Talk:Jug Bennett

Latest comment: 20 days ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk18:18, 8 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

5x expanded by Gonzo fan2007 (talk). Self-nominated at 15:45, 7 August 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Jug Bennett; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Bennett meets all the criteria. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:37, 7 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • For Zuver:
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Zuver meets all the criteria (albeit barely, as the length is only a couple of letters over the limit - expansion would be nice but is not required). BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:24, 7 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • For Sturgeon:
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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Overall:   Sturgeon meets all the criteria. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:43, 7 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • For Englemann:
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Englemann meets all the criteria (just passes the length requirement - though further expansion is not required, I see a few additional details you might want to add from the German Wikipedia of all places, including that he narrowly missed qualifying for the 1928 Olympics and was inducted into the South Dakota Hall of Fame). BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:43, 7 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • For Schammel:
General: Article is new enough and long enough
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QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Schammel meets all the criteria. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:56, 7 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • For Hinte:
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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Overall:   Hinte meets all the criteria. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:56, 7 August 2023 (UTC)Reply

  • For Butler:
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Butler meets all the criteria (albeit barely, being seven characters over the limit). BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:56, 7 August 2023 (UTC)Reply


GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Jug Bennett/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 22:50, 19 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 22:38, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply


I'll give this a review, these smaller football guys have waited long enough. Wizardman 22:38, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Overall I just have two issues with the article and they're more points of clarification. First, we have "He was given the nickname "Jug"." but no further context. Do we know when, who, or why he was nicknamed such? Given that it was in enough sources to be notable I find it hard to believe there's nothing on that. Second, I'm curious of the chronology with the draft and the military service. Was he already in the military when he was drafted, or did he opt to do so later on? Given 1943 was square in the middle of athletes getting picked up more and more quickly for military service, it feels like clarifying that would be important. The sources I peeked at for this seem to say the latter, as I found a May 1943 article noting him joining the army, but you may want to double check that.

That's really all I found to add, since he went to a small college and played sparingly in the pros, that combined with the military service in between makes me not surprised that there's scant information on him, so I'm ok with passing once the above is addressed. Wizardman 22:58, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

As an aside I did check all the sources as well and all are good with no copyright issues. I did have a mild chuckle on one that said he was picked up in the 1942 NFL Draft which is very much incorrect. Wizardman 23:00, 21 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Wizardman, I checked the sources again and cannot find the answer on his nickname. I stated that sentence about his nickname merely as a statement of fact, based on his real name being Earl but his common name being Jug. Can you provide me the May 1943 article you are referencing? I will search, but if you have it, please do share. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:13, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
I just realized I have to reapply for Newspapers.com access. If you have a clipped article you can share, please send my way. Otherwise I will have to wait until I am approved. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:16, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Same, I reapplied so I'll have to wait until it goes through before I can find it again. Wizardman 14:34, 24 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Got an approval email so I should be able to find/clip the appropriate articles soon. Wizardman 19:12, 29 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Mine got sent to Newspapers.com. Still waiting for approval. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:50, 1 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
Wizardman, just a courtesy ping. My app has sent to them, but hasn't been approved. If you are able to clip the article on his draft and military service, I am happy to revise and clarify. Regarding his nickname, I don't see any reasoning behind it, just clarifying that it is his nickname per the sources that have it versus sources that have his legal name. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:27, 3 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Now that I finally got approval, here's the clip in question: https://www.newspapers.com/article/lubbock-morning-avalanche-ec-jug-ben/156967658/ It's only a small blurb that might not add as much as I originally thought but at least it's something and fine tunes the dates a bit. Wizardman 00:34, 12 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

Wizardman, I have added it to the article. Let me know if there is anything else I can do. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:25, 12 October 2024 (UTC)Reply
Looks good. Since I genuinely think there's really nothing further that can be improved on this, I'm willing to pass it as a GA. Wizardman 00:07, 13 October 2024 (UTC)Reply