Template:Did you know nominations/The Huntsman (film)

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The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 00:26, 18 April 2015 (UTC)
Closed because the copying of 1277 prose characters here from the previous film's "Prequel" section requires a 5x expansion of the current article to 6385 prose characters, clearly not feasible when it has barely started production. Will eventually be eligible again should it become a Good Article.

The Huntsman (film)

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Moved to mainspace by Captain Assassin! (talk). Self-nominated at 03:33, 7 April 2015 (UTC).

New enough (next day) and long enough (2.8k chars). Neutral with no apparent copyvio. Just a couple of niggly points:
  • I'm assuming Stewart refers to Kristen? Might be useful to expand and link that.
  • I can't seem to find where the hook statement is. Some sources mention Stewart isn't returning, but nothing about Snow White not appearing - recasting isn't unheard of.
  • Could you switch tense (present/future to past) when talking about the sequel? Currently, it sounds like a distinct possibility rather than a shelved production.
  • Ref #13 contradicts the sentence it's attached to; 'closing her deal' usually means signing on, not the opposite.
  • And of course, QPQ Cap. Fuebaey (talk) 16:07, 12 April 2015 (UTC)
  • I looked too and don't get what the hook is trying to say. EEng (talk) 02:32, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
  • Actually scratch that, I've found out why the production section feels so disjointed. Paragraph was split from the first film and pasted into draft space without attribution. Credit can be fixed but the article is now short on length. Fuebaey (talk) 23:58, 13 April 2015 (UTC)