Talk:Travis Simpson/GA1
Latest comment: 2 days ago by Gonzo fan2007 in topic GA Review
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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 23:25, 17 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 16:12, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:12, 18 October 2024 (UTC)
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edit- In the lead, you mention he played for one season. Yet he really participated for two additional years. Maybe clarify that he was only active for one season, but was in the NFL for 3?
However, he battled injuries that year, including a hyperextended elbow against Minnesota, injuries that resulted in him missing games against Texas and Miami, and an ankle injury that ended his season at the start of December.
-> recommend splitting into two sentences, as this runs on a bit.- Since you don't mention AP again in the article, you don't need the acronym.
- Similar to past articles, maybe add the PFR source to the sentence on it being the end of his career.
- Ref spot check: TBD (gotta step away, will finish tomorrow) « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 23:11, 18 October 2024 (UTC)