- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Victuallers (talk) 22:19, 26 May 2015 (UTC)
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William Honyman
edit... that the Scottish judge William Honyman, Lord Armadale had his brother and two sons elected to Parliament for Orkney?
ALT1:... that the Scottish judge William Honyman, Lord Armadale was the son-in-law of the notorious Lord Braxfield?ALT2:... that the Scottish judge William Honyman, Lord Armadale was one of the investigators before the show trial of the political reformer Thomas Muir of Huntershill?ALT3:... that the wife and four daughters of Scottish judge William Honyman, Lord Armadale all received state pensions?- ALT4:... that the Scottish judge William Honyman, Lord Armadale was one of the initiators of the Highland Clearances?
ALT5:... that the Scottish judge William Honyman, Lord Armadale was singled out for criticism in John Wade's The Black Book: Or, Corruption Unmasked?- Reviewed: Forge Wood
- Comment: Sorry for so many ALT hooks! I can't decide which I prefer.
Created by BrownHairedGirl (talk). Self-nominated at 14:30, 27 April 2015 (UTC).
- Comment 3 or 4 seem best; you might try "...was one of the first landlords to evict tenants in order to create sheep farms". Johnbod (talk) 15:35, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks, Johnbod. That seems like a good idea, but it omits the Highland context. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 08:51, 28 April 2015 (UTC)
- Comment 3 or 4 seem best; you might try "...was one of the first landlords to evict tenants in order to create sheep farms". Johnbod (talk) 15:35, 27 April 2015 (UTC)
Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:34, 26 May 2015 (UTC)
Interesting article (I've been to Armadale). New enough, long enough and well-written. Sourcing is impeccable and the hook fact is cited and reliably sourced. No problems with neutrality. As for hooks, I think ALT4 is the best (and I agree with BHG's comments about leaving it as-is, with the Highland context). I've stricken the rest for clarity's sake. Prioryman (talk) 11:26, 26 May 2015 (UTC)
