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edit- "Chopra starred in as many as six films in 2005...". Why is "as many as" in there? Why wouldn't we just say she starred in six films?
- "Although, her performance in Yakeen received rave reviews" is a sentence fragment, and would make more sense if it was merged with the previous sentence.
- "earning 1.17 billion worldwide and attained a blockbuster status." Remove "a", and possibly change "attained" to "attaining".
- "The film emerged as the second-highest-grossing film of the year in Inda." The use of "film" twice is a redundancy, and it doesn't look like the second one is needed at all.
- "grossing over 1.05 billion and emerged as one of the highest grossing film of the year in India." "film" → "films". Also, "emerged" should probably be "emerging" instead.
- Not sure if the second word of "Don Series" should be capitalized like it is now.
- "All the three films (one of highest grossing films of the year)...". Remove first "the" and add one after the first "of"? And is it one or three films? This isn't that clear.
- The Budget and Box office columns aren't sorting properly. The billion-dollar items are sorting before the million-dollar items, which shouldn't be the case.
- I believe the film WikiProject has a guideline that, for future films, only ones that have started filming should be included in filmographies. I imagine that the same should apply here. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:29, 16 July 2013 (UTC)
Done: Correct everything. Also, her future films which are listed are started. Some are lined up for release this year, some are in filming stage and one in pre-production. Thanks.—Prashant 03:36, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
I'm rather concerned with the neutrality and that every film mentioned was "critically acclaimed". Tibetan Prayer ᧾ 20:14, 17 July 2013 (UTC)
Not every films of her is mentioned "critically acclaimed". There are several others which are mentioned as critically unsuccessful.—Prashant 06:54, 18 July 2013 (UTC)
This is an article that is a FILMography - a list of FILMS. The inclusion of not yet FILMS is a violation of WP:CRYSTAL and giving WP:UNDUE weight to the non-films compared to actual FILMS. Wikipedia is WP:NOTADVERT to assist in the promotion of these products. As works in progress the appropriate coverage is as works in progress with appropriate context in the main Priyanka Chopra article.-- TRPoD aka The Red Pen of Doom 12:11, 9 January 2014 (UTC)
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