- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:53, 28 September 2019 (UTC)
Revel Transit
- ... that scooter sharing company Revel dropped 1000 new scooters on New York City streets in the space of one week? Source: "but the...scooters from a startup called Revel kept coming...until 1,000 were parked on city streets within just one week" ([1])
- ALT1:... that a scooter from electric moped sharing startup Revel was involved in a crash just two days after their debut in Washington, D.C.?
Created by Hydromania (talk). Self-nominated at 07:30, 22 September 2019 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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Overall: Some minor corrections needed: (1) COO link needs to be disambiguated. (2) "Compared to" is about things being similar. "Compared with" is about things being different. So you need "compared with." (3) History section - "revel" needs a capital; 3 more "revels" in Mopeds section; 2 more in Safety section.(4) Please confirm that you have achieved fewer than five DYKs, so that I can clear the QPQ requirement. This is a useful article; thank you for creating it. Thank you. Storye book (talk) 12:31, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
- Yes, this is only my second DYK. Not sure why my first doesn't show up, but it's at Template:Did you know nominations/Yifat Bitton should you like to confirm. other minor issues dealt with. Hydromania (talk) 17:18, 22 September 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you. Good to go, now. Storye book (talk) 18:26, 22 September 2019 (UTC)