Talk:Cause of Death (video game)

There are some problems with this article:

1. There is only one reference.
2. Abbreviations everywhere (M.O.'s, AWOL, V6C8, SFPD, V9C8, IA, and etc).
3. This article was written in a way in that people who don't play this game won't be able to understand.

--128.227.104.77 (talk) 04:31, 18 September 2012 (UTC)

Most issues have been addressed. JayJ47 (talk) 04:34, 2 December 2012 (UTC)

Original Research, In-Universe Style and Abbreviations

The article was tagged for Original Research, In-Universe Style and abbreviations so I have removed a lot of content to address these issues. If you have any objections/suggestions, voice them here. JayJ47 (talk) 04:23, 7 December 2012 (UTC)

Characters Removed

Spent over an hour putting most of the characters up and small details on them. Put it back up! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2.28.91.66 (talk) 16:20, 11 April 2013 (UTC)

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