Template:Did you know nominations/Stephen Gill Spottswood

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The result was: promoted by Fuebaey (talk) 07:40, 22 December 2014 (UTC)

Stephen Gill Spottswood

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E. Franklin Jackson and Stephen G. Spottswood representing the NAACP in a meeting with president John F. Kennedy at the White House

  • ALT1:... that NAACP chairman Stephen Gill Spottswood said Richard Nixon "made it a matter of calculated policy to work against the needs and aspirations of the largest minority of its citizens"?

Created by Rhododendrites (talk). Self nominated at 21:11, 9 November 2014 (UTC).

  • This is only my second stab at DYK, and the first time creating the nomination page myself, so my apologies if I made a mistake. I'm also not sure if there are rules about the political content or tone of these. I chose factual statements referring to what he said rather than e.g. "he criticized Nixon's anti-black policies", of course, but beyond that I wasn't sure. I'm also not sure of the image -- I just uploaded that image to go with the article, but it's probably too confusing to include as it's with a different president from the one the hook talks about (and it's frankly not a great picture of the subject -- just the only one I could find with proper licensing). Anyway, looking forward to feedback. --— Rhododendrites talk \\ 21:16, 9 November 2014 (UTC)

Stephen G. Spottswood when he represented the NAACP in a meeting with President John F. Kennedy at the White House

  • I've uploaded a cropped version of the photo, which may be more suited to this DYK. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 22:56, 10 November 2014 (UTC)
    • Thanks. I had started to do that, but it's just such a bad picture of him (mid-blink, with a half-grin/half-grimmace) I figured the action around him added enough interesting historical context to make it useful. I suppose it is better if we're talking about him rather than about his life['s events], though. --— Rhododendrites talk \\ 01:30, 11 November 2014 (UTC)
It would be a bit confusing to have the hook mention Nixon the but photo show JFK. EEng (talk) 04:02, 13 November 2014 (UTC)
  • New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. The first hook looks good, but the article and sources say "anti-Negro", not "anti-black", so I tweaked the hook. Hook ref verified and cited inline. No QPQ needed for nominator with less than 5 DYKs. I don't think any of the images help the hook. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 21:01, 20 December 2014 (UTC)