TheGremlin

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WELCOME TO MY TALK PAGE, TO MAKE IT EASIER TO FOLLOW I MAY WRITE IN CAPS (NOT TO BE INTERPRETED AS yelling) AS FOR A NEW USER WIKIPEDIA'S FORMAT IS A MESS. (some responses may still be lower case)

I AM LOOKING FOR ASSISTANCE CREATING AN ARTICLE, AND HAVE SWITCHED TOPICS TO RESEARCH & START OVER WITH HOWEVER THE REVIEWS HAVE PROVEN OBJECTIVE DUE TO THE LACK OF CLEAR STANDARDS, HOWEVER I CONTINUE TO PICK DIFFERENT TOPICS AND REWRITE BASED ON FEEDBACK, OR LACK OF.

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reply to Kukini HELLO AND THANK YOU, I HAVE ENDEAVORED TO LEARN HOW TO CREATE AN ARTICLE, AND START OVER BY SWITCHING TO A DIFFERENT TOPIC FOR A FRESH START BASED ON EVALUATORS FEEDBACK. MOST RECENTLY THE FEEDBACK WENT FROM "you need more references" TO "the article is over referenced"

AND AFTER REWRITING IN PROSE AS PER REQUEST, I WAS TOLD IT WAS NOT REWRITTEN WHEN IT CLEARLY WAS - SO STARTED OVER ON ANOTHER DIFFERENT TOPIC.

I MADE IT SHORT, SIMPLIFIED, AND USED LESS BUT MORE PROMINENT MEDIA PUBLISHERS - APPARENTLY THIS DOESN'T MEET THE CRITERIA EITHER.

RESTARTED AGAIN FROM SCRATCH ON A DIFFERENT ITEM UNRELATED TO ANY ONE ENTITY. AS SOMEONE VOLUNTEERING MY TIME, WIKIPEDIA PRACTICES ARE QUITE A DETERRENT TO THE ::GROWTH & ADOPTION OF THE PLATFORM. THE UX WOULD HAVE BEEN CONSIDERED DATED YEARS AGO AND STILL HASN'T BEEN MODERNIZED DESPITE THE FUNDING DRIVES.

I CONTINUE RECEIVING SUBJECTIVE FEEDBACK AND AM TOLD THERE SI NO STANDARD IT IS UP TO INTERPRETATION.

THE PLATFORM IS NEITHER INTUITIVE NOR USER FRIENDLY CREATING A BARRIER TO ADDITIONAL CONTRIBUTORS AND WIKIPEDIA'S GROWTH, AS WELL AS AN OPPORTUNITY FOR A COMPETITOR. WIKIPEDIA COULD A|B TEST INTUITIVE USER FRIENDLY UX TO INCREASE CONTRIBUTIONS & TRAFFIC.

I'VE READ THE POOR REPUTATION ONLINE MODERATORS HAVE DEVELOPED - SPECIFICALLY THEY ARE OFTEN REFERRED TO AS CONDESCENDING TO NEWBIES - HOWEVER CONTRARY TO THIS SOME HAVE BEEN HELPFUL TO ME

YOUR INTRO ABOVE WAS HELPFUL IN GETTING STARTED, THANK YOU.

IN THE UNFORTUNATE ABSENCE OF AN INTUITIVE UX IT IS A NECESSARY BAND-AID THAT SLOWS WIKIPEDIA DOWN, AND THERE IS TREMENDOUS UNTAPPED POTENTIAL IF THIS IS ADDRESSED.

iwanturCAT (talk) 05:47, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: CoolIT Systems (March 14)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:  The comment they left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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SwisterTwister talk 04:22, 14 March 2016 (UTC)

YOU WILL SEE IN THE RESPONSE BELOW TwistedSister DID NOT REPLY AS THEY WERE REPORTED BLOCKED.

Your draft article, Draft:CoolIT Systems

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Onel5969 ^{TT me} 17:50, 28 November 2016 (UTC)

YOU WILL SEE IN THE RESPONSE BELOW TwistedSister DID NOT REPLY AS THEY WERE REPORTED BLOCKED.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Academy of Financial Divorce Specialists (AFDS) (April 1)

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CommanderWaterford (talk) 20:59, 1 April 2021 (UTC)

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Hi CommanderWaterford,

PLEASE LET ME KNOW THE NUMBER OF UNRELATED MAINSTREAM SOURCES REQUIRED. ALSO, THESE TALK PAGES ARE QUITE COMPLICATED COMPARED TO EVERY OTHER FORUM AND CHAT I'VE EVER USED, AND THE 'HOW TO' INSTRUCTIONS ARE EVEN MORE CONFUSING; I CANNOT EVEN SAY FOR SURE I'VE FOUND THEM DESPITE A LOT OF DIGGING AROUND. THANK YOU

iwanturCAT (talk) 17:23, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

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THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK, I WILL SELECT A DIFFERENT TOPIC TO RESEARCH AND ATTEMPT AN ARTICLE ON.

Your submission at Articles for creation: Academy of Financial Divorce Specialists (AFDS) (April 2)

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LJF2019 ^talk 13:56, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

AS ABOVE, I WILL SELECT A DIFFERENT TOPIC AND RESEARCH. THE DESIGNATION HAS BEEN AROUND LONGER THAN THE GOVERNING BODY AND HAS BEEN COVERED REGULARLY IN THE MEDIA PERHAPS A BETTER CHOICE.

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Getting help

Your posts on User talk:SwisterTwister will likely not receive a response because User:SwisterTwister has been blocked from Wikipedia. I think a good place to ask your question would be at WP:AFCHELP. CapitalSasha ~ talk 23:42, 4 April 2021 (UTC)

THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK

Your submission at Articles for creation: CoolIT Systems (May 24)

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Pbrks (talk) 21:09, 24 May 2021 (UTC)

I SPECIFICALLY WROTE LIKE AN ENCYCLOPEDIA, USING CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER AND TRADITIONAL ENCYCLOPEDIA EXAMPLE TO FOLLOW. SPECIFICS WOULD HELP, WILL REWRITE, THANK YOU

Your submission at Articles for creation: CoolIT Systems (June 7)

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Anarchyte (talk) 12:56, 7 June 2021 (UTC)

Anarchyte AS PER YOUR RECOMMENDATION I HAVE COMPLETELY REWRITTEN, ADDED MORE NOTABLE REFERENCES WHERE OTHERS SAID IT LACKED, AND RESUBMITTED. EVALUATORS SAID IT IS THE SAME AS THE PREVIOUS WHICH IS NOT THE CASE, I REWROTE IT, REMOVED CONTENT, REWORDED AND REARRANGED AS PER PROSE EXAMPLES ANOTHER EVALUATOR WAS KIND ENOUGH TO SUGGEST. I WAS ALSO TOLD THE NEW VERSION IS "OVER REFERENCED"iwanturCAT (talk) 04:38, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: CoolIT Systems (June 16)

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– robertsky (talk) 00:52, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

EXAMPLE OF WHERE SOME DETAILS WOULD BE HELPFUL BUT WERE NOT PROVIDED. I CONTINUE READING UP AND REWRITING.

Email

I see that you sent me an email but I did not know what it was about. I'm guessing we interacted on some article that you did not identify the article don't have any recollection. Please provides more details and I will try to respond.--S Philbrick(Talk) 14:54, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Please stop emailing me. You can discuss it here, although if it is about CoolIT Systems, I'm not particularly interested.--S Philbrick(Talk) 00:46, 19 June 2021 (UTC)

Sphilbrick I WOULD LOVE TO IF IT WAS EASY TO DO SO, IT SHOULD BE AS EASY & INTUITIVE AS 'REPLY' ON A BASIC FORUM, NOT REQUIRING A MANUAL. I'VE FIGURED OUT ABOUT HALF THE HOW TO USE TALK PAGES, HOPEFULLY WIKIPEDIA LEARNS THE VALUE OF SIMPLICITY SO CONTRIBUTORS TIME DOES NOT CONTINUE GETTING WASTED ON ANSWERING QUESTIONS HOW TO DO THINGS THAT COULD BE SELF EXPLANATORY. THANK YOU FOR REPLYING, THE FEEDBACK HAS BEEN HELPFUL IN CONFIRMING THE MESSAGE WAS SENT PROPERLY AND FURTHER FIGURING OUT HOW THE NAVIGATE THE WIKIPEDIA --iwanturCAT (talk) 19:41, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

June 2021

Please refrain from making unconstructive edits to Wikipedia, as you did at Draft:CoolIT Systems. Your edits appear to be disruptive and have been or will be reverted.

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Please ensure you are familiar with Wikipedia's policies and guidelines, and please do not continue to make edits that appear disruptive. Continued disruptive editing may result in loss of editing privileges. Please stop repeatedly submitting your draft without fixing the issues for which it is being declined - this is disruptive  A S U K I T E  19:43, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

Content such as "Shit blew up in 2010 when the CoolIT shipments jumped Lebron style from..." must be removed. And the draft is WAY over-referenced. A simple factual statement such as "The OSC Pitzer Cluster followed..." doe not need six references. David notMD (talk) 20:48, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

reply to David notMD Asukite

THANK YOU FOR YOUR FEEDBACK, I DID NOT CONSIDER IT A DISPUTE HOWEVER PERHAPS I SHOULD. I'M JUST FOLLOWING THE CURRENTLY PUBLISHED EXAMPLES THAT WOULD HAVE HAD TO MEET YOUR CRITERIA TO BE PUBLISHED, AND HAVE STARTED REFERENCING MORE THAN ONE AS SOMEONE MENTIONED, AS WELL AS MAKING CHANGES AS FEEDBACK IS PROVIDED. THAT BEING SAID i WILL CONSIDER YOUR IDEA OF IT BEING A DISPUTE, BUT I'M REALLY JUST TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHAT THE STANDARD IS BASED ON WHAT IS PUBLISHED AND FEEDBACK. I'VE COMPLETELY REWRITTEN THIS ARTICLE AFTER SEVERAL CHANGES.

SOME THINGS THAT WOULD MAKE THIS EASIER:

A SIMPLE REPLY OPTION SIMILAR TO A FORUM OR CHAT TO DISCUSS WITH THOSE SUBJECTIVELY EVALUATING TO BETTER UNDERSTAND WHAT THEY WANT TO SEE

A STANDARD - AFTER READING THE DISCLOSURES, COI, HOW TO'S AND SEVERAL DIFFERENT DOCUMENTS, I'VE ATTEMPTED A FEW DIFFERENT ARTICLES TO LEARN HOW TO GET ONE PUBLISHED. EACH TIME THERE ARE PROBLEMS, AND ONE OF THE EVALUATORS EXPLAINED THE SUBJECTIVENESS THAT NEEDS TO BE NAVIGATED HERE, AND MANY OF THE *CURRENT ARTICLES DO NO MEET WIKIPEDIA CRITERIA, SOME WHICH I FLAGGED IF IDENTIFIED. A STANDARD WOULD HELP BOTH WRITERS AND EVALUATORS, AND FREE UP EVALUATORS TIME.

I AGREE IT IS OVER REFERENCED, HOWEVER I WAS PREVIOUSLY TOLD ALTHOUGH MY SOURCES WERE NOTABLE I NEEDED MORE OF THEM, SO I ADDED MORE NOTABLE MEDIA SOURCES AS THE ONES I HAD APPARENTLY WERE NOT ENOUGH. WHAT IS THE STANDARD REQUIREMENT FOR # OF RESOURCES AND WHERE DOES ONE FIND THIS? SOME ARTICLES HAVE 1 REFERENCE FOR A POINT, OTHERS HAVE 2 OR 3.

I ALSO REMOVED THE 'disruptive' LINE AND REPLACED TO KEEP THE PEACE.

AfC notification: Draft:CoolIT Systems has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:CoolIT Systems. Thanks!  A S U K I T E  19:46, 24 June 2021 (UTC)

reply to Asukite HI, WHEN I LOOK FOR IT I DO NOT SEE IT. I SEARCH FOR ANYTHING FROM ASUKITE AND NOTHING SHOWS UP. PLEASE ADVISE, THANK YOU iwanturCAT (talk) 05:56, 27 August 2021 (UTC)

Paid editing

Hello TheGremlin. The nature of your edits gives the impression you have an undisclosed financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. Paid advocacy is a category of conflict of interest (COI) editing that involves being compensated by a person, group, company or organization to use Wikipedia to promote their interests. Undisclosed paid advocacy is prohibited by our policies on neutral point of view and what Wikipedia is not, and is an especially serious type of COI; the Wikimedia Foundation regards it as a "black hat" practice akin to black-hat search-engine optimization.

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reply toTheroadislong I'M NOT BEING PAID AS PER YOUR 'IMPRESSION', AND HAVE REWRITTEN THE ARTICLE IN PROSE BASED ON WIKIPEDIA'S SUGGESTIONS FROM Anarchyte'S WHICH YOU SEE ABOVE.

A CLEARER STANDARD WOULD BE USEFUL FOR USERS TO PRODUCE SOMETHING YOU DON'T MISINTERPRET - AS WELL AS AN EASIER FEEDBACK MECHANISM. PLEASE BE MORE SPECIFIC ON WHAT IS GIVING YOU THE WRONG IMPRESSION SO I CAN REWRITE.

I HESITATE TO DUMB IT DOWN AND RECEIVE THE RESPONSE IT LACKS CONTENT OF REFERENCES AGAIN.iwanturCAT (talk) 18:04, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Chartered Financial Divorce Specialist (July 16)

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DoubleGrazing (talk) 09:03, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

reply to DoubleGrazing IF THESE MEDIA SOURCES ARE NOT ENOUGH, CONSIDERING THEY SURPASS MANY ALREADY APPROVED ARTICLES - AS WIKIPEDIA SAID NOT TO BASE IT ON JUST ONE - HOW ARE YOU CLEANING UP THE MANY WIKIPEDIA ARTICLES CURRENTLY POSTED THAT FAIL TO MEET WIKIPEDIA CRITERIA? - ESPECIALLY GIVEN THE EXCESS FUNDING AVAILABLE FROM ANNUAL ADVERTISEMENTS ON THE SITE HEADER. iwanturCAT (talk) 17:55, 26 August 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Coolit Systems (November 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 20:16, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

--[User:Timtrent] I HAVE REMOVED THE QUESTION AS SUGGESTED AND RESUBMITTED, THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK! Victor (talk) 23:48, 17 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: CFDS (November 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Nomadicghumakkad was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Nomadicghumakkad (talk) 02:21, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Nomadicghumakkad (talk)

@Nomadicghumakkad: YOU STATE THE FOLLOWING COVERAGE AS FAR BACK AS 2004 ARE NOT RELIABLE SOURCES:

[WALL STREET JOURNAL] - ONE OF THE LARGEST JOURNALS IN THE USA [AS A NEWSPAPER OF RECORD]

INVESTMENT EXECUTIVE - CANADA'S NATIONAL NEWSPAPER FOR FINANCIAL PROFESSIONALS

IIROC - THE INVESTMENT INDUSTRY REGULATORY ORGANIZATION OF CANADA

ADVISOR MAGAZINE - A LEADING SOURCE FOR FINANCIAL ADVISOR NEWS

THE TORONTO STAR - CANADA'S LARGEST ONLINE NEWS SITE

MORNINGSTAR

FINANCIAL POST [[1]] - *NOTE WIKIPEDIA ONLY APPROVED THIS FINANCIAL POST ARTICLE BASED ON 6 REFERENCES ALL FROM A SINGLE SOURCE 'THE GLOBE AND MAIL' WHICH IS AGAINST ITS GUIDELINES FOR 'MULTIPLE SOURCES', YET YOU'VE REJECTED THIS ARTICLE WITH 9 DIFFERENT RELIABLE REFERENCES. "The submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources." - WIKIPEDIA NEEDS TO FOLLOW ITS OWN RULES, AND APPROVALS SHOULD BE BASED ON THEM. PLEASE FOLLOW THE STANDARD.

MACLEAN'S MAGAZINE [[2]]

BLOOMBERG

Nomadicghumakkad (talk) PLEASE EXPLAIN HOW THE WALL STREET JOURNAL, NATIONAL LEVEL NEWSPAPERS & JOURNALS LIKE INVESTMENT EXECUTIVE & ADVISOR MAGAZINE, MAJOR METROPOLITAN MEDIA OUTLETS LIKE THE TORONTO STAR AND THE FINANCIAL POST, AS WELL AS MORNINGSTAR, MACLEAN'S MAGAZINE AND BLOOMBERG ARE NOT RELIABLE SOURCES - AND WHY THESE ARE ACCEPTABLE THROUGHOUT WIKIPEDIA ELSEWHERE.

THANK YOU

Victor (talk) 21:05, 19 November 2021 (UTC)

Additional magazine publication article references added today. Victor (talk) 00:01, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Coolit Systems (November 20)

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S0091 (talk) 19:03, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

reply S0091 (talk) THANK YOU FOR THE FEEDBACK, THIS WILL HELP ME WITH THE DRAFT; I HAVE RESTARTED THIS ARTICLE TO REBUILD FROM SCRATCH BASED ON FEEDBACK RECEIVED ON WHAT WIKIPEDIA NEEDS, AS THE CRITERIA KEEP CHANGING.

PREVIOUSLY I WAS TOLD THIS ARTICLE WAS UNDER REFERENCED. I CONTINUED ADDING REFERENCES AND WAS THEN TOLD IT WAS 'OVER REFERENCED.' SO FIRST, PLEASE LET ME KNOW HOW MANY YOU WOULD LIKE, AND LET ME KNOW HOW MANY 'OVER REFERENCED' IS SO I CAN STAY UNDER THE LIMIT. THE LIST OF ARTICLES COVER ITS 20 YEAR HISTORY.

REGARDING THE REQUIREMENT FOR BEING IN PUBLISHED, RELIABLE, SECONDARY SOURCES INDEPENDENT OF THE SUBJECT, I STARTED WITH 7 REFERENCES THAT MEET THIS CRITERIA WHICH IS MORE THAN, FOR EXAMPLE, THE FINANCIAL POST WHICH ONLY REFERENCES THE GLOBE AND MAIL YET LIKE MANY UNDER REFERENCED ARTICLES WAS APPROVED.

I SELECTED THE FOLLOWING:

CANADIAN BUSINESS MAGAZINE - THE LONGEST-PUBLISING BUSINESS MAGAZINE BASED IN THE METROPOLIS TORONTO, FOUNDED IN 1927.

GARTNER - RESEARCH & CONSULTING COMPANY RECOGNIZED AROUND THE WORLD

HPCWIRE - THE #1 NEWS & INFORMATION RESOURCE COVERING THE FASTEST COMPUTERS IN THE WORLD AND THE PEOPLE WHO RUN THEM. DATING BACK TO 1987 HAS MORE THAN 30 YEARS OF WORLD CLASS EDITORIAL AND JOURNALISM

BUSINESS INSIDER - MAJOR NORTH AMERICAN FINANCIAL & BUSINESS NEWS MEDIA OUTLET FOUNDED IN 2007, AVERAGING 375 MILLION MONTHLY WEBSITE VISITORS

CALGARY HERALD - DAILY NEWSPAPER SERVING ONE OF THE LARGEST METRO CITIES IN CANADA WHOSE PUBLICATION STARTED IN 1883

GLOBE AND MAIL

-(THIS WAS THE ONLY MEDIA GIANT USED TO APPROVE THE FINANCIAL POST ARTICLE, ALL REFERENCES WERE ONLY FROM ONE SOURCE WHICH DOES NOT QUALIFY ACCORDING TO WIKIPEDIA STANDARDS AND WAS APPROVED REGARDLESS. I HAVE AN ADDITION 6 REFERENCES IN THE ARTICLE BEYOND THIS REDUCED FROM OVER 100. REGARDING IT'S CREDIBILITY:

- THE GLOBE IS CANADIAN NEWSPAPER PRINTED IN 5 CITIES ACROSS CANADA WITH WEEKLY READERSHIP OF APPROXIMATELY 2 MILLION IN 2015, IT IS THE NATIONS MOST WIDELY READ NEWSPAPER

WAIT, I MISSED THE 7TH REFERENCE IN EXTERNAL LINKS:

BUSINESS IN CALGARY MAGAZINE - 30 YEAR PUBLICATION WITH DISTRIBUTION TO 28,200 BUSINESSES AND SURROUNDING AREAS OUTSIDE OF THE METRO AREA

• SO THE ONLY ITEM MISSING BASED ON YOUR FEEDBACK IS ADDITIONAL REFERENCES, HOW MANY OF WHICH ARE NOT MENTIONED, PLEASE LET ME KNOW HOW MANY, OR WOULD AN ADDITIONAL 5 OR 10 DO.

THANK YOU KINDLY Victor (talk) 03:34, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

reply updateS0091 (talk) I'VE ADDED MORE REFERENCES HOWEVER THE BOTTOM OF THE PAGE FORMAT HAS CHANGED AND I'M CONCERNED I WILL RECEIVE A DECLINE BASED ON 'OVER REFERENCED' SO I'M GOING TO RESUBMIT AND WAIT FOR ADDITIONAL FEEDBACK. Victor (talk) 05:04, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Hi Gremlin, it is not solely about the number of references but also the quality of the source and the depth of coverage. For example, a press release regardless of the source that publishes it does not count toward notability because it is not independent. Same goes for interviews, standard notices/announcements (like funding) or anything the company says about itself so you can 100 of those it will be meaningless, even if they are published by a reliable source. Also, you could have a reliable source with independent coverage but its not in-depth. You need all three: reliable, independent and in-depth. Three references that meet all three criteria is enough to establish notability. If you have not already, please do read the the notability guidelines for companies as it goes into detail with some great examples about the type of sources/coverage needed. In addition to notability, the article needs to be written in a neutral manner (see WP:NPOV and WP:WTW) and ideally following general formatting and standards. Also, please do not use all caps when communicating as it is interpreted as yelling (see WP:SHOUT). I do not think that is truly your intent. S0091 (talk) 18:30, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

reply updateS0091 (talk)Sweet, thank you for the details this helps explain better than the wikipedia pages I've read previously. I've made a point of trying to screen out press releases for this draft for that reason, so there should not be any, satisfying the independent source criteria, and only used reliable sources. I'll go through the the in-depth description again. I only select topics that are notable wikipedia lacks coverage on, and then pick which references are applicable. Sometimes the media is behind on things, however this does not mean wikipedia needs to lag. I would prefer to not use all caps and considered that, however wikipedia's format is so poor it was one of few options to make it clearer for me to follow the talk page.

This would not be necessary if wikipedia reallocated the abundance of cash reserves generated from wikipedia’s annual advertisements (falsifying their financial situation to deceive people into becoming donors) to a simple, user friendly format - which would also unload the reviewers work load. Victor (talk) 20:06, 22 November 2021 (UTC)

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Thank you for providing feedback as to how to improve the article. Although I shortened and rewrote the article, I see what you were referring to, therefore I have completely rewritten the article again and submitted for review. Additional feedback welcome. Victor (talk) 19:20, 4 February 2023 (UTC)

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Article has been fully rewritten and reworded to be encyclopedic and original. Additional feedback welcome, thank you. Victor (talk) 19:23, 4 February 2023 (UTC)

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