Kenirwin
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I spy a llama!
editHope you're well :) Feel free to leave me a note if you have any questions. Whether I'll be able to answer them or not is another story! hugs, -- phoebe 05:06, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
comics
editthere's a comic book author who writes about the history of science who is also a librarian?!? why didn't I know about this earlier? --phoebe 06:38, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
Jim Ottaviani
editKen, This article is superb. Really. It's wonderfully written, well referenced, in proper style (!) and about a compelling subject. You should get a first-article award or something :) The only things I did was link some more of the terms (how much to link is sort of a personal preference; not going overboard is good but linking proper nouns is also good); and I took out the awards information from the bibliography and put it in its own section so the bibliography would be a little cleaner; again, this is kind of a personal-preference call and one could go either way. I also changed the 'other links' header to be 'external links', which is standard terminology. The only thing I'd suggest is if you have specific sections you can footnote from some of your other sources, go ahead and do so, since that is really the kind of thing you have to have the original sources in hand to do. And, of course, if the other books have isbns include those; but I figure you know that already & would if they did. All in all though, this is excellent work. Congratulations. Now you, too, have the ultimate time-wasting hobby! (just keep telling yourself you're making the world a better place) :) --phoebe 07:07, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
Patrick Stewart reference
editIn Patrick Stewart (soldier), the version you mention ([1]) has the inline link, but for some reason I couldn't get it to appear correctly in the "References" section. I wanted just the title to show, not the URL in brackets. That wouldn't work, and I didn't know why, and I lost patience, so I just put the link (appearing correctly) in the "References" section, with no inline link. It's the article by Sean Whaley. The title should make it clear which passage it supports. An inline link would be better, though, if it can be formatted properly.
By the way, I'm pretty sure the symbol does NOT appear on Stewart's tombstone. I think there's a "memorial wall" that has a plaque for each veteran buried in the cemetery. Stewart's space was blank until the recent installation of the plaque with the Wiccan symbol. JamesMLane t c 17:03, 29 November 2006 (UTC)
Dan Stroeh
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Hey back
editHey there! Thanks for the sweet note. I had a lovely weekend: I was in Montreal going to RecentChangesCamp. :) cheers, -- phoebe/(talk) 19:21, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
Ibid.
editHey, Kenllama, I saw on Phoebe's page that you're wondering how to do ibid. on Wikipedia. Short answer: you don't. Wikipedia:Footnotes#Citing_a_reference_more_than_once has more info. I'll bet there's a technological solution waiting to be implemented here, though. It's definitely a nuisance repeating the same book info just for a changed page number. --Ben Kovitz 20:42, 15 November 2007 (UTC)
- aha! Ben beat me to it. Thanks, Ben :) -- phoebe/(talk) 22:14, 2 December 2007 (UTC)
ibids & sigs
editDid I reply to your question already? I don't think I did. There's not a good way to do "ibids" that I know of, unfortunately. References with the ref tag are auto-numbered, so if one gets moved it's not a big deal. This is good for wikitext, but does mean that they aren't tied to each other in a way that would permit ibids. I usually cite out the full reference the first time I use it with the <ref> tag, then in subsequent refs will just use academic style -- <ref> Taylor, p. 3.</ref>
It looks like you already know about <ref name="taylor"> Taylor, big book of wikis</ref> and <ref name="taylor"> formatting, but this is good if you don't care about citing specific pages.
Bah! Something to spec out and/or code for future versions. -- phoebe/(talk) 22:13, 2 December 2007 (UTC)
Hallo from triadruid
editI didn't get a chance to read your email before leaving for work this morning, but C. said you'd sent me something about Wikipedia. Feel free to ask me anything here, or just wait for the inevitable email... -- nae'blis 16:03, 13 December 2007 (UTC)
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Hi. I found User:Kenllama/ERM and Electronic Resource Management System while creating VITAL/VTLS and will be writing articles about the other systems, especially those used in Australian Universities. I'll likely be expanding this mainspace page soon, but thought you would like a chance to merge in your user space info first. Cheers, John Vandenberg (chat) 12:41, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
- Hi John -- thanks for thinking of me with regard to the ERM article. I've never gotten around to working up an article, and am not likely to soon. If there's anything you want to cadge from it, feel free! Thanks! Kenllama/(talk) 01:20, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
- It is curious that you dont think your userpage is "ready", yet the page Electronic Resource Management System is less informative. A few times I have found that has happened to me to. I think the moral of the story is to push pages into mainspace as soon as possible. I've just moved Research Quality Framework into mainspace, despite it being a mess...
- After my post last night, I thought perhaps we could move your page into mainspace as Electronic Resource Management, and then redirect it to Electronic Resource Management System (or tag them both with merge tags, and see what happens), so then your contributions are within the main body of content, and I can then re-use your work without any GFDL concerns. --John Vandenberg (chat) 02:00, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
- John -- I've worked over my page a bit and incorporated it into Electronic Resource Management System. (The whole History section was just copy-and-paste from the DLF report. I've condensed and paraphrased it so it's much shorter now.) The "Features" section is also very-little-changed from the original source. If you want to have a whack at paraphrasing it a bit (or perhaps mixing it up with content from other sources), I'd be grateful. (The original text is not online, unfortunately; that came from a conference presentation I happened to have attended.)
- So far, I'll I've done is tip my content into the article; I've not done anything with the as-yet-vacant Electronic Resource Management page. I'd be glad for you to do whatever you want with the pages at this point! Kenllama/(talk) 15:02, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks a heap. I'll do some heavy revising and expanding over the next few days, and will ping you when I'm done. John Vandenberg (chat) 21:43, 11 November 2008 (UTC)
DYK for Oleg Bogayev
editwhy revert edit to Adrienne Kennedy?
editI reverted because the editor was adding hundreds of external links to the Bomb magazine website which seemed like spamming to me. Feel free to discuss it on the talk page of the article or add the link again if you feel strongly about it. All good wishes . TeapotgeorgeTalk 16:41, 8 January 2009 (UTC)
- YES...Incorporate any useful info into the article and add the interview as a reference rather than as an external link....much better. TeapotgeorgeTalk 20:17, 8 January 2009 (UTC)
Eusebia
editHi Kenllama. Thank you for your message. You will find a good bunch of references on Eusebia on Google Books [2]. For the "Eusebia" used by Ashoka, you can look at Edicts of Ashoka, and the direct content and translation of the edict here: File:AsokaKandahar.jpg. Cheers PHG (talk) 13:18, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
welcome again!
editYay! :) If you want your signature to display with spaces, here's how. Cheers, -- phoebe / (talk to me) 20:15, 5 March 2009 (UTC)
Jim O.
editI don't know. I'll ask next time I see him... Hobit (talk) 17:26, 21 November 2009 (UTC)
Hi :)
editI just wanted to say hi! I'm working on a presentation about librarians & wikipedia, and it made me think of you. Glad to see you're still editing. Cheers, - phoebe / (talk to me) 02:20, 24 February 2011 (UTC)
Thanks for the new ref. It states that Fornes won 13 Obies, but I can only count 9. Can you find any references that clear this up? Thanks! -- Ssilvers (talk) 01:55, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
- I think you're right. The Obie website only lists 9, so I'm going to use that citation instead and revert the number. Thanks Kenirwin/(talk) 12:43, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for clearing that up. If you look at Fornes' article, you can see several places where it says "citation needed". Do you have references for any of that information? If you can add any references in those places, it would be a big help! Thanks very much! -- Ssilvers (talk) 14:20, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
- I picked off one easy one, and I'll see what else I can do. -- Kenirwin
- Good one. Any others you can add would be great! You can automatically sign your talk page messages with four tildes like this: ~~~~ Happy editing! -- Ssilvers (talk) 20:50, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
- I picked off one easy one, and I'll see what else I can do. -- Kenirwin
- Thanks for clearing that up. If you look at Fornes' article, you can see several places where it says "citation needed". Do you have references for any of that information? If you can add any references in those places, it would be a big help! Thanks very much! -- Ssilvers (talk) 14:20, 24 August 2012 (UTC)
class!
editHello! I was just browsing the education pages and saw that you're working on a class this term... hope it's going well :) Aside from WMF stuff, my big project is working on WP:UCD. Got any agriculture articles you need references for? :) -- phoebe / (talk to me) 20:43, 17 October 2013 (UTC)
Women in Red
editHi there, Ken, and welcome to Women in Red. It's good to have another librarian ready to help out. I hope you will also help to reduce the gender gap by creating more women's biographies. Let me know if ever you need any help or experience any problems. You are of course also welcome to contribute to our WiR talk page. Happy editing!--Ipigott (talk) 07:03, 17 April 2018 (UTC)
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DYK nomination of Mary Jobe Akeley
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@Rosguill: -- thanks review the article and for alerting me to this problem; I've updated the article structure to comply with your suggestion. Thanks! Kenirwin/(talk) 21:09, 4 March 2019 (UTC)
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- @MainlyTwelve: Thanks! Kenirwin/(talk) 16:19, 22 March 2019 (UTC) .
Ways to improve Jessamyn Stanley
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DYK nomination of Antonia Franceschi
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Lovely work on The Wood Wife
editAfter reading and enjoying The Wood Wife, I checked its history and saw that all of the best parts were from you. Great job! It's one of my favorite books, and you captured it. Schazjmd (talk) 23:19, 10 April 2019 (UTC) |
- @Schazjmd: - Thanks! I loved the book and came back to the Wikipedia page a while back and realized how much better it could be. I'm glad you appreciated it. Kenirwin/(talk) 02:39, 11 April 2019 (UTC)
DYK for Antonia Franceschi
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Just a quick note to say that a CSD can only be honoured if every revision of the article meets the criteria (eg: imagine somebody walking up to an established article and replacing it with a copyvio). As the page started life as a redirect to Fortune telling fraud, we can always revert to that. I was thinking of sending it to AfD, but I've replaced the article with a disambiguation page, which seems to make the most sense. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 20:32, 25 April 2019 (UTC)
- @Ritchie333: - thanks; I wasn't familiar with that wrinkle, though it makes sense. I agree that a disambiguation page seems like the right answer.Kenirwin/(talk) 20:42, 25 April 2019 (UTC)
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May I suggest a snappier hook for your DYK nomination. "that sculptor Alice King Chatham used plaster casts to design custom-fitted oxygen masks and helmets for Project Mercury astronauts?"
I know she did more than that but mentioning the Mercury mission will draw people in and focus the hook on the most interesting aspect of her career.--- Coffeeandcrumbs 03:15, 12 June 2019 (UTC)
- @Coffeeandcrums -- I think that's a fine idea.
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DYK nomination of Robyn Benincasa
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- @Citrivescence: - Hi, thanks for your feedback. Re-reading the article, I found the History section to be a bit chatty and have tried to make it more encyclopedic in tone. If there are other areas you saw as needing some work on tone, I would welcome some more specific direction. Thanks! -Kenirwin/(talk) 01:21, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Kenirwin: No problem. Thank you for creating the page! Citrivescence (talk) 14:49, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Citrivescence: - did my edits accomplish what you were looking for? If so, one of us can take down the Tone note; if you think there's still more to do, I'd be interested in knowing what in particular it needs. Thanks! - Kenirwin/(talk) 20:11, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Kenirwin: Yes, thanks for making those edits. I have removed the tag. Citrivescence (talk) 13:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Citrivescence: - Thanks! -Kenirwin/(talk) 15:34, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Kenirwin: Yes, thanks for making those edits. I have removed the tag. Citrivescence (talk) 13:55, 3 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Citrivescence: - did my edits accomplish what you were looking for? If so, one of us can take down the Tone note; if you think there's still more to do, I'd be interested in knowing what in particular it needs. Thanks! - Kenirwin/(talk) 20:11, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Kenirwin: No problem. Thank you for creating the page! Citrivescence (talk) 14:49, 1 August 2019 (UTC)
Kenirwin, were you planning on returning to your review here, now that a new hook has been proposed per your request? If you do, please note that a QPQ will be required by the nominator, who has over five prior DYKs. (If you weren't planning on returning, please let me know, and I'll see about finding it a new reviewer.) Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:04, 5 August 2019 (UTC)
- Sure - I can go back to that. -Kenirwin/(talk) 15:21, 5 August 2019 (UTC)
I have created an article about the distinguished modern American playwright, Arlene Hutton, whose work I admire. However, I had tried to include as much information about the subject as I could find, resulting in an article that I myself find to be both too long and overly detailed, with perhaps some subjective language. As a result, the article received several tags from another editor, which I would like to get rid of. Two of these are as follows:
“This article may contain an excessive amount of intricate detail that may interest only a particular audience. (March 2019)”
“This article contains wording that promotes the subject in a subjective manner without imparting real information. (March 2019)”
(Although the tags were put on in March, I have only had time to deal with the situation now.)
I feel that the article needs an objective eye to review and improve it. Since you are a highly experienced editor, and have worked on articles about women playwrights, I thought I might turn to you to examine the article as it is and edit it as you deem fit. If you then feel that the problem has been dealt with, you may remove the tags. Please let me know if you would be willing to do this.
In any case, thank you very much for your time.
Dylanexpert (talk) 21:30, 5 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Dylanexpert: - thanks for thinking of me. i'll have look and see what I can work on in the next day or two. I'm always glad to see improved coverage of women playwrights in Wikipedia! - Kenirwin/(talk) 03:32, 6 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Dylanexpert: - one thing you might consider is creating separate articles for some of the plays and including briefer coverage in the main article. What might seem like excessive detail in an author article might be appropriate in an article on the play itself. Also, the tags at the top of the article suggest you might have been hired to write the article; I don't know if there's any formal method for addressing that, but can you verify that you are writing solely from your passion for the topic and not for pay? If so, it would be good to make such an assertion on the talk page for the article. I'll keep looking at the article over the next few days and let you know if I have other ideas too. -Kenirwin/(talk) 03:44, 6 August 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for agreeing to look over the article. I very much appreciate it. I'll look into ways of dealing with the problem you mention with the third tag and also whether there should be separate articles for individual plays. Again, thank you!
- Dylanexpert (talk) 11:47, 6 August 2019 (UTC)
- Sure thing. Here are a few concrete suggestions:
- * Most of the direct quotes from her ("As she put it...") should go -- those deviate from the encyclopedic style, and they do not contribute much to understanding about her.
- * Some of the sources are not quite up to Wikipedia standards. It's super tempting to use sources like her bio from Ensemble Theatre or an alumni profile from a school, but those are less journalistic than our preferred sort of sources. The bio in particular is likely something that she or her agent wrote, and thus deviates from the WP:V and WP:NPOV. I might be interesting to see what from the article falls away if you disallow those sources or use them very little.
- In general, I think you've got a good article in there, but it will want some tightening up. Good work. -Kenirwin/(talk) 01:45, 7 August 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for the kind words. With your permission, I will place your comments on the article's talk page to justify my changes and allow me to eliminate the two tags. As for her biographical information, I see your point, but on the other hand, it's rather hard to find "journalistic preferred" sources for biographical material on a playwright who is not a celebrity. However, I will remove as much of the other biographical material as I can. Again, thanks for your time and patience.
- Dylanexpert (talk) 14:42, 12 August 2019 (UTC)
- @Dylanexpert: -- I appreciate how hard it is to find good sources for less famous playwrights. Wikipedia's policy take on this is to include less information if you can't get it from more reputable sources. I would suggest thinning the article based on sources that you can feel more confident about, and then linking to the less-reputable sources as "Further reading". I know it hurts to do that, but I think that's what's needful to clear the tags. - Kenirwin/(talk) 19:36, 12 August 2019 (UTC)
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