Template talk:Did you know/Approved/week-3

Latest comment: 14 hours ago by CFA

This page transcludes a subset of the nominations found on the page of all the approved nominations for the "Did you know" section of the Main Page. It only transcludes the nominations filed under dates of the fourth-most recent week. The page is intended to allow editors to easily review recent nominations that may not be displaying correctly on the complete page of approved nominations if that page's contents are causing the page to hit the post-expand include size limit.

Neary's

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  • Source: Habeeb, Lee; Group, Vice President of Content at Salem Media; Stories", host of "Our American (September 19, 2022). "NYPD Shut Down City, Bridge for His Funeral and Named a Street After Him". Newsweek. Archived from the original on July 23, 2024. Retrieved July 27, 2024. {{cite news}}: |last2= has generic name (help) Vadukul, Alex (October 12, 2021). "Jimmy Neary, Whose Irish Pub Became a Power Brokers' Hub, Dies at 91". The New York Times. Archived from the original on July 22, 2024. Retrieved July 27, 2024.
Created by Voorts (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

voorts (talk/contributions) 23:26, 28 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

Ai Uta

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  • ... that on a survey conducted by Oricon on 2007, Ai Uta was making girls' heart fluttered?
Created by Miminity (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Warm Regards, Miminity (talk) (contribs) 05:18, 28 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:   - n
  • Other problems:   - Both ALTs seems promotional and may need reworking for grammar.
QPQ: None required.

Overall:   Wow! "Ai Uta" is such a classic hit, so it's nice seeing an article for it. Article was nominated for DYK within the first 7 days of creation. It has over 1,500 words in prose. Citations are properly sourced. Earig picked up an unlikely copyright violation of 2.9%. Nominator has less than 5 nominations, so a QPQ is not needed at this time. Some suggestions outside of DYK nomination is to follow MOS:JAPAN#Titles of media, as I see some stylized capitalization (such as Greeeen's name). The ALT looks like it can be worked into something interesting, but the way it's currently worded feels a bit promotional. How about:

ALT0a: ... that, in a 2007 survey done by Oricon, Japanese girls found the song "Ai Uta" by the band Greeeen to be a perfect love song for the autumn?"
ALT2: ... that the record label for the Japanese band Greeeen specifically marketed the song "Ai Uta" to teenagers? lullabying (talk) 09:29, 4 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Jajaira Gonzalez

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  • Source: "'This is like Lazarus coming back from the dead,' USA Boxing head coach Billy Walsh said with a laugh." [2]
  • ALT1: ... that Jajaira Gonzalez, 2024 U.S. Olympian in women's lightweight boxing, decided to pick up the sport again after seeing her ex-teammates' posts on social media? Source: 'Jajaira Gonzalez was scrolling through social media at her job in a Virginia kickboxing gym about three years ago when she spotted some of her former USA Boxing teammates traveling the world, competing for medals and generally living their best lives. The Instagram post hit Gonzalez like a stiff jab, snapping her out of a quarter-life slumber. “They were in the water in Spain, and I was suddenly like, ‘I should be there,’” she said.' [3]
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  • Comment: Second DYK nom I've done, still new, so I apologize for any mistakes.
5x expanded by SunTunnels (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

SunTunnels (talk) 19:51, 28 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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QPQ: None required.

Overall:   Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:20, 5 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Durkee Fire

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A Bureau of Land Management vehicle at the Durkee Fire on July 21
Created by Bsoyka (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 14 past nominations.

Bsoyka (tcg) 04:23, 27 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
  • Other problems:  
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   I googled how common fires caused by lightning strikes are and according to this source, they are responsible for 10% of global forest fires which makes it a bit less interesting. Sahaib (talk) 14:02, 27 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Nam Su-hyeon, Jeon Hun-young

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  • ... that Jeon Hun-young and Nam Su-hyeon helped South Korea win its 10th-straight Olympic gold medal in the women's team archery event?
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 228 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:55, 4 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
  • Other problems:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   The nomination still needs to complete two QPQs and I think the hook needs to be rewritten slightly, and maybe some alternate hooks provided. Ping me when these issues have been seen to and I'd be happy to take another look. --Grnrchst (talk) 10:20, 5 August 2024 (UTC) Grnrchst (talk) 10:20, 5 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • @Grnrchst: Apologies for the delay. QPQs are done. I also realized there's the possibility of including Lim Si-hyeon, the third member of the team; however, her article needed to be expanded to about 3,300 bytes to count as 5x expanded (someone else expanded it) and it is currently about 2,700: not sure if including it would somehow be possible. But besides that, two ALTs to re-word would include:
    • ALT1 ... that Nam Su-hyeon and Jeon Hun-young winning the gold medal in the women's team archery event at the Olympics marked the 10th-straight time it was won by South Korea?
    • ALT2 ... that when Nam Su-hyeon and Jeon Hun-young won gold at the 2024 Olympics in the women's team archery event, it marked the 10th-straight gold in the event for South Korea?
  • Would either of those work? Could develop others if necessary. BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:22, 12 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Blair Colony

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  • ... that while recruiting for the Blair Colony, Betty Blair reportedly convinced potential settlers there were no flies in South Dakota?
Moved to mainspace by TCMemoire (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 13 past nominations.

TCMemoire 18:13, 29 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Looks good. Nice work. Prefer ALT0. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:30, 13 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Nicole Chang-Leng

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  • Source: Joubert-Lawen, Rita (2022-11-04). Bonnelame, Betymie (ed.). "Seychelles' first female international flight captain passes away". Seychelles News Agency. Retrieved 2024-06-24."The country will remember her as a true daughter of our soil. May her family be given courage as they go through this difficult period. May her soul rest in peace," said Ramkalawan...Chang-Leng became the first woman to command an all-female flight crew as commander on a Seychelles-Mauritius flight on August 23, 2007
  • "Passengers hail first all-female crew flight". Seychelles Nation. 2007-07-24. Retrieved 2024-07-30.
  • ALT1: ... that Nicole Chang-Leng, described as "daughter" of the Seychelles by Wavel Ramkalawan, commanded an all-woman crew?
  • ALT2: ... that Nicole Chang-Leng, described as "daughter" of the Seychelles by its president, commanded an all-woman crew?
  • Reviewed: [[]]
  • Comment: I provided in-text attribution for the "daughter of our soil" part within the article; I'm not sure if I need to provide it within the hook as well. I provided two alternative hooks just in case, but Seychellois presidents describing Chang-Leng as important is hardly controversial.
Moved to mainspace by GreenLipstickLesbian (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

GreenLipstickLesbian (talk) 04:25, 31 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: None required.

Overall:   Looks good. Nice work. I think Launchballer's suggestion is best given his mentioned concern, though if you prefer that the hook mention the all-woman crew, let me know. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:44, 11 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Marmelada de Santa Luzia

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Created by BaduFerreira (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

BaduFerreira (talk) 04:33, 5 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough and long enough. DYK hook fact checks out (and yes, I can read Portuguese... Thanks, Spanish!). Side comment to BaduFerreira: I think intangible rather than immaterial cultural heritage would be a better translation and in line with the term in English. We have Intangible cultural heritage as an article, but it does not line up one-to-one with ptwiki because they split the concept and UNESCO's list into separate pages (thus the separate Wikidata items). Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 03:54, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • Hi Sammi, Thank you for the review! I understand where you're coming from with this comment, but it seems to me that a Patrimônio Cultural Imaterial [pt] in Brazil is distinct from the UNESCO Intangible cultural heritage so linking to that article would be a little disingenuous. I'm hoping to find enough sources to get an article started for this concept to reduce future confusion between them, but I do appreciate your feedback. For that reason, I prefer to keep it as immaterial for the time being. Thank you again! BaduFerreira (talk) 05:14, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

2024 Tel Aviv drone attack

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Created by Mhhossein (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 65 past nominations.

Mhhossein talk 06:59, 28 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

Not reviewing, but proposing ALT1 above with different wording. Bsoyka (tcg) 17:38, 28 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Comment: Aren't we supposed to have upbeat hooks? 2603:7000:2101:AA00:54B:36AA:A773:7A69 (talk) 21:43, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Not necessarily, just interesting hooks. Even so, I'm not sure how one could make an "upbeat" hook out of a military drone attack. Bsoyka (tcg) 21:52, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
My point exactly. But I recall editors telling me we could not have hooks that are like this at DYK, because they were downbeat. The same reason we don't see hooks of interesting murders.2603:7000:2101:AA00:54B:36AA:A773:7A69 (talk) 22:00, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
I don't see that in our guidelines — take a look at WP:DYKINT. I've personally written about a murder and it was added to DYK. Perhaps you're thinking of our rule that hooks must use a neutral point of view? In this case, the hook may seem "downbeat" but it's very neutral, stating simple facts. On the other hand, "... that a terrible drone attack terrorized Tel Aviv?" would be unacceptable for its lack of neutrality. Bsoyka (tcg) 22:09, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
No -- I'm not thinking about NPOV. Perhaps one of the wise sages at DYK knows what I am referring to. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:54B:36AA:A773:7A69 (talk) 23:55, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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  • Interesting:  

QPQ:   - Not done
Overall:   Earwig gives " Violation Unlikely, 15.3%". No major problems that I can see. Mhhossein has not yet completed QPQ. VR (Please ping on reply) 01:01, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review VR. QPQ is done now. --Mhhossein talk 13:04, 1 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Vice regent: Is this approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 04:16, 6 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Z1720: I didn't get Mhhossein's ping. Yes, it is approved now.VR (Please ping on reply) 04:23, 6 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Vice regent: usually there should be a green tick mark by using {{subst:DYKyes}}, showing the final approval. You did not notice my previous ping due to improper ping by me, sorry. --Mhhossein talk 13:58, 6 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

 .VR (Please ping on reply) 14:16, 6 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Three Girls Revitalizing Asia

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Created by Microplastic Consumer (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Microplastic Consumer (talk) 23:58, 28 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: None required.

Overall:   Article was nominated within 7 days of creation. Unfortunately, it currently sits at 1,354 characters in prose and seems to be a stub, with all information crammed into the lead, so therefore it is too short to qualify for DYK. Earwig picked up an unlikely copyright violation of 1%. Nominator has less than 5 nominations so a QPQ is not required at this time. Should this pass, for a different variation of ALT1, I suggest, ALT2: "... that Three Girls Revitalizing Asia is credited with assigning a girl group member a representative role seen in modern Japanese idol culture?" lullabying (talk) 05:47, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Lullabying: I just checked the article with DYKcheck and it comes in at 1630 characters.--Launchballer 19:10, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thank you! I will change this to maybe.   The article still seems like a stub. Is it possible it can be formatted so it can properly have a lead and a body? lullabying (talk) 20:31, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Ask @Microplastic Consumer:.--Launchballer 21:40, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

It 100% can, I just don't have the time to do that at the moment, so please bare with me. Microplastic Consumer (talk) 22:10, 29 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

@lullabying It's done! Microplastic Consumer (talk) 03:33, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    • Looks good! Just to make it more consistent with a lot of idol group articles, I think it would be nice if "Koa sannin musume" was renamed "Career" and the members list was moved below it. Also, Saiko Okuyama's name needs to be in Western order per MOS:JAPAN as she was born after the Meiji Restoration. lullabying (talk) 01:33, 1 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

I've taken your suggestions and it should look better, after deciding what blurb to use it should be ready. Microplastic Consumer (talk) 02:20, 1 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Christopher Columbus (Zador)

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  • ... that the opera Christopher Columbus was written by its Jewish composer in 1939 while he was sailing across the Atlantic Ocean to flee persecution from Nazi Germany?
Created by 4meter4 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 90 past nominations.

4meter4 (talk) 15:59, 28 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   @4meter4: I would support the special occasion request, but per WP:DYKSO those generally can't be made more than 6 weeks out without an exception at WT:DYK. Otherwise, all looks good to me (AGF on the book source). Bsoyka (tcg) 17:13, 28 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Taco Cat Goat Cheese Pizza

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Created by Bsoyka (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 18 past nominations.

Bsoyka (tcg) 00:51, 28 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

Maximiliane Brentano

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Brentano throws a snowball at Goethe
  • ... that Goethe used his unrequited love to Maximiliane Brentano (both pictured) as inspiration for his novel The Sorrows of Young Werther? Source: [4]: "verliebte sich Goethe sofort in ihre Tochter", "In den „Leiden des jungen Werthers“ verschmolz er Maximiliane mit einer anderen frühen Geliebten zur dunkeläugigen, kinderlieben und charakterschönen „Lotte“."
Moved to mainspace by Kusma (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 55 past nominations.

Kusma (talk) 10:36, 28 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

Canadian Premier League inaugural match

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Created by I am wordsmyth (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

I am wordsmyth (talk) 20:24, 2 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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  • Interesting:  
QPQ: None required.

Overall:   Mostly good. Just need a source for the statement York9 finished sixth in the CPL's spring season and third in the fall season, ending the year third in the overall table. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:36, 7 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Ri Jong-sik, Kim Kum-yong

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Kim Kum-yong at the Olympics
  • ... that at the 2024 Olympics, unranked North Korean table tennis pair Ri Jong-sik and Kim Kum-yong (pictured) defeated the defending champions and went on to win the silver medal?
  • Source: YNA ("북한의 리정식-김금용 조(랭킹없음)는 27일 프랑스 파리의 사우스 파리 아레나 4에서 열린 파리 올림픽 탁구 혼합복식 16강전에서 일본의 하리모토 도모카즈-하야타 히나 조(2위)를 4-1(11-5 7-11 11-4 15-13 12-10)로 물리쳤다." [North Korea's Ri Jeong-sik and Kim Geum-yong (no ranking) defeated Japan's Tomokazu Harimoto and Hina Hayata (second) 4-1 in the Paris Olympics table tennis mixed doubles round of 16 match held at South Paris Arena 4 in Paris, France on the 27th. 11-5 7-11 11-4 15-13 12-10).]) / The Japan Times ("Japan's world No. 2 table tennis mixed doubles team, Hina Hayata and Tomokazu Harimoto, was upset by North Korea's Ri Jong Sik and Kim Kum Yong 4-1 in the first round at the Paris Olympics, losing the chance to retain the country's gold medal.") / Agence France-Presse via Barron's ("North Korea said they could learn from China after winning their first Olympic medal in eight years on Tuesday in Paris, settling for silver after a mixed-doubles defeat to the table tennis superpower.")
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 229 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:18, 5 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Hi BeanieFan11, review follows: both articles created 29 July; sources look to be reliable enough (AGF on the Korean-language ones); articles are both cited inline throughout and well written; I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing form the English language sources, AGF on the Korean ones; QPQs are pending; hook fact is interesting and mentioned in both articles. My only query is if it is right to refer to their Japanese opponents as "defending champions", Japan won it the last time round but with a different team. Perhaps "ranked second in the world" is better? I am not familiar with the sport so maybe the terminology is OK as it is? There might also be a length issue, I think the paragraph common to both articles can only count towards the length of one. Can one article be expanded a bit to compensate? - Dumelow (talk) 11:48, 8 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • @Dumelow: QPQ 1 done; still have to do QPQ 2 and look into the wording issues, which I'll complete tomorrow. Could you point out where it is stated that the paragraph common to both articles can only count towards the length of one? BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:41, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Hi BeanieFan11; from Wikipedia:Did you know/Guidelines#Length: "Text that is not original does not count, including text copied from the public domain and from other Wikipedia articles" - Dumelow (talk) 20:11, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Would re-wording the content in one article count? BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:31, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Seems a bit gamey, I don't think much more is needed to take one over 1,500 characters of unique prose. Appreciate they're North Korean so sources will be sparse but is there nothing else that can be added? - Dumelow (talk) 19:18, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Sorry, not trying to be 'gamey', just that they're remarkably obscure. (Even Reuters, describing their background, could only note that "little information is available about them".) Reuters does mention that Kim is noted for an unusual paddle; I'll see if I can add something about that later today to get it over 1,500. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:56, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Dumelow: Added a bit to Kim Kum-yong and I think it is over 1,500 now. Also completed the second QPQ. As for the wording, I think it is probably alright; the aforementioned Reuters piece stated As the lowest-ranked of 16 teams in the competition, they first knocked out defending Olympic champions Japan. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:49, 15 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Thanks BeanieFan11, looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 06:09, 16 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Kitāb al-Ṭabikh fī al-Maghrib wa al-Andalus fī ʽAṣr al-Muwaḥḥidīn, li-muʽallif majhūl

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Remake of a precursor to modern Jewish challah, based on a recipe from the medieval Kitāb al-Ṭabikh
  • Source: Jawhara Piñer, Hélène (2022). "Jews, Food, and Spain: the Oldest Medieval Spanish Cookbook and the Sephardic Culinary Heritage". Boston: Academic Studies Press. pp. 64–69; Jawhara Piñer, Hélène (2020). "The Sephardi Origin of the Challah Braided Bread". Meldar: Revista Internacional De Estudios sefardíes. 1: 69–71
  • ALT1: ... that the Kitāb al-Ṭabikh, a medieval Andalusian cookbook, contains an early version of Jewish challah bread, which may have traveled with Jews expelled from Spain and influenced Ashkenazi cuisine? Source: Jawhara Piñer, Hélène (2020). "The Sephardi Origin of the Challah Braided Bread". Meldar: Revista Internacional De Estudios sefardíes. 1: 69–71
  • ALT2: ... that the Kitāb al-Ṭabikh, a medieval Andalusian cookbook, contains an early version of mofletta, a pancake dish still enjoyed by Sephardic Moroccan Jews during Mimouna, a post-Passover celebration? Source: Jawhara Piñer, Hélène (2022). "Jews, Food, and Spain: the Oldest Medieval Spanish Cookbook and the Sephardic Culinary Heritage". Boston: Academic Studies Press. pp. 64–69
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5x expanded by PeleYoetz (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

PeleYoetz (talk) 08:42, 30 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough (expanded July 30), long enough (6700 B), fully sourced. I was able to access the source and verify the statement, "the oldest of all the known versions of moufleta"; assuming good faith on the source about challah. Hooks interesting, image appetizing. Approving ALT0 and ALT1 to go with the image. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧(talk | contribs) 18:20, 14 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Premna microphylla

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leaves and flowers of Premna microphylla
  • ... that tofu grows on trees (pictured)?
  • ALT1: ... that a Premna microphylla plant (pictured) was an autonomous bonsai for an art installation?
Created by Awkwafaba (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

awkwafaba (📥) 20:54, 2 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  • Starting review. On initial glance I feel the names section needs clean up. Inclusion of non-English vernacular names is a touchy subject with proponents both ways, so I won't outright say the section should be trimmed down. However, each name should not be an individual paragraph, as that's very close to shouting, especially with the bolding. Combining the single sentences into a paragraph will clean up the section and make it more legible.--Kevmin § 00:01, 4 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I debolded the alternative languages and combined the paragraphs. awkwafaba (📥) 17:22, 4 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
  •   Article expansion new enough and long enough. Article is well sourced and citations are neutrally presented where verifiable, some chinese and Japanese sources not accessible for me. All hooks are cited and sourced, with Alt2 taken agf. I would have suggested alt2 as the most unique but I cannot access the source. Alt1 is my recommendation, and it could be very interesting if the connection to Etherium blockchaining was added.--Kevmin § 18:13, 9 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hyakuman-kai no "I Love You"

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Created by Miminity (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Warm Regards, Miminity (talk) (contribs) 05:10, 29 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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QPQ: None required.

Overall:   Needs copyediting. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 23:43, 1 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

@TheNuggeteer: I'm done copy-editing, Just tell parts where it still there is still a problem and I'll fix it.
Regarding your contributions, I will accept the article.🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 09:11, 5 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

1990 Serbian constitutional referendum

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5x expanded by Vacant0 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

Vacant0 (talkcontribs) 21:12, 29 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Ten citations were cross-checked for issues—none arose. A machine translator was used for sources in Serbian. Prose was checked for issues; I was alarmed by the lack of "the" before party abbreviations, but it seems that this was intended. The parties' articles, most of which have Good Article status, consistently exclude "the", as if the abbreviations are acronyms. Good to go, overall. Yue🌙 00:40, 30 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Military-First Girls

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Created by Yue (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 14 past nominations.

Yue🌙 00:45, 30 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   This is a neat fact, I'll jump on this. Article is new and long enough, and QPQ is met. Reuters is a reliable source and the primary proposed hook is obviously uncontroversial. The first hook is definitely the most direct and interesting, though personally I'd word it in a more attention-grabbing way such as "...that there is a Japanese girl group that performs North Korean pop songs?", stating it less as a fact and more as an anecdote. Not a dealbreaker if you prefer it as is though, the hook is perfectly acceptable. My main concern is with the article itself. While it's mostly presentable, seems copyright free, and has adequate sourcing, I'm concerned about the accuracy of its framing of the topic. It calls them a girl group and states they do musical performances of Korean pop. However, most sources (both utilized and other general google results) appear to call them a fan club, and I can only find any reference to them doing dance, not singing. The Reuters sources cited for them performing music has a lot of photos where they appear to be dancing without any apparent microphones, and again calls them a fan club who are dancing. This also seems more consistent with their undefined scope of membership. If they are not in fact a musical act, this is a major flaw in the article and the hook, which directly touches on them as a pop act. Do you have any sources that confirm they do any singing and are considered to be a girl group? LittleLazyLass (Talk | Contributions) 05:16, 30 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@LittleLazyLass: Is this approved? If not, what else needs to be done? Z1720 (talk) 00:28, 7 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Apologies! I thought I remembered closing this. Looks good now. LittleLazyLass (Talk | Contributions) 01:49, 7 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Abortion in the Gambia

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  • ... that in the Gambia, there is a belief that people can summon evil spirits to cause abortions?
  • Source: [5] In the Gambia the fear that malevolent people will activate evil spirits in order to cause abortion prevents acknowledgement of early pregnancies.
Moved to mainspace by Vigilantcosmicpenguin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

— Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧(talk | contribs) 01:54, 1 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

Executioner's Tax (Swing of the Axe)

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Created by Kimikel (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

Kimikel (talk) 01:08, 31 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Both hooks and the article look good to me! I edited the linked text in ALT0 slightly. Good work here! Bsoyka (tcg) 01:29, 31 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Rachel Scott (journalist)

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Created by CFA (talk) and PrinceArchelaus (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

C F A 💬 23:18, 6 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough (August 1), long enough (3200 B). Well-sourced, with primary sources used appropriately. ALT0 and ALT1 verified in sources, but your source for ALT2 doesn't look like it says she covered the assassination attempt. Approving ALT0 and ALT1, with a preference toward ALT1. — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧(talk | contribs) 19:46, 22 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
I think the live report broke. This source also verifies that she covered the assassination attempt. C F A 💬 20:05, 22 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Sydney Francisco

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  • ... that Olympian Sydney Francisco was named after the city where her mother competed at the Olympics?
  • Source: [6] - I know its facebook, but its published by the Australian embassy - that'd be considered reliable, right?
Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 228 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:54, 8 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  Hi BeanieFan11, I added the ref and linked the article to her mother's (Peoria Koshiba). Otherwise, article was created 1 August and is long enough; sources used are cited inline throughout and are reliable enough for the information cited; hook fact is interesting (it had me wondering for a minute if San Francisco had ever held the games), mentioned in the article and cited (now twice); I didn't pick up on any close paraphrasing issues; just awaiting a QPQ, I think - Dumelow (talk) 07:00, 13 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 07:36, 17 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

One Million Monkeys Typing

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  • ... that a researcher called the community on short-lived collaborative writing website One Million Monkeys Typing "astonishingly harmonious"?
  • Source: Klaiber 2014: "Netiquette styles vary considerably from platform to platform: while the social aesthetics of OMM prove astonishingly harmonious, Protagonize, for instance, seems to allow for more direct critique of creative work."
  • Source: Wilkinson 2008 (offline): "as of today [July 2008 when the article was published], there are over 600 monkeys."
Improved to Good Article status by Bobamnertiopsis (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 87 past nominations.

—⁠Collint c 00:14, 5 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Article is newly promoted to GA status and long enough. The article is written neutrally, well-sourced, presentable, and BLP-compliant. Earwig detects no plagiarism. The hooks are both cited and interesting, with ALT1 feeling hookier. QPQ has been done. Well done. gobonobo + c 01:26, 6 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Fantasy (Las Vegas show)

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Created by Cunard (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 79 past nominations.

Cunard (talk) 11:56, 1 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:   - y x - the phrase "is" in the hook is not supported by the ref, as the ref is nearly 8 years old
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   The hook problem is also a problem within the text of the article. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:C90F:5F27:BE03:9B87 (talk) 18:16, 3 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

The 8 November 2016 source says: "Fantasy: Luxor. In its 17th year, Fantasy is the longest-running topless show in Vegas to remain in one location." This 6 March 2023 article says, "Currently the longest-running female revue production on the Las Vegas Strip, the show has been rolling through performances at the Luxor for more than 23 years". This 1 July 2024 article verifies that Fantasy is still performed at the Luxor. Cunard (talk) 21:34, 3 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks - the second ref, added to the first, does it for me.2603:7000:2101:AA00:C90F:5F27:BE03:9B87 (talk) 22:54, 3 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Kimi wa Bara yori Utsukushī

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Created by IanTEB (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

IanTEB (talk) 21:22, 5 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Some suspicions of NPOV, but no subtle evidence. The source is Japanese, so the source is AGF. 04:29, 7 August 2024 (UTC)🍗TheNuggeteer🍗

Mark Robert Harrison

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Moved to mainspace by Kimikel (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

Kimikel (talk) 00:56, 2 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Hook cited and interesting, so good to go. Alt1 is interesting but a bit morbid. Sahaib (talk) 08:23, 5 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

Helen Hornbeck Tanner

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Created by SL93 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 416 past nominations.

SL93 (talk) 22:35, 3 August 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   While earwig indicates 31.0% similarity, a review of the similar language indicates it is largely names and the like. Proposing editor may wish to consider proposing the photo for consideration. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:34AF:AC34:37AD:2505 (talk) 10:35, 4 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

The image is used under fair use so that isn't possible. The main page can only feature free use images. SL93 (talk) 16:07, 4 August 2024 (UTC)Reply