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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 14:08, 7 March 2015 (UTC)

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Created by AntanO (talk). Self nominated at 09:09, 24 January 2015 (UTC).

Article is new enough and long enough, QPQ is fine. However, the article is written in quite clumsy English throughout. I don't even understand the final part of the hook suggested above. I think the article would need copyediting, and a new hook proposing. Relentlessly (talk) 22:43, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
Relentlessly, As per your suggestion, copy editing and new hook proposing are made. --AntonTalk 18:05, 8 February 2015 (UTC)
I'm sorry, Anton, but I still didn't understand large parts of the article. I've gone through it fairly comprehensively now and rephrased, expanded and added citations as appropriate. But I've probably done too much editing to do the DYK review now. Relentlessly (talk) 22:45, 8 February 2015 (UTC)

@Relentlessly: Thanks for the expansion work. Shall we go for the ALT1? --AntonTalk 04:04, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

@AntanO: I'm very happy with it, but I don't want to approve the nomination because I've now done quite a lot of work to the article. Relentlessly (talk) 21:43, 11 February 2015 (UTC)

Ok, let's wait for someone. --AntonTalk 11:39, 14 February 2015 (UTC)

  • New reviewer needed, since previous reviewer has made significant edits to the article. BlueMoonset (talk) 07:10, 23 February 2015 (UTC)
    • I would go with ALT2:
ALT2:... that the Sirima-Shastri Pact paved the way to Sri Lankan citizenship for 300,000 and repatriation to India for 525,000?
If agreed, then New, length checked, QPQ, hook cited. Zeete (talk) 20:53, 5 March 2015 (UTC)
👍 Like--AntonTalk 03:03, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
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