Talk:Tony Okanlawon/GA1
Latest comment: 10 months ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review
GA Review
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Notes
edit- added cat Players of American football from Maryland Done
- "In the season finale of the 1999" fix grammar Done
- Done.
- Do you know if there is a link for source one or is it offline? Done
- Added links for each offline source.
- "He started eleven games in as a junior" fix grammar Done
- Done.
- "and by the end of week five had" comma after five Done
- Added.
- "Okanlawon missed four games due to a "medical issue" which coach" comma after issue Done
- Done.
- Add first team all acc to the infobox Done
- Added.
- According to ArenaFan, he was signed on jan 5 and waived on jan 17? Done
- Could you provide a link?
- Lagos, Nigeria is linked differently in the infobox and article. Should probably be consistent. Done
- Made consistent.
- Could you find anything on his life after football? Maybe he has a linkedin page, lol. Done
- Does actually have a LinkedIn page, though there's nothing useful on it. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:14, 25 October 2023 (UTC)
I think that's all. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:37, 26 October 2023 (UTC)