Template:Did you know nominations/Beau Flynn

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The result was: promoted by Panyd^{The muffin is not subtle} 15:06, 10 May 2015 (UTC)

Beau Flynn

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~~... that Beau Flynn and Marley Shelton met on the set of Bubble Boy in 2000, later married in 2001?~~

ALT1:... that Beau Flynn started his own company after leaving producer Tripp Vinson after ten years of working together?
QPQ: Super Mario Bros.: The Lost Levels

Created by Captain Assassin! (talk). Self nominated at 19:02, 13 March 2015 (UTC).

The article was new at the time of nomination. It is long enough with sufficient inline citations. No copyvio. The references are reliable. The article and the hooks are neutral. Both hooks are properly formatted (although I did edit the grammar of both, just a bit below). I also edited the article for grammar and run-on sentences. The ALT hook is cited within the article, but the first hook is not immediately cited. Link/Reference #10 does not lead to the article it references. That is important in terms of citing the first hook. Mchuedem (talk) 20:15, 17 April 2015 (UTC)

ALT2: ... that Beau Flynn and Marley Shelton met on the set of Bubble Boy in 2000, and were married in 2001?
ALT3: ... that, after leaving ten-year producer-partner Tripp Vinson, Beau Flynn started his own company?

Please note that a QPQ review is also required for this nomination to be approved. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:59, 17 April 2015 (UTC)

QPQ is given. --Captain Assassin! ^{«T ♦ C ♦ G»} 22:55, 18 April 2015 (UTC)

None of the articles cited under personal life contain information about when and where the couple met. That needs to be cited properly in order to meet DYK guidelines. Mchuedem (talk) 17:32, 21 April 2015 (UTC)

The link is removed from the web and is not being archived. So ALT3 is best now. --Captain Assassin! ^{«T ♦ C ♦ G»} 17:18, 25 April 2015 (UTC)

new reviewer needed Mchuedem (talk) 17:53, 26 April 2015 (UTC)

How many of us would agree that the hook is interesting enough to attract the readers? OccultZone (Talk • Contributions • Log) 11:41, 29 April 2015 (UTC)

I agree with (what I think is being implied by) Occultzone here, with respect to ALT3. The context is missing from the first fact and starting a company is pretty mundane. Neither instance would make me feel inclined to click. Please submit another hook. Fuebaey (talk) 01:38, 9 May 2015 (UTC)

@Fuebaey: I've cited ALT3. Will you take a look please? --Captain Assassin! ^{«T ♦ C ♦ G»} 03:53, 10 May 2015 (UTC)

You have struck the ALT3. Check again. OccultZone (Talk • Contributions • Log) 08:27, 10 May 2015 (UTC)

@OccultZone: Yes, and I can un-strike that ALT2, sorry it is not ALT3. --Captain Assassin! ^{«T ♦ C ♦ G»} 10:46, 10 May 2015 (UTC)

with ALT2. OccultZone (Talk • Contributions • Log) 13:18, 10 May 2015 (UTC)