Template:Did you know nominations/Matt Brown (American football)
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:46, 4 June 2013 (UTC)
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Matt Brown (American football)
edit- ... that, despite Temple running back Matt Brown only being 5 feet 5 inches (1.65 m) tall, the Tampa Bay Buccaneers just signed him to a three-year NFL contract?"
Created by Marylandstater (talk). Self nominated at 14:55, 31 May 2013 (UTC).
The article looks good at present, but I have a few issues with the hook. There should be links to Tampa Bay Buccaneers, Temple Owls football, running back and possibly National Football League. I would also suggest rewording it to something like: "... that, despite Temple running back Matt Brown only being 5 feet 5 inches (1.65 m) tall, the Tampa Bay Buccaneers just signed him to a three-year NFL contract?" Hope this helps. – PeeJay 13:28, 2 June 2013 (UTC)
- Sorry about the links, I misread some of the rules about what could be and could not be linked in a DYK. The new hook is better. Changes finished, thanks for the input.«Marylandstater» «reply» 00:58, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
Looks good now! I still might suggest adding a link to National Football League, but even without it, you have my support. – PeeJay 01:11, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
Done.«Marylandstater» «reply» 02:48, 3 June 2013 (UTC)
