Talk:Danny Lange

Latest comment: 5 years ago by Matthewpruitt in topic Updated draft

Updated draft

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Hi editors. I'm here as the representative of Unity Technologies on Wikipedia. I've declared my conflict of interest above, and you'll see similar declarations at Talk:Unity Technologies, Talk:Unity (game engine), and Talk:John Riccitiello. This current Wikipedia article is very poorly written. Most of the text is unsourced, and then there are long lists of speeches, presentations, and publications. I've saved an updated draft for editors to review at User:Matthewpruitt/Danny Lange. My goals are to fill in some obvious content gaps, using acceptable sources, and give the article some structure. I'll stick to requesting feedback instead of updating the article myself. Is an editor able to update the article? Thanks in advance. Matthewpruitt (talk) 22:38, 12 March 2019 (UTC)Reply

  Done. Lordtobi () 14:04, 12 May 2019 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for updating the article! Matthewpruitt (talk) 20:46, 13 May 2019 (UTC)Reply