)

 Go ahead: I have reviewed these proposed changes and suggest that you go ahead and make the proposed changes to the page. Except for the line Since then, TDF regularly presents ASL-interpreted performances on Broadway and beyond, which seems a bit promotional. ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 01:59, 4 March 2024 (UTC)

Thanks! I made the edits. You can see what I did here: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Theatre_Development_Fund&diff=1213211024&oldid=1209720551

I appreciate your support! --Divaraven5 (talk) 18:16, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

New request

I'm back with another round of citations and edits. Let me know your thoughts.

Proposal 1: In the TDF Accessibility Program (TAP) section, I would like to add a new first line: TDF Accessibility Programs launched in 1979. Citation:

Proposal 2: Also in the TDF Accessibility Program (TAP) section, I would like to add a new first line to the Open captioning performances blurb: In 1979, TDF presented the first open captioned performances on Broadway in 1997, of the play Barrymore and the musical Jekyll & Hyde.

Proposal 3: In the Educational Programs section, I would like to add a new first line: TDF Education Programs launched in 1995. Citation:

Proposal 4: In the Ticketing Programs section, in the TKTS Discount Booths blurb, please change "TDF opened its new TKTS booth in the revitalized Duffy Square" to: In 2008, TDF opened the revamped Times Square TKTS Booth in the revitalized Duffy Square. Citation:

Thank you for considering.

References

--Divaraven5 (talk) 18:34, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

 Not done See my comments below. P,TO 19104 (talk) (contribs) 02:13, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

New Edit Request June 5, 2024

Proposal 1: In the The Wendy Wasserstein Project section, after the phrase: "Formerly Open Doors," please put the following citation:

Proposal 2: In the Wendy Wasserstein Project section, please add the following sentence and citation: In 2012, the program received a Tony Honor for Excellence in the Theatre, the first theatre education program to be presented with the distinction.

Proposal 3: In the Wendy Wasserstein Project section, add this citation after the specified mentor names. Wendy Wasserstein Project mentors.

• Kathleen Chalfant
• James Lapine
• Scott Ellis

References

--Divaraven5 (talk) 16:07, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

 Not done See section below. P,TO 19104 (talk) (contribs) 02:13, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

NPOV concerns

Hello, I have some concerns about other editors continuing to allow the above COI editor @Divaraven5: to make changes to this article. The whole article seems to have issues that violate WP:NOTPROMO. For example, why does this article not seem to mention anything about this organization's history, founding, or community impact and only seems to focus on the programs that are currently offered. Much of the article reads as if I am on this organization's website, which is quite problematic. I urge other editors to respectfully deny further requests by Divaraven5, and I ask her if she could instead resubmit the above requests so that they instead focus on the organization's past and impact instead of the programs offered. Best, P,TO 19104 (talk) (contribs) 02:13, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

@P,TO 19104: Hi, as far as I can tell, the edit I accepted seems fine. It just added a few references, deleted some outdated information, and added the sentence "TDF presented the first American Sign Language-interpreted performance on Broadway in 1980 at The Elephant Man." I guess the sentence could be seen as violating WP:NOTPROMO, but it's just a simple statement of fact to me. ARandomName123 (talk)^{Ping me!} 02:32, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for comment ARandomName123 and @P,TO 19104: Thanks for the hours of research and editing that you put into this article recently. I am writing to take responsibility for giving Divaraven5 the advice to make the edit request posts on this page, and to now ask for your advice about how she can go forward with some additional requests.

My name is Lane, and I do wiki editing as staff of the University of Virginia. Staff editing goes differently in every case, so really, if you have a recommendation, then please say so and Raven will follow it and I will support you both. I used to live in New York City and join events at WP:Meetup/NYC, which is why I care about Broadway theatre. I know Raven personally and I am also a 10-year member of TDF, so my support is for the arts, NYC, this organization specifically, and Raven as a friend and colleague. She is staff of TDF; there is no other money exchanged here and I think nothing more for me to disclose.

The advice that I gave her to develop this article was to first get all sources that she could find cited in the article, then after including all sources, pull more content out of each one and develop the article. Before she started making edit requests there were 3 reliable sources cited. Now there are 23. I told her to get one sentence from each source into the article because Wikipedia requires sources, so to add content, first it is necessary to know what sources exist. She was just arriving to the point of making edit requests for all sources when you asked for more scrutiny.

After you asked for a break, you also edited the article a lot, so thanks for that. Raven has some requests for more edits and would like you to say how she should or should not make these requests. I talked to her, and I think her requests will include removing information without citations, changing some details where this article makes a claim which does not match the cited sources, and bringing in new information from sources already considered.

I am at hand to support more. I checked the sources she cited and thought they passed WP:RS for her intended use. I can comment more as needed. If it is helpful, I can recruit more reviewers or commentators from a noticeboard, or do other things you suggest as useful. It is good to be skeptical of paid editors, and I am one of those also, but she is trying to follow the rules and I am trying to give advice as someone who sometimes does the same thing. Thanks for any feedback. Be direct in asking any questions that could make you trust our process and requests more. Bluerasberry (talk) 15:34, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

@Bluerasberry: Most of Raven's edits normally would have been benign had there not been an issue with tone of the article as a whole being exceptionally promotional. The issue with Raven's edits were not that they were poorly sourced, it was that contributed to promotional nature of the article. I also would like to acknowledge that it was not Raven who originally wrote many of the sections that were promotional of the TDF, and that it does seem she was only trying to help insert better sources. However, at that point the article was already to far gone: it needed a drastic rewrite so that it could truly become an encyclopedia article. I welcome new edit requests from her that would add to the current framework of the article. P,TO 19104 (talk) (contribs) 23:13, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Thanks for your guidance Bluerasberry and @P,TO 19104:, thanks for your incredible research and rewriting of the article! That was actually next on my list to do, I was just trying to get citations in place first. You saved me a lot of time and effort, and I am so grateful for your interest in improving this article.

There are some errors / outdated information in this overhauled article. See my suggestions for edits below. I suggestions citations when they weren't already cited in this article, although at times I had to cite TDF's website. I am happy to make these changes myself if I get your okay. I am also open to feedback, of course, if you question any of these edits, and happy to clarify anything that's unclear.

General note: We are usually referred to as TDF, not "the TDF." This is not an error per se, but a style choice. If you prefer to leave it as is I understand.

First paragraph update requests:

"The TDF heavily subsidizes Broadway, Off-Broadway, and Off-off-broadway theatre and dance productions that it deems to be of cultural value, with their most prominent program of this type being TKTS discount ticket booths."

We stopped giving subsidies to productions as of this fiscal year. See https://www.tdf.org/for-the-makers/sell-tickets-through-tdf/tdf-subsidy I realize you may be using that word more generally, but since it was something we did, giving money to productions, I think it is confusing. We still support Broadway, Off-Broadway etc. by selling their tickets, including, as you mention, at the TKTS Booth. Would it be possible to change that line to something like: "TDF supports Broadway, Off-Broadway, and Off-off-broadway theatre and dance productions by building audiences and selling tickets, with their most prominent program being the TKTS discount ticket booths." If you would like to add a citation that supports this, see this New York Times article: https://www.nytimes.com/2023/06/28/theater/victoria-bailey-tdf-tkts.html

"It has received a Special Tony Award for its work." It was actually for a specific program, the Wendy Wasserstein Project, not our work overall, so not sure if you want to clarify. Also, I think your 1. citation was meant to be put at the end of that sentence, but it's not there, and the link is slightly wrong. It should be: https://www.tonyawards.com/winners/year/any/category/tony-honors/show/any/?q=tdf

History section update requests:

"After this first initiative was successful, the TDF set up the TKTS booth in Duffy Square in 1972 that sold tickets to shows at discounted prices, which turned out to be a more effective way of subsidizing the plays." This is incorrect and not supported in the citations. The TKTS booth in Duffy Square opened in 1973 (see citation 6). We started our TDF membership program (which you mention in the next paragraph as our voucher program) in 1972, I think that's what led to the confusion.

"The TDF has continued to expand the network of TKTS discount ticket booths to other sites such a satellite booth at the Lincoln Center and another franchized booth in London.[7]" The Society of London Theatre licensed the trademark from us but we are otherwise unaffiliated, as per the TKTS Wiki article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/TKTS Citation: https://www.tdf.org/on-stage/tdf-stages/when-tkts-went-to-london/

"Starting in 1972, the TDF began subsidizing Off-off-Broadway productions by offering vouchers[8] to people that would be typically unlikely to see them, such as teachers and retired persons." Our voucher program (now our membership program) wasn't just for Off-Off Broadway. It was for all NYC theatre, so Broadway, Off-Broadway and Off-Off Broadway.

"At the time, the vouchers would cost 80 cents for the consumers and would entitle the playhouse to $2.50." These numbers only applied to Off-Off Broadway, not Broadway or Off-Broadway shows. Citation 4 has numbers for Broadway: "It found that any number of productions doing a lot less than capacity business were willing to provide tickets at $2 each, and these the fund disposed of for $2.50." I think maybe leaving numbers out might be easier but I defer to you.

"The TDF continues to offer Off-off-Broadway vouchers, but in a different format." Not just Off-Off, we offer tickets to shows on Broadway and beyond as well as dance and some music performances. This is now called the TDF membership program. I would change this line to something like: "TDF continues to offer discount tickets to shows on Broadway and beyond through its membership program." Citation: https://www.tdf.org/discount-ticket-programs/tdf-membership/

"TDF Costume Collection houses over 65,000 costumes and accessories..." We have more than 100,000 items now. Citation: https://www.tdf.org/for-the-makers/tdf-costume-collection-programs/

"In 2011, the program also started providing services to adults and children on the autistic spectum by providing autism friendly sources." We don't just provide autism-friendly resources. We are the only org presenting autism-friendly performances on Broadway. In addition to having experts and volunteers on hand to help families, we work with producers to change Broadway productions to be sensory-friendly, so no loud or sudden noises, house lights are up, etc. This sentence could be something like: "In 2021, the program launched autism-friendly performances, presenting Broadway shows in a welcoming and supportive environment for families impacted by autism. Adjustments are made to the shows to make the content sensory-friendly, break areas are provided, and volunteers are on hand to help." Citation: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ey1W57Nt4qA&ab_channel=FOX5NewYork

"They offer an introduction class for theatre called "Introduction to Theatre", which is offered to about 10,000 high school students in New York City." - we serve 10,000 high school students annually, any way to add that word, annually?

"In 1997, TDF introduced the Wendy Wasserstein/Open Doors program" - this started in 1998 and is called the Wendy Wasserstein Project, not program. See citations 19 and 20.

"TKTS discount ticket booths for Broadway plays, which are apart of its broader program to subsidize Dance and Theatre" - we sell Off-Broadway tickets at the booth too (not Off-Off Broadway though). And this no longer subsidizes theatre or dance. Citation 22 is no longer valid.

Off-Off Broadway vouchers should be the TDF membership program, which sells discounted tickets to Broadway, Off-Broadway and Off-Off Broadway shows as well as dance and music performances: https://www.tdf.org/discount-ticket-programs/tdf-membership/

Under criticism, again the word "subsidization" may be misleading as we are no longer offering subsidies. Especially this sentence: "This is due to the fact that the organization sometimes uses federal grant money in order to subsidize Broadway, which some question as a good use of taxpayer money (especially since doing so constitutes a bailout of a commerical enterprise)." We are just selling discount tickets, but for example with our Passport program, the government gives producers are huge tax break, which is controversial. All we are doing is selling the inexpensive tickets.

Thank you for considering and for all of your hard work on this!

--Divaraven5 (talk)