Talk:Yolanda Saldívar

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Hppavilion1 in topic Ambiguous phrasing in the lede
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January 1, 2007Guild of Copy EditorsCopyedited
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March 29, 2015Articles for deletionSpeedily kept


Yolandas conviction date

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She was convicted on October 23, 1995!—Preceding unsigned comment added by 64.112.218.185 (talkcontribs) 17:49, 23 November 2004

hispanic\latino

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is she of latino\hispanic origin? because saldivar sounds spanish—Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.4.66.92 (talkcontribs) 21:32, 18 September 2005

saldivar is mexican american—Preceding unsigned comment added by Jlujan69 (talkcontribs) 02:00, 11 May 2006

English

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The English in this article really sucks. It should be revised and rephrased paragraph by paragraph.—Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.166.71.32 (talkcontribs) 20:29, 20 December 2006

Ambiguous phrasing in the lede

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The lede as it's currently written could be read to mean that that she was convicted on March 31, 1995. That's the same day as the murder, and unless the Texas justice system moves with frightening speed (which would call into question the term "justice"), that's probably a mistake in phrasing. Unfortunately I am too tired to figure out a better phrasing, so I'm just dropping this notice. Hppavilion1 (talk) 00:13, 1 April 2021 (UTC)Reply