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Your submission at Articles for creation: D-Metal Stars (October 16)

Latest comment: 8 years ago2 comments1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

See referencing for beginners for how to format the references. The references are not in the form of footnotes.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 14:37, 16 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

Hello! Jbrunoii, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 14:37, 16 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:D-Metal Stars. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 15:32, 20 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:D-Metal Stars. Thanks! Robert McClenon (talk) 12:56, 21 October 2016 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: D-Metal Stars (November 4)

Latest comment: 8 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by MatthewVanitas was:

Have you read the guideline WP:Notability (music) for what to improve? We need to see a body of serious media coverage and commentary on this project. Also, instead of just placing your sources at the end, please code them as footnotes; see WP:REFB.

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MatthewVanitas (talk) 23:48, 4 November 2016 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: D-Metal Stars (December 11)

Latest comment: 7 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Missvain was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Missvain (talk) 07:32, 11 December 2016 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: D-Metal Stars (December 24)

Latest comment: 7 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

These links aren't the major independent news we need for our notability policies.

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SwisterTwister talk 17:43, 24 December 2016 (UTC)Reply

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:D-Metal Stars. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 16:44, 1 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

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I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:D-Metal Stars. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 17:25, 13 April 2017 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: D-Metal Stars (May 6)

Latest comment: 7 years ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

I think it's TOOSOON for this group. All of the coverage focuses on their album release, which doesn't indicate that they've had any lasting impact. Additionally, most of the relevant content is already mentioned in Animetal USA, so until such time as they either release a new album or have significant coverage outside of Metal Disney I think that's where it will stay.

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Primefac (talk) 16:31, 6 May 2017 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Bruno - Guitarist (January 31)

Latest comment: 9 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Noahfgodard were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The proposed article does not have sufficient content to require an article of its own, but it could be merged into the existing article at Obsession (band). Since anyone can edit Wikipedia, you are welcome to add that information yourself. Thank you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Noahfgodard (talk) 22:05, 31 January 2024 (UTC)Reply

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Bruno (musician) (February 6)

Latest comment: 9 months ago1 comment1 person in discussion

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by CoconutOctopus was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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CoconutOctopus talk 18:45, 6 February 2024 (UTC)Reply

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