Template:Did you know nominations/Bald – hairy

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:42, 1 October 2011 (UTC)

Bald – hairy

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Created/expanded by Andrey Kartashov (talk). Nominated by Greyhood (talk) at 23:15, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Hook review
Format Citation Neutrality Interest
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Article review
Length Newness Adequate
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Schwede66 Schwede66 Several One paragraphs are is uncited. Schwede66 Several bare URLs (use cite templates or similar suitable methods; please review WP:LINKROT) Issue has been fixed. Schwede66 Issue has been fixed. Two out of four inline sources appear to be blogs. Schwede66 Schwede66 Schwede66


  • The review is incomplete; please address the issues above. Note that I've dropped the caps in the hook target article. Schwede66 01:50, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
I've used citation templates and provided more refs. GreyHood Talk 19:41, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
Copied here from Schwede's talk page
Thank you for making a review of the Bald – hairy! I've fixed citations and provided more refs (except for the intro, which basically repeats the information from the next cited section, and the last paragraph, which I just translated from Russian Wikipedia and which is factually correct). GreyHood Talk 19:44, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
It's correct that there's not a need for references in the lead, in case the summarise cited content from the body of the article. It is a DYK requirement, however, to have (at least) one reference per paragraph. Please review rule D2. The article is currently an orphan, which does not affect the DYK process, but I suggest you attend to it. Of more concern is that sources two and three appear to be blogs, and if that is correct, they are not regarded as reliable sources. Overall, the article is almost there - not much more to do. Schwede66 20:38, 30 September 2011 (UTC)
I've removed one blog-sourced inline citation, though it is a blog on a widely known Russian news cite. The other source seems to be more of an opinion piece in The Sunday Times than a blog. I've de-orphaned the article and commented the unsourced paragraph. GreyHood Talk 17:38, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
The copyright claim made in connection with the photograph seems dubious. If the uploader is merely the photographer (and not the artist who created the dolls), he/she has no ability to release the copyright in the doll design. The painted dolls are a work of art, and there needs to be a clear copyright release from the artist/creator of the dolls before this image could be used on the Main Page. Cbl62 (talk) 21:01, 1 October 2011 (UTC)
The hook w/o the photo is good to go. I had a look at the photo copyright and agree that it looks somewhat shaky. I note the photo is used with heaps of WP articles (which only means that a lot of articles might lose that photo). Commenting out the unsourced paragraph is a good way to go, but please ensure that it stays this way until it has been on the front page (i.e. please keep an eye on it so that nobody else makes this show again until after its front page appearance). Schwede66 21:30, 1 October 2011 (UTC)