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01:34:47, 19 June 2019 review of submission by Darenreif01

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SimplePractice (SP) is the leading practice management software for behavioral and mental health providers in the US. They have over 50K users and according to Capterra, an online peer review site, it is the Most Popular Mental Health Software. The company, headquarter in Los Angeles, now has over 100 employees and serves customers in all 50 states. Darenreif01 (talk) 01:34, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  On hold pending paid editing disclosure, see User talk:Darenreif01#Declare any connection. --Worldbruce (talk) 04:59, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

04:41:16, 19 June 2019 review of submission by Ourworldsmile1

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Can you give me a chance to Edit It, and also I was Show the Page that I copy the Biography of Jack Bin Ourworldsmile1 (talk) 04:41, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Ourworldsmile1: You can edit and resubmit, but it is just going to be rejected again unless there are significant advancements in A-K-A Jack Bin's career that allow them to meet the requirements listed at WP:NMUSICIAN. No amount of editing can overcome a lack of notability. --Ahecht (TALK
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Request on 04:54:12, 19 June 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Grayghostta

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Grayghostta (talk) 04:54, 19 June 2019 (UTC) HI,[reply]

I'm GrayghostTA and submitted an article. I don't know what the lead name on my article is Wondering why it was rejected, assuming it was because I have not edited enough?

Be interested in your comments.

Thanks, JRH

Hi Grayghostta, your submission was rejected because there doesn't appear to be any indication that this specific car is notable enough to be included on Wikipedia. In general, subjects are notable when there is significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. It's often recommended that you shoot for at least three references when writing an article, which you do not currently have. Hope this helps. Nolelover (talk) 07:24, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

12:07:28, 19 June 2019 review of submission by Tom.fenwicke120

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Tom.fenwicke120 (talk) 12:07, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Tom.fenwicke120: Please read the comment left by User:Whispering on your draft. You seem to have written an "advice" article, which is not what Wikipedia is for (especially when it comes to pages that might be interpreted as medical advice). --Ahecht (TALK
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Request on 13:06:47, 19 June 2019 for assistance on AfC submission by Texacomexico

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I’m an artist I want to make an autobiography about myself

Texacomexico (talk) 13:06, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Texacomexico: Creating an autobiography on Wikipedia is strongly discouraged – please see our guideline on writing autobiographies. If you create such an article, it may be deleted. If what you have done in life is genuinely notable and can be verified according to our policy for articles about living people, someone else will probably create an article about you sooner or later (see Wikipedians with articles). Please understand that this is an encyclopedia and not a personal web space or social networking site. Thank you. --Ahecht (TALK
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13:20:26, 19 June 2019 review of draft by Rayne Supple

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I received a message that this submission was autobiographical. It is not. It is for a professional baseball player. I am his agent. I didn't think such submissions violated your terms as I see a similar entry for 'Griffin Roberts' another professional baseball player. Thank you for you attention to this matter. Rayne Supple (talk) 13:20, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Rayne Supple: The editor that left that notice assumed that it was an autobiography because your username matched the article title. Please see the username policy at Wikipedia:Username policy, which states that you should not edit under a name that is likely to imply that you are (or are related to) a specific, identifiable person, unless it is your real name. You can request a username change by following the instructions at Wikipedia:Changing username, but please keep in mind the sections of the Username policy WP:PROMONAME and WP:ISU. --Ahecht (TALK
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13:20:26, 19 June 2019 review of draft by Jarvis crypter

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Hello,

as the revision/review of this article takes much longer than expected, I would like to ask if it is possible to do changes to this article while it is being reviewed? requesting for updates that can enhance the article

Appreciate your time! User:Jarvis crypter (talk) 19 June 2019 (UTC)

Jarvis crypter yes, absolutely. You can continue to make any edits and improvements to the article, and the reviewer will review the article at whatever stage it is at. Nolelover (talk) 15:08, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Nolelover could you please review the article and let me know your view of it?

Thanks User:Jarvis crypter

Jarvis crypter, I'm no expert but right now I'd think that you might still need one or two more sources about Informatics. The fact that it operates J-Gate helps, but are there any other sources discussing the importance or the company in that industry? Note that you can use non-english sources as long as they are still reliable and independent. Nolelover (talk) 19:05, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

15:16:15, 19 June 2019 review of submission by Rayne Supple

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Thank you for the clarifications regarding submissions for baseball players. Makes sense. I am puzzled by the entry 'Griffin Roberts' american baseball player. None of your requirements are met in this entry. Maybe I missed something.

Rayne Supple (talk) 15:16, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

See other crap exists. Theroadislong (talk) 15:48, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

15:32:22, 19 June 2019 review of submission by Lil Young Rapper

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Lil Young Rapper (talk) 15:32, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Lil Young Rapper: Lanze doesn't appear to meet the requirements of WP:NMUSICIAN, which describes which musicians get to have articles on Wikipedia. Feel free to resubmit your draft once Lanze's career has advanced to the point that you can demonstrate that they meet those standards using citations to significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject of the article. --Ahecht (TALK
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18:11:21, 19 June 2019 review of submission by 148.75.165.78

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Found and added additional published, reliable, secondary source references that are independent of the subject that shows significant coverage about the subject

148.75.165.78 (talk) 18:11, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

18:47:39, 19 June 2019 review of submission by Tomusange

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Tomusange (talk) 18:47, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Tomusange: Kiirya Beats doesn't appear to meet the requirements of WP:NMUSICIAN, which describes which musicians get to have articles on Wikipedia. Feel free to resubmit your draft once their career has advanced to the point that you can demonstrate that they meet those standards using citations to significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject of the article. --Ahecht (TALK
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20:52:22, 19 June 2019 review of submission by Cswendeman

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Prosecutor Gramiccioni has been an integral part of New Jersey law enforcement for over 20 years now. He has an impressive resume as a member of the military, the US Attorney's Office in NJ, working with now former Governor Christopher Christie (many of those who have worked with Christie have their own pages, including Chris' wife, Deboroah Gramiccioni) and now, as the head law enforcement official in Monmouth County, one of the largest counties in New Jersey. I have added further details to his page, please reconsider this request to have his page published. There are many pages on Wikipedia with persons who have similar careers and half of the description and or details on their pages. The resources I have used, majority have been written by local or national authors, unaffiliated with the Prosecutor's Office or Gramiccioni. Thank you very much for your consideration. Cswendeman (talk) 20:52, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

  On hold pending paid editing disclosure, see User talk:Cswendeman#Declare any connection. --Worldbruce (talk) 17:45, 20 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
A cursory Google search shows that C. Swendeman has a very clear conflict of interest even if he is not being paid. Theroadislong (talk) 14:36, 22 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

22:21:07, 19 June 2019 review of submission by Swampcygnet

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How many more secondary sources do I need for this page to be approved? Thanks

Swampcygnet (talk) 22:21, 19 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Swampcygnet: Three. But see my answer to your earlier question. --Worldbruce (talk) 17:16, 20 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]