Talk:Tony Okanlawon

Latest comment: 1 year ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (No original research):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Notes

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  • added cat Players of American football from Maryland   Done
  • "In the season finale of the 1999" fix grammar   Done
    • Done.
  • Do you know if there is a link for source one or is it offline?   Done
    • Added links for each offline source.
  • "He started eleven games in as a junior" fix grammar   Done
    • Done.
  • "and by the end of week five had" comma after five   Done
    • Added.
  • "Okanlawon missed four games due to a "medical issue" which coach" comma after issue   Done
    • Done.
  • Add first team all acc to the infobox   Done
    • Added.
  • According to ArenaFan, he was signed on jan 5 and waived on jan 17?   Done
  • Lagos, Nigeria is linked differently in the infobox and article. Should probably be consistent.   Done
    • Made consistent.
  • Could you find anything on his life after football? Maybe he has a linkedin page, lol.   Done

I think that's all. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:37, 26 October 2023 (UTC)Reply