Talk:Wasswa Serwanga

Latest comment: 8 days ago by Crisco 1492 in topic Did you know nomination
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https://www.pro-football-reference.com/players/S/SerwWa20.htm

https://profootballarchives.com/players/s/serw00400.html

https://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/image/625900746/?match=4&terms=wasswa%20serwanga

https://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/image/693609013/?match=1&terms=wasswa%20serwanga

https://www-newspapers-com.wikipedialibrary.idm.oclc.org/image/387249050/?match=1&terms=wasswa%20serwanga

BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:14, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 19:21, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 19:51, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):   d (copyvio and plagiarism):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  
  • "Ugandan-born" get rid of born. According to the early life section, it looks like he IS Ugandan.
    • Changed.
  • Add NFL and AFL to lead.
    • Added.
  • Added cat
  • Any later life?
    • No articles that I could find. There's two California "Wasswa Serwanga"s on LinkedIn – one here and one here (the second one is definitely him, the first I can't tell as it doesn't let me view the whole thing). Should I add something from there?
  • You forgot to add the PFA cite for his 5 AFL starts.
    • I did? PFA is ref 1 and I read He appeared in five games for the Avengers, all as a starter, totaling 37 tackles, four pass breakups, an interception and a forced fumble.[1][35]
  • He had 31 solo tackles and 6 assisted in the AFL. Body just says 31.
    • Fixed.
  • I changed the high school formatting in the infobox, not wrong though but that's the standard now so whatever.

I think that's all. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:51, 30 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 talk 14:24, 12 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • ... that Wasswa Serwanga and his twin brother were the first two NFL players from Uganda?
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Society for Crypto-Judaic Studies
  • Comment: Could expand his twin brother's article (Kato Serwanga) to add to the hook if needed. Might also work to have a hook on the aspect of his wealthy father narrowly surviving an attempted murder from Idi Amin and selling his possessions in exchange for a plane ticket to bring Wasswa to the U.S. (not sure how it'd be best worded though...). Also, the QPQ will be done within 24 hours.
5x expanded by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 258 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:15, 7 October 2024 (UTC).Reply