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This page holds approved nominations that are waiting to appear in the "Did you know" section on the Main Page. Following DYK approval, nominations are processed and moved into a Prep area, and from there, prep sets are promoted to a queue, and then to the main page.

To create a new nomination or to see those that are yet to be approved, see Template talk:Did you know. For the discussion page see WT:DYK. Click on the link to go directly to the Special occasion holding area.

  If some of the nominations are not showing up properly at the bottom of the page, these alternative pages can be used to view a subset of the most recent nominations.
Count of DYK Hooks
Section # of Hooks # Verified
May 27 1
May 30 2
June 2 1
June 3 2 1
June 7 1
June 8 1
June 9 2 1
June 10 1
June 11 1
June 13 1
June 14 1
June 15 2
June 17 2
June 19 1
June 20 1
June 21 3
June 22 2
June 23 3 1
June 24 3 1
June 25 2 1
June 26 8 3
June 27 2 1
June 28 6 3
June 29 3 2
June 30 6 5
July 1 8 5
July 2 5 5
July 3 9 6
July 4 9 5
July 5 8 4
July 6 13 10
July 7 11 5
July 8 10 6
July 9 8 4
July 10 10 6
July 11 9 4
July 12 8 4
July 13 14 5
July 14 12 6
July 15 8 3
July 16 12 10
July 17 11 6
July 18 8 4
July 19 9
July 20 2
July 21 7
July 22 5
July 23 4
Total 258 117
Last updated 14:01, 23 July 2024 UTC
Current time is 14:37, 23 July 2024 UTC [refresh]

Instructions for nominators

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This page is for those nominations that have already been approved and are waiting to be promoted. If yours has been approved but has not yet been run on the main page, it should either be on this page or will soon be moved here, or already promoted to a Prep area or Queue ahead of an appearance on the main page.

If you wish to create a new nomination, please go to the Template talk:Did you know page; there are instructions there in a section similar to this one on how to nominate an article for DYK.

Frequently asked questions

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Backlogged?

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This page is often backlogged. As long as your submission is still on the page, it will stay there until someone promotes it to a preparation area. To alleviate this problem, if the approved page has more than 120 approved hooks, then sets will change twice per day (every 12 hours) instead of once per day (every 24 hours). When the backlog falls below 60 approved nominations set frequency returns to once a day.

Where is my hook?

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If you can't find the nomination you submitted to the nominations page, and it also isn't on this page, in most cases it means your article has been approved and is either in one of the prep areas, has been promoted from prep to a queue, or is on the main page.

If the nominated hook is in none of those places, then the nomination has probably been rejected. Such a rejection usually only occurs if it was at least a couple of weeks old and had unresolved issues for which any discussion had gone stale. If you think your nomination was unfairly rejected, you can query this on the DYK discussion page, but as a general rule such nominations will only be restored in exceptional circumstances.

Instructions for other editors

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How to promote an accepted hook

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  • See Wikipedia:Did you know/Preparation areas for full instructions.
  • In one window, open the DYK nomination subpage of the hook you would like to promote.
  • In another window, open the prep set you intend to add the hook to.
  • In the prep set...
    • Paste the hook into the hook area (be sure to not paste in that that)
    • Paste the credit information ({{DYKmake}} and/or {{DYKnom}}) into the credits area.
    • Add an edit summary, e.g., "Promoted [[Jane Fonda]]", preview, and save
  • Back on DYK nomination page...
    • change {{DYKsubpage to {{subst:DYKsubpage
    • change |passed= to |passed=yes
    • Add an edit summary, e.g., "Promoted original hook to Prep 3", preview, and save

How to remove a hook from the prep areas or queue

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  • Edit the prep area or queue where the hook is and remove the hook and the credits associated with it.
  • Go to the hook's nomination subpage (there should have been a link to it in the credits section).
    • View the edit history for that page
    • Go back to the last version before the edit where the hook was promoted, and revert to that version to make the nomination active again.
    • Add a new icon on the nomination subpage to cancel the previous tick and leave a comment after it explaining that the hook was removed from the prep area or queue, and why, so that later reviewers are aware of this issue.
  • Add a transclusion of the template back to the nominations page so that reviewers can see it. It goes under the date that it was first created/expanded/listed as a GA. You may need to add back the day header for that date if it had been removed from the nominations page.
  • If you removed the hook from a queue, it is best to either replace it with another hook from one of the prep areas, or to leave a message at WT:DYK asking someone else to do so.

Nominations

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Special occasion holding area

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Non-Olympics requests

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August 24

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Aoi Koga

  • ... that Aoi Koga's decision to pursue voice acting was partly inspired by a childhood desire to "become friends with dolls"? Source: [3] ("小さいとき、お人形たちと仲良しになりたいって思ったのが、こういった道に進んだきっかけでした。")
    • ALT1: ... that voice actress Aoi Koga has an interest in manhole covers? Source: [4] (私、実はマンホールが好きで、地方に行くとよく“ご当地限定マンホール”をチェックしているんですが、鎌倉ですごく可愛いマンホールを見つけたんです。大きいマンホールの真ん中に“鎌”ってデザインされているやつで、見つけた瞬間携帯のシャッターを切っちゃいました(笑)。マンホールって地方によって柄が全然違ったり、キャラクターデザインのマンホールもあったりするので、普段から見落とさないように注意深く歩いています(笑)。)
    • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Kikunosuke Toya
    • Comment: Requesting a special occasion request for August 24 (her birthday). Given that today is just outside the six-week requirement, I already requested an IAR exemption at WT:DYK.
Improved to Good Article status by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 106 past nominations.

Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:12, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Everything checks out! Skyshiftertalk 04:37, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • Hey, I just wanted to apologize for promoting this earlier than requested. I verified the hook but I missed the comment. Someone pointed out my mistake at WT:DYK and I just wanted ot let you know I've unpromoted this, so that it can be held in the approved area to run for her birthday (unless of course a DYK admins wants to override me). Hey man im josh (talk) 11:44, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply


Summer Olympics, July 26 through August 11

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Please see Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Olympic hooks table for potential timing changes.

July 29

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Suriname at the 1960 Summer Olympics

5x expanded by Arconning (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

Arconning (talk) 15:06, 6 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General eligibility:

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
  • Other problems:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Happy for this to be approved once ALT1 mentioned below is added :) Arcahaeoindris (talk) 07:57, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

This hook is super interesting and the article is great. I think maybe the hook needs rewording though as it's not clear that this "peace" came more than four decades later. How about "four decades after missing an event at the 1960 Summer Olympics, Suriname's sole athlete was found to have not "overslept"? I'm also waiting on the plagiarism checker to worki again. Arcahaeoindris (talk) 04:34, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Arcahaeoindris So that would be "... that four decades after missing an event at the 1960 Summer Olympics, Suriname's sole athlete was found to have not "overslept"? " Arconning (talk) 15:06, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Arconning: yes, that sounds good. Please can you add this as Alt1? Thanks! Arcahaeoindris (talk) 07:55, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


July 30

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July 31

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August 1

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Marcedes Walker

  • ... that basketball player Marcedes Walker became an Olympian 16 years after her WNBA career ended?
  • Source: Walker played her only games in the WNBA in 2008 (and was released in-season), as explained in the article (see [5] for example) - she became an Olympian in 2024 [6]
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 205 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:06, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   Article is new enough, long enough, and within policy. No copyright violations detected and inline citations to reliable sources throughout. The hook facts are all verified to the cited materials. No issues with any of the hooks, which are all reasonably interesting. I will leave it to the promoter to select which of the three hooks they prefer as they are all usable. All we need is the QPQ and this can be promoted. Good work Beanie.4meter4 (talk) 14:27, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Good to go. The promoter may choose which of the three hooks they prefer.4meter4 (talk) 20:52, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area

Solomon Islands at the 2020 Summer Olympics

5x expanded by Arconning (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Arconning (talk) 13:19, 27 May 2024 (UTC).Reply

August 2

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Emily Ausmus

  • ... that at age 12, Emily Ausmus participated in an international water polo tournament against players seven years older than her?
  • Source: NBC Olympics ("She started playing water polo at 8 years old and then the senior team began keeping tabs on her when she was 12 years old competing at the 2018 Pan American Junior Championships. Her teammates and opposing players were up to seven years older than her in that tournament.")
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 209 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:48, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area



August 3

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Philippines at the 1924 Summer Olympics

 
The Philippine delegate holding the two flags for the opening ceremony
5x expanded by Arconning (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

Arconning (talk) 16:03, 28 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Image eligibility:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:   I prefer ALT 1 TheNuggeteer (talk) 04:57, 1 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

  TheNuggeteer, I've struck ALT1 as there are various problems with it. Both the source and the article say that the "Philippines were said to have sent athletes", hence we cannot say in Wikivoice that the "Philippines sent athletes". Secondly, you don't send athletes "at" the Olympics; you send them "to" the Olympics. Thirdly, when referring to people, you must use "who" and not "that". Fourthly, we do not use contractions in hooks apart from direct quotes. ALT1a fixes all those issues. Schwede66 01:05, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

How about alt 2? 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 01:13, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area

Apsara Sakbun

  • ALT1: ... that had Cambodian swimmer Apsara Sakbun declined her invitation to the 2024 Summer Olympics, her sister would have become an Olympian instead? Source: same source ("When the Cambodian coach offered the elder Sakbun a chance to compete in the 50-meter freestyle in Paris, he referred to her record time in the event — but also let her know that if she weren’t up for it for whatever reason, he had a list of three top candidates, determined by fastest times in the event. So if it weren’t Apsara Sakbun heading to the Olympics to swim the 50-meter freestyle for Cambodia, it would have been her younger sister.")
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/WKBS-TV (Philadelphia)
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 213 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:00, 17 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   New enough (created on the 16th), long enough, and two interesting hooks, both of which are verified. Also, in doing a bit of research, it appears that Apsara has, at times, been referred to as Katarina Sakbun. I noticed this while looking over List of Cambodia records in swimming, so I made Katarina Sakbun a redirect as an alternative name. Please ping me when you have a QPQ completed @BeanieFan11, and I'll be comfortable marking this as approved. Hey man im josh (talk) 13:14, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

@BeanieFan11: If you're like me, there's a good chance you missed this based on how active you are and getting distracted on other tasks. Just sending another a courtesy ping in case you want to get this pushed along. Hey man im josh (talk) 20:23, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Sorry, I'll try to get a QPQ done by the end of the day. I've admittedly had some difficulty getting all the QPQs done on time – since I've been very busy with the Olympics recently, with 17 articles written in nine days and ~20 total Olympics DYKs in the past month. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:28, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Hey man im josh: QPQ done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:27, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Approved! Hey man im josh (talk) 15:11, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


August 4

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2022 European Athletics Championships – Women's 400 metres, 2022 European Athletics Championships – Women's 400 metres hurdles

 
400 metres hurdles final
 
2022 European Athletics Championships
  • Source: Dutch source "Missie geslaagd. Femke Bol heeft vrijdagavond in München voor een unieke dubbelslag op een groot titeltoernooi in de atletiekwereld gezorgd. Het 22-jarige supertalent liep naar de Europese titel op de 400 meter horden. Twee dagen eerder was ze al Europees kampioene op de 400 meter zonder hindernissen geworden. Geen enkele vrouw deed dat eerder." English source alternative
5x expanded by Editør (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. Nominator has 12 past nominations.

Editør (talk) 10:59, 23 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  

Image eligibility:

  • Freely licensed:  
  • Used in article:  
  • Clear at 100px:   - Personally I feel at 100px the current image is too wide to be useful for this nomination. I would suggest changing it for either the Brossier/Bol photo from the 400m semi or the Lehikoinen/Bol photo from the 400m hurdles final, but I will also leave this up to the promoter if they feel differently.
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Both articles' prose meets 5x expansion. Readable prose on both also surpasses the target. Generally well sourced and well written, hook is also cited and interesting. Images are free, however some issues regarding the selected image (see above). 2 QPQs done to match the double bold articles. Besides potentially swapping the image out for another I'm happy to pass the DYK for these articles. Great job! Sims2aholic8 (talk) 09:56, 30 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your review. I would prefer the Lehikoinen/Bol photo as alternative. – Editør (talk) 10:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Or a cropped version of the originally proposed photo if that is an option (cropped to a square, centered on Bol). – Editør (talk) 10:34, 30 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
I've added a crop of the above. Not a square; this looks better (I looked at a square crop first). Schwede66 02:51, 1 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thank you, I'd prefer your crop. I think the hook and image caption should be changed to:
 
Femke Bol in the 400 metres hurdles final
... that Femke Bol (pictured) won the women's 400 metres and 400 metres hurdles in an unprecedented double victory at the 2022 European Athletics Championships?
– Editør (talk) 08:06, 1 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area

August 5

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Aniya Holder

"Holder secured her place at the 2024 Olympics during the International Federation of Sport Climbing (IFSC) African Qualifier in December 2023 [....] When Holder first started training to reach the IFSC African Qualifier, she didn’t realise it was a gateway to the Olympics. She had simply identified a series of competitions, culminating in the IFSC round, that she could use to push herself as an athlete."
  • ALT1: ... that 2024 Paris Olympian Aniya Holder began speed climbing as a safer alternative to bouldering and lead climbing after she broke her knuckles and dislocated her shoulder elbow? Source: https://www.businesslive.co.za/bd/sport/other-sport/2024-04-04-mark-etheridge-walls-hold-no-fears-for-young-olympian/
    "She got into speed climbing in 2021. 'I punched a volume [an extension attached to the climbing wall] and broke all my knuckles,' she says. 'A week after the cast came off I fell from a high boulder and stuck my hand out to avoid hitting my head and ended up dislocating my elbow.' That put her out for five months during which she regained her strength and did rehabilitation work. It was also the end of one part of her climbing career. 'I can’t do the boulder and lead discipline any more, it just hurts too much.' Coach Muller suggested she should try speed climbing."
  • Reviewed:
  • Comment: This is my first DYK nomination attempt, but I figure you don't know what it's like until you try! Open to feedback on the hook, I accept it might be a bit wordy.
Created by SunTunnels (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

SunTunnels (talk) 17:11, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: None required.

Overall:   @SunTunnels: Nice work. The article and the first hook look good. As for the second hook, the source seems to say that she dislocated her elbow, not her shoulder? Is that right?

 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


August 6

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Jenya Kazbekova

  • Source: The Guardian, "Her grandmother had become the Soviet Union’s champion ... Her World Cup‑winning parents"
Created by David Eppstein (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 185 past nominations.

David Eppstein (talk) 18:45, 11 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area

Zheng Haohao

  • ... that after being qualified for the 2024 Summer Olympics at the age of 11, skateboarder Zheng Haohao became the youngest Chinese sportsperson to participate in the Olympics?
Created by Toadboy123 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 40 past nominations.

Toadboy123 (talk) 07:08, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Thanks for creating! Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:29, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


August 8

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Emmanuella Atora

  • Source: Gabon Media Time ("« Je tape les gens pour vivre », c’est en ces termes qu’Emmanuella Atora Eyeghe a décidé de célébrer sa qualification directe le plus grand rendez-vous d’athlétisme au monde." translated "'I hit people for a living', these are the words that Emmanuella Atora Eyeghe decided to celebrate her direct qualification for the biggest athletics event in the world.")
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 198 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:32, 27 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   I prefer ALT1 but it may be too vague when placed alongside the other Olympic hooks, although that's probably the point and that's why I like it. I'll leave it to the promoter's discretion, as both hooks essentially say the same thing. French-language sources were checked for close paraphrasing; no issues arose. Waiting on the QPQ. Yue🌙 03:55, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


August 9

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Manizha Talash

Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 193 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:44, 20 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   New enough and long enough. QPQ has since been supplied. All hook facts check out and are interesting in various ways, especially ALT0/ALT1. Dunno if we need quotes on the quote from the headline. No textual or other issues. Fine for the 9 August Olympic suggestion. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 02:29, 28 June 2024 (UTC)Reply


August 10

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Kennedy Blades

  • Source: Team USA ("First female to win a state title in Illinois against boys")
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 207 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:17, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

Article review
Length Newness Adequate
citations
Formatted
citations
Reliable
sources
Neutrality Plagiarism
yes yes yes yes yes yes yes

Kennedy Blades would be a really cool comic book character name. Good to go. Waiting on a QPQ to be done. Bremps... 07:48, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

BeanieFan11 Bremps... 03:13, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Will make sure to do early tomorrow. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:14, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Bremps: QPQ done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:30, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
  Bremps... 19:07, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area

Alasan Ann

  • ... that taekwondo practitioner Alasan Ann was injured by a gunshot four months prior to the Olympic qualification tournament, but recovered in time and won the competition?
Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 201 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:28, 7 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   The article is newly created and is sourced properly along with the hook. No copyright violations but I do wonder if it's possible (if source exists), to add information on how he got the gunshot wound. Regardless, I think the article is overall good to go. But waiting for QPQ and then once that's done, the hook should be ready go. - Toadboy123 (talk) 14:29, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • @Toadboy123: QPQ done. As for how he was shot, all the source says is: Alasan Ann was hanging out with friends in Minneapolis when he heard gunshots and screams. Scared for his life, his first instinct was to run, as fast as he could. “Not now, not ever,” the 23-year-old athlete thought to himself. “[We] started running to our car. And while we were running, I got hit in my leg, but I didn’t stop,” he told Olympics.com, his voice trailing off. Is there anything you think I should add from that? BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:08, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
 
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


Approved nominations

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Articles created/expanded on June 3

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Inauguration of Lai Ching-te

 
Lai Ching-te's inauguration
  • Source: AP
Created by CanonNi (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

'''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 06:14, 6 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

@Z1720:, thanks for the ping. Honestly, I kinda forgot about this nomination... @Shooterwalker: thanks for the feedback. I've reviewed the MOS and think that the article and hook meet the guidlines and would be happy to fix any mistakes. About the context, I agree, so maybe we could change it to something like "...that China launched a military exercise in response to the inauguration of Lai Ching-te as president of Taiwan? '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 10:09, 28 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
Let's go with the hook as you rewrote it:
ALT1a: "... ...that China launched a military exercise in response to the inauguration of Lai Ching-te as president of Taiwan?".
I don't see any other issues. Shooterwalker (talk) 23:20, 8 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • @Shooterwalker: Do you approve the nomination? If so, please add the green tick below. If not, what else is needed to get this approved? If you haven't conducted a review yet, and do not intend to, please add the red arrow, indicating that a "new reviewer is needed" below. Z1720 (talk) 01:35, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Articles created/expanded on June 9

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Barry Burton

Source: [2][3] About Eurogamer YT source. "Jill Sandwich" started at 2:26 to 2:29.

Created by Boneless Pizza! (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

🍕Boneless Pizza!🍕 (🔔) 10:39, 9 June 2024 (UTC). Reply

References

  1. ^ Wilson, Aoife (February 9, 2015). Video: Oh my Cod - An ode to Resident Evil's Barry Burton. Eurogamer (Video). Event occurs at 2:26-2:29. Jill Sandwich
  2. ^ McDonell, Jess (January 28, 2013). "Gaming Meme History: Jill Sandwich". GameSpot. Archived from the original on April 11, 2013. Retrieved August 12, 2017.
  3. ^ Wilson, Aoife (February 9, 2015). Video: Oh my Cod - An ode to Resident Evil's Barry Burton (Video). Event occurs at 2:26-2:29. Jill Sandwich

  Length and history verified. References good for original hook. But for ALT1 (and the Eurogamer one for the original, if you are linking to a page with video use {{cite AV media}} and give us the time when the statement is made in the video instead of making us look through the whole thing. Daniel Case (talk) 05:53, 4 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Daniel Case about Eurogamer. "Jill Sandwich" started at 2:26 to 2:29. Thanks for informing me. 🍕Boneless Pizza!🍕 (🔔) 06:00, 4 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Daniel Case: Have your concerns been addressed, and is this approved? If not, what needs to be done to approve this nomination? Z1720 (talk) 01:41, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
OK, sorry for taking so long to get back to you. You need to change the cite in the article to {{cite AV media}} so you can put the time in the cite in the article. If you feel that's too complicated, I would be happy to do it for you. Daniel Case (talk) 02:15, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Daniel Case Done. 🍕Boneless Pizza!🍕 (🔔) 02:44, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Um, no. Source 28 still doesn't have it, you haven't edited the article in three weeks, and the only edit since you wrote that wasn't to that source. Daniel Case (talk) 02:38, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Daniel Case I thought only here at DYK nom. Sorry. I already added now. 🍕Boneless Pizza!🍕 (🔔) 02:51, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Daniel Case: how's this nomination going? theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 21:20, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply


         Ooops ... I knew I'd let something get away from me but I couldn't remember what. It's good now. Daniel Case (talk) 21:23, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Boneless Pizza!, what is a "clanky-inducing line"? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:07, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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18th Lok Sabha

  • ALT: ... that according to the Indian Women's Reservation Bill, 2023, 33% of women MPs will be required although Lok Sabha formed in 2024 has only 14%?
  • ALT1: ... that post enforcement of Women's Reservation Bill in India in the next few years, 33% of MPs will be required to be women although the new Lok Sabha has only 14%?
  • ALT2: ... that according to the Indian Women's Reservation Bill, 2023, 33% of MPs will be required to be women although the Lok Sabha formed in 2024 has only 14%?
  • 5x expanded by Dharmadhyaksha (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 66 past nominations.

    §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 03:42, 13 June 2024 (UTC). General eligibility:Reply

    Policy compliance:

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    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Approved only for ALT hook proposed by me. Mehedi Abedin (talk) 11:43, 15 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Thanks @Willthorpe:! ALT1 & 2 have suggested now. @AirshipJungleman29:, your response is also awaited. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 03:38, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    No worries Dharmadhyaksha, glad to help! Will Thorpe (talk) 03:40, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    This hook feels really wordy, which is why I think it hasn't been promoted yet. Is there any way to trim it a bit? What about this? ♠PMC(talk) 02:10, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    ALT3 ... that although the Indian Constitution has required 33% of MPs to be women since 2023, the Lok Sabha formed in 2024 has only 14%?
    @Premeditated Chaos: Well, ALT3 will be factually incorrect as the Reservation Bill is not really implemented yet. It was passed in 2023 and the date of implementation is yet to be decided as there will be delimitation of constituencies after the next Census is completed. Both these major steps (census & then delimitation) are still pending. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 07:25, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    So wait, basically the hook is that the percentage of female MPs is less than what's mandated by a law that isn't even in force yet? I'm not sure I find that particularly surprising or intriguing. ♠PMC(talk) 19:28, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Yes.... its way less that what would be required by maybe next elections. I understand the hook is becoming un-interesting as we are being factually correct. Hence i was using "will be required" and skipping the part of "when will it be required". If you have any other suggestions, we can think of those too. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 03:46, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    @Dharmadhyaksha and Premeditated Chaos: how's an ALT4: ... that India will need to more than double its current number of women in Parliament under a new law? theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 04:35, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Fine by me. In fact, much better than what i had framed. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 05:25, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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    Timeline of Partygate

     
    Boris Johnson's 56th birthday party
    • Source: "Mr Johnson is the first serving PM to be sanctioned for breaking the law." BBC News
    Moved to mainspace by A Thousand Doors (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 25 past nominations.

    A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 20:44, 15 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    • Comment not review As this is an article featuring election candidates, it should not appear on the main page until after 4 July, see WP:DYKELECT. TSventon (talk) 21:19, 15 June 2024 (UTC)Reply
    •   New enough and long enough. QPQ present. This is a unique contribution to DYK as it is three paragraphs and a list; even though one paragraph does not end in an inline citation, I am treating it as a lead-section paragraph. All the list bullet points contain at least one inline citation. The hook fact checks out and is included. Image is OGL-licensed and acceptable for the Main Page. Good to go after 4 July per above. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 04:49, 20 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Despite what the sources say, I find it hard to believe that in the hundreds of years there have been prime ministers in the UK, not a single one of them before Boris Johnson has ever broken some law. In fact, it only took me a couple of minutes to find in Robert Walpole: In 1712, Walpole was accused of venality and corruption in the matter of two forage contracts for Scotland. Although it was proven that he had retained none of the money, Walpole was pronounced "guilty of a high breach of trust and notorious corruption".[16] He was impeached by the House of Commons and found guilty by the House of Lords; he was then imprisoned in the Tower of London for six months and expelled from Parliament.

    @RoySmith: I believe the distinction is that Johnson is the first serving Prime Minister to be found to have broken the law – the Walpole incident that you're describing occurred nine years before he became Prime Minister. A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 22:40, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      @A Thousand Doors and Sammi Brie: I have unpromoted this, becaue I now feel the hook violates WP:DYKHOOKBLP. I recognise that this is a currently-fraught subject, and other promoters might see differently, but I don't intend on promoting this hook. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:42, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Same. I am not taking a chance. SL93 (talk) 02:46, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I'm ambivalent. I think that any hook is DUE as long as it is not unduly negative compared to the article. But I'm not sure if there are BLP problems with this article existing in the first place. If there aren't, I'd be okay with promoting it. theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 22:14, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    If the community feels that the current hook is too contentious, then here are some alts that I hope might be preferred instead:

    I still feel that the original is the most interesting and "hook"-y, but I'm happy to go with consensus on this. Thanks, A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 10:33, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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    Embassy of the Philippines, Amman

    • Source: "Bello said at a news conference that two of the embassy personnel, whom he identified as officers of the Philippine Overseas Labor Office in the Jordanian capital Amman and in Kuwait, were involved in running sex rings in those two places that send Filipinas to service wealthy clients." – Philippine Daily Inquirer
    Created by Sky Harbor (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 53 past nominations.

    Sky Harbor (talk) 08:05, 29 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

      The nominator hasn't edited since July 1st and has not provided a QPQ. Marking for closure as abandoned, without prejudice against it continuing if the nominator returns or another editor adopts this. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:18, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Hi, Narutolovehinata5. If you're wondering why I've not been able to work on this nomination, it's because I am currently in Turkey for work-related travel. I will work on the QPQ within the next 1-2 days, and thank you for your patience. --Sky Harbor (talk) 23:33, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    QPQ review done, Narutolovehinata5. Thank you again for your patience. --Sky Harbor (talk) 16:57, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Are you going to review this? If you aren't, can I review this? 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 11:22, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Yes, I wasn't planning to give this a review, so someone else will need to do it. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:00, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Good to go! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:44, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Cobra Crack

     
    Climber standing at the distinctive 'Cobra' silhouette groove at the start of the Cobra Crack
    Improved to Good Article status by Aszx5000 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

    Aszx5000 (talk) 13:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Articles created/expanded on June 24

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    Matahi Brightwell

     
    Matahi Brightwell
    • Source: [11] "Mr Brightwell was made an Officer of the New Zealand Order of Merit for starting waka ama in Aotearoa, a sport he picked up – along with his name and his wife Raipoia – while he was building the ocean-going waka Hawaikinui in Tahiti."
    • ALT1: ... that Matahi Brightwell (pictured) left the eyes of Ngātoro-i-rangi blank? Source: [12] "When Mr Brightwell created Ngatoroirangi, he was so upset by the negativity that he left the sculpture's eyes blank."
    • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sofiya Vakman
    • Comment: Welcome any suggestions for alternative hooks or improvements to the hook or article. There's also a free picture of the Ngātoro-i-rangi sculpture (currently in the article) that could be used as an alternative to the picture of Brightwell, although I'm not sure it'll show up well at 100x100.
    Created by Chocmilk03 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 29 past nominations.

    Chocmilk03 (talk) 02:28, 25 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Article is long enough and created a day day before DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and free from copyvio. QPQ done. Hooks are both interesting; personally, I think ALT0 works better from a DYK perspective as it's more accessible to someone who doesn't know what Ngatoroirangi is. Image meets criteria. Thank you for your nomination Chocmilk03! Kimikel (talk) 22:43, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on June 25

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    Ashin Munindabhivamsa

    Created by Battlesnake1 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

    Htanaungg (talk) 10:08, 25 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   The article appeared in the news before, and the hook does not seem interesting because these types of killings are common. Considering the reply of the nominator. I feel life ALT2 is more interesting. TheNuggeteer (talk) 00:52, 26 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

    @TheNuggeteer: Thank you for the review. Per WP:DYKNEW, I’ve mentioned in the comment that the subject is listed only in RD section of the ITN, not bold link.
    Although this type of killing may be common elsewhere, it is a rare case in the highly religious country that a prominent religious figure was shot dead by the ruling junta’s soldiers. Plus, it is very few that the junta apologized publicly; he would never show his weakness in public.
    I’d like to nominate another ALTs:
    Regards, Htanaungg (talk) 03:36, 26 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

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    Luxembourg in the Eurovision Song Contest

    Improved to Good Article status by Sims2aholic8 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 20 past nominations.

    Sims2aholic8 (talk) 13:19, 26 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   @Sims2aholic8: Article is long enough and listed as GA same day as DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and free from copyvio. All hooks are interesting and sourced. The problem I have with both the nomination and the article is the use of a user-generated blog as a source. This needs to be either replaced in both the article and nomination before approval.

    Hannibal von Degenfeld

     
    Hannibal von Degenfeld, engraving by Wolfgang Philipp Kilian
    • Source: Staudinger 1904, p. 575: "der Begründer des jungen Heeres Freiherr von Degenfeld" and Wheatcroft 2009, p. 168: "...all the main players planned the decisive battle that would settle the fate of Vienna. The duke represented the Habsburg forces and the Emperor; General Hannibal von Degenfeld took the place of his master, Max Emmanuel, the Elector of Bavaria."
    Created by Cplakidas (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 144 past nominations.

    Constantine 16:24, 30 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   All the sources are offline or in German, but just about everything else is in order. Long enough and new enough. I myself prefer the first hook. A few minor quibbles: (1) A couple of sentences in the Venetian service subsection aren't sourced. (2) Is the Life section break really necessary? Clarityfiend (talk) 10:24, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Rozelle–Darling Harbour railway line

    • ALT1: ... that when light rail was first envisioned on what was the Rozelle–Darling Harbour Goods Line, it was presumed that it would share the tracks with goods trains? Source: [18]
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: Since opening this nomination, I have moved the page from Rozelle–Darling Harbour railway line to Rozelle–Darling Harbour Goods Line. The former title reflected general – but not mandatory – convention on articles for Australian railway lines, while the latter reflects the line's common name. As such, this nomination links to what is now a redirect, while the hook itself links to what is now the article's primary title. The article remains the same; it has simply been moved on relatively minor technical grounds. Will Thorpe (talk) 07:03, 4 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Created by Willthorpe (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Will Thorpe (talk) 15:07, 2 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Launchballer The subject of the nomination is the main page, not the redirect. The title of the article (Rozelle-Darling Harbour railway line) reflects Wikipedia convention on the naming of rail lines in Australia, while the hook and article body (Rozelle-Darling Harbour Goods Line) reflects its common name. Happy to amend if necessary. Cheers, Will Thorpe (talk) 01:40, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I’ve actually now requested the article be moved to its common name, which is what is used in the nomination. Cheers, Will Thorpe (talk) 01:57, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
     New enough, long enough, interesting, no copyright problems, hook cited on article, all good. The light is now green. JuniperChill (talk) 21:39, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @Willthorpe and JuniperChill:   iiiiii'm really not sure I'd agree that the hook is interesting? "Largest brick railway viaduct in New South Wales" doesn't seem to leave the reader wanting to know more. theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 04:55, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I was also thinking about it being converted to a light rail line, but that has also occured in Manchester so i don't consider that interesting. In fact, many UK light rail/tram systems actually used part of a former railway line. I also couldn't find anything else in the article that I consider interesting. I have interests in railway related stuff. JuniperChill (talk) 09:55, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    So do I. Biased as I am, I think it's alright – 'largest in NSW' – it's certainly in a niche-ish area, but then so are most other DYKs more or less. Will Thorpe (talk) 15:34, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I'm not sure I understand? Intrigue means curiosity. I don't think "Largest in NSW" is going to make people curious enough to click through to the article. We run plenty of niche DYKs, some of which are intriguing to people outside of the niche and some of which aren't. theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 22:00, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Since an alternative hook hasn't been provided, I think that should be considered. I couldn't really say anything about being the largest in place hooks. Many should know Sydney is NSW's largest city. Everyone should know China/India is the largest country by population, etc. I am not sure if I can help but since its a former goods line, a hook like that may work. JuniperChill (talk) 08:38, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    JuniperChill Can you explain what you mean? theleekycauldron I have added an alternative hook featuring a different fact which I happen to have just added to the article. Will Thorpe (talk) 13:44, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Windy Zhan

     
    Zhan in 2024
    • Reviewed:
    Created by Will629 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Will629 (talk) 19:13, 26 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

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    Strobilanthes tonkinensis

     
    the fragrant leaves of S. tonkinensis seedlings
    Created by Awkwafaba (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

    awkwafaba (📥) 15:31, 27 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Starting Review--Kevmin § 18:48, 6 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      Article move to mainspace new enough and article long enough. non-English sources taken as AGF and reliable. No policy issues could be identified in the article and not areas of close paraphrasing were seen. both hooks are verified. Image is unfortunately blurry at both thumb and zoom. Looks good to go.--Kevmin § 17:01, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on June 28

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    Sizzle Ohtaka

    Moved to mainspace by Miraclepine (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 47 past nominations.

    ミラP@Miraclepine 18:31, 3 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Policy compliance:

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    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   I assume good faith on the non-English references, and I appreciate that you included translations for the hook information. I find ALT0 to be the most interesting hook. SL93 (talk) 01:29, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Cannonball (LIRR train)

     
    The Cannonball
    • Source: [19] The only named train operated by the L.I.R.R., the Cannonball first traveled these tracks in the 1890s as an express train between Long Island City and Southampton.
    Improved to Good Article status by ComplexRational (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

    Complex/Rational 14:29, 29 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   for ALT1 as I think folks will want to click on parlor car and it meets the criteria. For ALT0, the name bit didn't really make me want to read more into it. I'm also not convinced that the source for ALT0 fully backs up the claim, as it says it's the only one known by a name, not necessarily that it is still known by the same name. Seems a bit synthy. Grk1011 (talk) 13:46, 4 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    @Grk1011: Thanks for the review. There are a couple of other sources throughout the article indicating other named trains no longer run, plus the 2024 timetable and press release that mention the name, but I'm cool sticking with ALT1. Complex/Rational 14:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    ABC Cinema, Brighton

     
    The former ABC Cinema, Brighton, in 2016
    • Source: Allen Eyles (2003), Brighton and Hove Cinemas, p.71. "At midnight on Thursday 8 January 1948, the world premiere of Brighton Rock took place at the Savoy (no other cinema was in the running, as it was made by ABC's associated production company)." (First sentence from a full paragraph about the premiere. The Savoy was the name of the cinema at the time, as noted in the article.)
    Created by Hassocks5489 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 99 past nominations.

    Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 19:20, 28 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

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    Sun Zhiyang

    • ... that prior to being appointed as mayor of Guangzhou, Sun Zhiyang worked as a senior engineer and deputy general manager of the Chinese state-owned automobile manufacturer FAW Group?
    Created by Toadboy123 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 37 past nominations.

    Toadboy123 (talk) 13:41, 29 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Article is long enough and new enough. Article is presentable, sourced, and free from copyvio. Hooks are interesting enough and sourced using Chinese sources (hence the good faith). Some sources are state-sponsored (i.e. Xinhua) but acceptable. QPQ done. Thank you for your nomination Toadboy123! Kimikel (talk) 01:54, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Doris Ilda Allen

     
    Doris "Lucki" Allen (center) arriving in Vietnam
    Created by Andrew Davidson (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 127 past nominations.

    Andrew🐉(talk) 16:23, 5 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    • Review
    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 08:04, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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    Francis Procter, A History of the Book of Common Prayer

    Created by Pbritti (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 51 past nominations.

    Pbritti (talk) 17:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Francis Procter is not new/expanded enough to be considered for a DYK, so review is for A History of the Book of Common Prayer only. Suggesting ALT0A:
    ...that Francis Procter was "startled and a little shocked" when he was shown Walter Frere's revision of his book?"

    Bogger (talk) 11:37, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    @Bogger: Both articles were moved to mainspace from userspace drafts on 30 June. The nomination occurred the same day. ~ Pbritti (talk) 13:34, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    My bad. ALT1 approved -Bogger (talk) 14:12, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    The Chinese in America

    • Source: "A ragged tale of riches; Chinese immigration". The Economist. Vol. 367, no. 8329. 2003-06-21. p. 76US. Archived from the original on 2024-06-30. Retrieved 2024-06-30 – via Gale.

      The article notes: "Ms Chang does not delve into the Pacific ties that might have made such a man. She does say that, during the gold rush, many Californians shipped their laundry to be cleaned in Hong Kong, at $1 a shirt. If this is true--and it is a staggering proposition, given that the Pacific Mail Steamship Company made just a dozen sailings a year, taking 33 days--then the subject deserves a chapter, not just the briefest of mentions."

    Created by Cunard (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 77 past nominations.

    Cunard (talk) 11:37, 30 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Rjjiii (talk · contribs), I think the hook is fine. Although the source questions the accuracy of the statement, the source verifies that the book makes this statement. Here are sources that verify that people in California during the gold rush era sent their laundry to Hong Kong:

    1. Goethe, Charles Matthias (1949). What's in a Name?: (Tales, Historical Or Fictitious, about 111 California Gold Belt Place Names). p. 44. OCLC 606542. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Google Books.

      This is not a reliable source as the author is a eugenicist. But I am including it here as it's the earliest source I can find that mentions that California gold miners shipped their laundry to Hong Kong. The book notes: "Apparently eggs from Hong Kong, Canton then were being shipped here with California miners' returned laundry."

    2. Mau, Edward Seu Chen (1989). The Mau Lineage. Honolulu: Hawaii Chinese History Center. University of Hawaii Press. p. 170. ISBN 0-8248-1114-3. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Internet Archive.

      The book notes: "When the Gold Rush started, some of the San Franciscans sent their laundry to Honolulu and even to Hong Kong by sailing vessel because there was no one around to do it. By sailing vessel, it required about forty days for a round trip to Honolulu and about sixty days to Hong Kong."

    3. Rubin, Susan Goldman (1998). Toilets, Toasters and Telephones: The How and Why of Everday Objects. San Diego, California: Browndeer Press. Harcourt Brace & Company. p. 56. ISBN 0-15-201421-7. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Internet Archive.

      The book notes: "Rich gold miners who didn't have a laundry nearby sent their shirts out to be washed, starched, and ironed-in Hong Kong, China! It cost as much as a dollar a shirt and took two to four months for the shirts to make the round-trip."

    4. Williams, Dave (2000). Misreading the Chinese Character: Images of the Chinese in Euroamerican Drama to 1925. New York: Peter Lang. p. 82. ISBN 978-0-8204-4559-5. Retrieved 2024-07-03.

      The book notes: "In the early days of the Gold Rush, Euroamerican men shipped their soiled laundry to Hong Kong or Honolulu for cleaning, and received it again after two or three months."

    5. Tchen, John Kuo Wei (1984). Genthe's Photographs of San Francisco's Old Chinatown. New York: Courier Corporation. ISBN 978-0-486-14069-8. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Google Books.

      The book notes: "As the San Francisco economy boomed with hopeful gold seekers, the city experienced continual labor shortages throughout the 1850s and 1860s. It was cheaper for male miners who refused to wash their own clothes, for example, either to send their dirty laundry on a clipper ship to Hong Kong or Honolulu to be washed or to simply throw it away, than to pay the rates to have their clothes done locally."

    6. Yee, Nick (2014). The Proteus Paradox: How Online Games and Virtual Worlds Change Us—And How They Don't. New Haven, Connecticut: Yale University Press. p. 90. ISBN 978-0-300-19099-1. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Google Books.

      The book notes: "I am describing the mid-nineteenth-century genesis of Chinese laundry shops (yi-shan-guan in Chinese) during and after the California Gold Rush. Due to the perception of laundry as women's work and the scarcity of women in California during the Gold Rush era, the local cost for doing laundry was exorbitant. Miners, both white and Chinese, routinely shipped their laundry to Honolulu and even Hong Kong for cleaning and pressing. Even then, the price was high and the process took four months. As Iris Chang describes in The Chinese in America, Chinese entrepreneurs took advantage of this economic opportunity and created local laundry shops."

    7. Ling, Huping; Austin, Allan, eds. (2015) [2010]. "Laundries, Chinese". Asian American History and Culture: An Encyclopedia: An Encyclopedia. Abingdon, Oxon: Routledge. ISBN 978-0-7656-8077-8. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Google Books.

      The book notes: "The perception by most whites that washing was work demeaning to men, together with the absence of women on the Western frontier, made laundry a service in demand. Before the arrival of the Chinese, and with California labor in short supply and hence expensive, dirty laundry was routed to Hong Kong to be washed for $12 a dozen items, and then later to Hawaii for $8 a dozen. But Chinese entrepreneurs in San Francisco saw the potential profits in doing the washing themselves on the West Coast, and prices dropped to $5 a dozen as shipping and handling costs decreased. Soon, local laundries replaced the overseas ones."

    8. Kuo, John; Tchen, Wei, eds. (1987). "Origin of the Chinese Laundry". The Chinese Laundryman: A Study of Social Isolation. New York: New York University Press. pp. 4647. ISBN 0-8147-7859-3. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Google Books.

      This source predates the 2003 book Chinese in America and discusses how laundry was shipped from San Francisco to Hawaii which cost $8 and took six to eight weeks.

      The book notes: "But it cost money for the San Franciscans to achieve such stylishness and respectability, for the laundry bills were terrific. In order to have their linen washed, starched and ironed to the right degree of whiteness and rigidity cost them eight dollars per dozen, sometimes even more. The men didn't mind paying from three to five dollars for an order of ham and eggs or a steak, but eight dollars just to scrub and iron some pieces of shirt was an excessive price. So there were grumblings aplenty. And not only that, there was also the annoyance of waiting from six to eight weeks for one's laundry to come back each time one sent it off, for mostly they were shipped to the Hawaiian Islands to be washed. And then the shirts might return with buttons missing or collars separated."

    9. Strange USA: Historical Oddities, Roadside Rarities, Unique Eats, and Amazing Americans. San Diego, California: Portable Press. 2023. ISBN 978-1-6672-0115-3. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Google Books.

      The book notes: "3: Number of months it took prospectors to get their clean clothes back before Wah Lee opened San Francisco's first Chinese laundry in 1851. Prior to that, there were so few laundries that miners sent dirty clothes by ship to Hong Kong, where they were cleaned, pressed, and then shipped back."

    10. Blackburn, Sarah-SoonLing (2024). Exclusion and the Chinese American Story. New York: Random House Children's Books. p. 59–60. ISBN 978-0-593-56763-0. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Google Books.

      The book notes: "By the mid-1800s, some people, mostly white, had managed to get rich in the Gold Rush. ... They often thought of laundry as a "woman's job," and therefore, beneath them. Without many other options, it became pretty common for people to ship their laundry all the way to Hong Kong to be cleaned. This took nearly four months and cost about twelve dollars for a dozen shirts, which is equal to about four hundred dollars today. Still, this was way cheaper than the alternative, to send the clothes back to the East Coast of the United States to be cleaned. Remember, the Transcontinental Rail- road wasn't finished yet, so the laundry would have had to go by boat all the way around the continent or over land on a wagon. Hong Kong was the best option for people with the money to spend on laundry, and so the shipment of clothing back and forth across the Pacific Ocean became another link between the coasts of the United States and China, another lane on the highway connecting Chinese Americans between their two lands. In the middle of the Pacific Ocean, and closer to San Francisco than to Hong Kong, you will find the islands of Hawai'i. By the mid-1800s, Hawai'i had become a stopover for people and goods as they went back and forth between China and the West Coast of the continental United States. The rich people who had been shipping their laundry to Hong Kong now had a closer, more affordable option. Instead of spending twelve dollars to have a dozen shirts washed in Hong Kong, they could spend eight dollars to have a dozen shirts washed in Honolulu."

    11. Burman, Edward (2008). China: The Stealth Empire: Why the World is Not Chinese Yet. Stroud, Gloucestershire: The History Press. ISBN 978-0-7524-9619-1. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Google Books.

      The book notes: "As the gold fever cooled, there was a shift in Chinese business patterns, first from mining to laundries, and then to railway construction. The second was the result of quintessentially Chinese entrepreneurship. The Chinese noticed that people in California were prepared to pay for laundry services, which involved shipping to the East Coast, Honolulu and even Hong Kong, which were all both costly and took time. It was obviously beneficial for customers to pay $5 for a dozen shirts rather than $12, and to receive the shirts in a few days rather than up to four months."

    12. McKeown, Adam (2014). "Movement". In Armitage, David; Bashford, Alison (eds.). Pacific Histories: Ocean, Land, People. New York: Palgrave Macmillan. p. 154. ISBN 978-1-137-00163-4. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Google Books.

      The book notes: "A similar story unfolded on the Pacific coast of the Americas. North American trade with Asia and Australia grew rapidly in the 1860s and 1870s, but failed to live up to that potential in subsequent years. In the first years of the gold rush, prices for goods and labour in California were so high that laundry was famously sent from San Francisco to Hong Kong to be washed. By the end of the 1850s, California had begun shipping wheat, quicksilver, hides, lumber, oats, beans, potatoes and wool across the Pacific to Asia and the Australian"

    13. Goldstone, Lawrence (2020). On Account of Race: The Supreme Court, White Supremacy, and the Ravaging of African American Voting Rights. Berkeley, California: Counterpoint. p. 133. ISBN 978-1-64009-576-2. Retrieved 2024-07-03 – via Google Books.

      The book notes: "Most of the men who arrived in California to hunt for gold came alone. Mining was dirty, dusty work, but washing grimy, mud-caked clothes was considered a "woman's job." Some of the more successful single men shipped dirty clothes to Hong Kong and waited months for their return. For the rest, since local Spanish and Native American women charged too high a price, Chinese men filled the void. Within a few years, the Chinese came to dominate the laundry business in San Francisco."

    Cunard (talk) 09:35, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Thanks for the reply. You're right. Rather than doing a review, I'd like to offer an alternative hook. Since multiple university press sources state it as a fact, could we run a hook that also presents it as a historical fact? Like this:

    • ALT1: ... that The Chinese in America documents how California gold rush prospectors mailed their laundry to Hong Kong for cleaning? "While Chang's book might first appear basic in its history lessons, even the most knowledgeable Asian-American scholar will likely find little-known facts and challenging theories within. Chang tells how gold-rush miners - both Chinese and Caucasian - sent their laundry to Hong Kong for lack of local services, hence opening up a business opportunity for entrepreneurial Chinese to take over the "women's work" that Caucasians would not do. (Hong (2003) CSM.)"
    Cited to The Christian Science Monitor in the article. @Cunard: if you're not feeling that, let me know, and I'll strike my suggestion. If you have an improvement, let me know, and I'll review it. Rjjiii (talk) 13:26, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I am reviewing this. Onceinawhile (talk) 06:00, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply


    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Very good article, balanced in tone and content. ALT1 hook works well. Good to go. Onceinawhile (talk) 17:02, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    First Bishops' War

    • ... that despite plans for multiple concentric invasions, the only fighting during the First Bishops' War was in north-east Scotland?
    • Source: Brooks 2005: "The only fighting was in northeast Scotland" and Kenyon & Ohlmeyer 1998a: "Between his allies inside Scotland and the concentric blows from outside the country, the king felt confident of victory."
    Moved to mainspace by CSJJ104 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 13 past nominations.

    CSJJ104 (talk) 21:31, 30 June 2024 (UTC).Reply

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    Overall:   I assume good faith on the references that I can't access, and it's helpful that the nominator included the relevant text. The promoter can choose the hook. SL93 (talk) 00:25, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Myinsaing

    • Source: (Than Tun 1959: 122) and (Than Tun 1964: 137) provide the starting and ending dates of the siege: 25 January 1301 and 8 April 1301, respectively.
    (Harvey 1925: 77) for the amount of bribes given to the Mongols.
    Converted from a redirect by Hybernator (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 112 past nominations.

    Hybernator (talk) 00:37, 1 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Article created from a redirect one day before nomination. Can't seem to notice any issues, will AGF on the inaccessible & Burmese sources for article and hook. QPQ done. Nice work. B3251(talk) 20:58, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Buangkok MRT station

    • ... that in a rare form of public protest in Singapore, eight white cardboard elephants were put up to lobby for Buangkok MRT station's opening?
    Improved to Good Article status by ZKang123 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 15 past nominations.

    ZKang123 (talk) 01:58, 5 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

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    Overall:   Got GA status 5 days ago, so the article and its hook is okay. I omitted the word "rare" because the sources don't exactly state that this type of protest is rare in Singapore. If the nominator can provide source for the claim then I will reverse it. Mehedi Abedin 13:45, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Well, according to Public demonstrations in Singapore, yes they are rare.--ZKang123 (talk) 14:03, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    @ZKang123: Need an inline citation, because that would be WP:OR if we accept the hook without inline citation that states it is rare or any kind of indication in the source. Mehedi Abedin 14:14, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Other sources [22], [23]--ZKang123 (talk) 03:06, 6 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I think you don't understand. You need a source that clearly states or indicates that "the act of putting eight white cardboard elephants for Buangkok MRT station's opening is a 'rare' form of public protest in Singapore". The two sources you provided talks about rare protest in Singapore but nothing about eight white cardboard elephants for Buangkok MRT station's opening. Mehedi Abedin 05:36, 6 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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    Piano Quintet (Shostakovich)

     
    Shostakovich in 1942
    • Source: "His explanation of the change [in instrumentation] was idiosyncratic, to say the least. According to him, his change of heart had not been dominated by artistic considerations at all, but purely practical concerns. "Do you want to know why I wrote a piano part into the quartet? I did it so that I could play it myself and have a reason to go on tour to different towns and places. So now ... the Beethoven Quartet, who get to go everywhere, will have to take me with them, and I will get my chance to see the world as well!" We both laughed. "You are not serious?", I said. Shostakovich replied: "Absolutely! You are a dyed-in-the-wool stay-at-home, but I am a dyed-in-the-wool wanderer!" (Story of a Friendship: The Letters of Dmitry Shostakovich to Isaak Glikman, 1941–1975, p. xxxiii)
    5x expanded by CurryTime7-24 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 46 past nominations.

    CurryTime7-24 (talk) 01:38, 6 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   @CurryTime7-24: Beautiful expansion! I listened to the quintet while I reviewed — such a lovely piece deserving of this amount of detail. The recent 5x is eligible, boasts more than adequate sourcing, and doesn't raise any significant copyvio issues. Some small style issues therein that I would recommend you or another editor walk through at some point. Hook-wise, I would say ALT0 is a little misleading as phrased since he initiated the piano quintet with the intention of traveling to perform the piece, not compose it. You could clarify it or go with ALT1, which is more straightforward. This should be good to go once a QPQ is provided. Spaghettifier (talk) 20:17, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Let me get back to you later today. Thanks for reviewing! —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 22:04, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      Thanks for the QPQ – approved with a pref for ALT1. Spaghettifier (talk) 04:33, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • @Spaghettifier: Regarding your quibble with ALT0, how about...
      • ALT3: ... that Dmitri Shostakovich (pictured) said he composed his Piano Quintet because he wanted a reason to travel and "see the world"? Source: Story of a Friendship: The Letters of Dmitry Shostakovich to Isaak Glikman, 1941–1975, p. xxxiii

    Soviet Red Army Monument, Harbin

     
    Soviet Red Army Monument in Harbin
    Created by Toadboy123 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 38 past nominations.

    Toadboy123 (talk) 07:27, 1 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Tulbaghia acutiloba

     
    T. acutiloba in bloom
    • Reviewed: Three Dikgosi Monument
    • Comment: Thank you in advance to the reviewer! I will be looking into completing my QPQ later today! Done!
    Created by Ornithoptera (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 34 past nominations.

    Ornithoptera (talk) 01:12, 7 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Hi Ornithoptera, review follows: article created 1 July and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I made a small edit that moves one sentence a little away from the source, there is some similarity left but I think on the right side of acceptability given limited options for rewording; hook is interesting enough for me, mentioned in the article and checks out to source cited; image is nice and freely licensed; my only query is on your QPQ, you say you'll be doing it on 7 July but the one you've linked is from 2012 by another user? - Dumelow (talk) 14:59, 8 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      Thanks Ornithoptera, looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 19:18, 8 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    TESCREAL

    Moved to mainspace by Bluethricecreamman (talk), GorillaWarfare (talk), and JoaquimCebuano (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 21 past nominations.

    GorillaWarfare (she/her • talk) 17:16, 1 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Was a draft until today so new enough and, as I now realise, also long enough. I can't see any problems in the article around copyvio, POV or OR. Sourcing looks good overall and the hook citations appear to be sound and reliable. The hook is certainly interesting because it caught my eye immediately when I was checking my own nomination. QPQ has been done. I think this is fine and it should be promoted. PearlyGigs (talk) 21:17, 1 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • Strong Oppose this nomination: An article on this subject was deleted 7 months ago because of weak sourcing. There haven't been any new sources added other than a paper by the two proponents of this theory and lots of other really weak sources. Wikipedia's job isn't to promote anti-vaxx conspiracy theories or other conspiracy theories, of which in my and other people's opinions, this is one. The only people claiming that ANYONE adheres to these multiple philosophies is Torres and Gebru. ---Avatar317(talk) 00:56, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Original admin who closed AfD undeleted it after i proposed appropriate changes. the AfD never came to consensus of conspiracy theory (just u), and deleted it due to lack of WP:N. if u want to delete this again, use AfD again or bug the original admin.Bluethricecreamman (talk) 01:12, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Agreed that that would be a conversation for AfD, not DYK. The article is neutral and adequately sourced. GorillaWarfare (she/her • talk) 01:57, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    The LEAD is well written and neutral, thanks for that.---Avatar317(talk) 03:34, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • I was aware when I did the DYK review that the article is about ideologies, but I don't consider the article to be promoting those ideologies because it is neutral. The subject, in my opinion, is notable. I can't say I'm knowledgeable about TESCREAL but the article does appear to be adequately sourced. I've been reading it again and I still think the hook should be promoted. But, as I say, I am not an SME in this area so I will happily step aside if an SME is needed. Incidentally, the lead is the primary location of the hook material and its two sources. Thanks. PearlyGigs (talk) 09:55, 2 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • I have to second the concerns brought up above: this article was merged in November for poor sourcing and the fact that it seemed to lean very heavily into the op-ed angle of the source it did use. To be clear, I certainly have a great personal distaste for the majority of people who run the majority of software companies, and ethical objections to a good portion of the United States' GDP (I am a diehard Linux user with all of the political implications that entails). However, the implication that "global tech elites" are engaged in a deliberate scheme to carry out eugenics (as one of the sources said from the previous version of this article), based on a collection of op-eds and blog posts where people who hate them say this a bunch of times, seems to raise some rather significant BLP issues. It is somewhat concerning to vaguely imply this in wikivoice as though it's settled fact, and then the citations are to a journal of biosemiotics. jp×g🗯️ 02:17, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • Posting on here same stuff as in the Talk Page section:
    A) This article was merged for lack of WP:N. If you consider it still an issue, use WP:AfD or bug the original admin who deleted, merged, than undeleted this. It isn't a valid argument to suggest that it's settled that it deserves to remerged if we've added a ton of sourcing and improved on it. Settle it by starting the process to delete it if you want.
    B) Are there reliable sources indicating that TESCREAL is a significantly derogatory epithet similar to Libtard/Chud? Marc Andreessen self-describes as TESCREAList. Many of these folks regularly ascribe to multiple of these philosophies as transhumanists, ethical altruists, long-termists, etc. Sourcing here does not necessarily imply that every TESCREAList is also a eugenicist, nor do we use WP:SYNTH to suggest that these folks are all eugenicists. There is no mention of eugenicist claims in the third section. Also, we have Big Tech as a wikipedia article along with criticism, which is also a similar "perjorative" against tech companies, and other significant "perjoratives" with negative connotations such as Democrat in Name Only and Cuckservative. These all explain what opinion writers and commentators mean, and why. This article is far more tame than many of those.
    C) That more than a dozen opinions use a term like this should be notable enough. I suspect that any sort of article about philosophies will require opinionated sources or commentaries. Effective altruism includes sourcing from Centre for Effective Altruism and by extension the Effective Altruism Forum, study centers specifically invested in effective altruism and founded by leaders, as well as many opinions.
    D) WP:OPINION applies here, especially for philosphical arguments. I looked for criticisms of TESCREAL. If more are published, we can include them. These sources are WP:SECONDARY, they contain analysis, evaluation, interpretation, or synthesis of the facts, evidence, concepts, and ideas taken from primary sources. Secondary sources are not necessarily independent sources.
    E) If you want to settle WP:BLP, please post in the section on WP:BLPN. We've already started and done this argument. There are multiple sources on WP:PUBLICFIGUREs here alleging that many of these folks use TESCREAL to justify their tech projects, and we make sure to use the word "allege" correctly, as per WP:OPINION, along with the correct sourcing
    Conclusion:) TESCREAL is unliked by some portion of folks on here for some reason. I'm happy to listen to arguments, but I want an argument about why we are suddenly so sensitive about criticism of Elon Musk/etc. for using human extinction for every time someone criticizes his behavior or cars or products. If you are just an elon musk/nick bostrum/etc. fan, than say it and stop throwing mud on an article that contains a criticism of philosophies that occurs often enough that we can gather 20+ sources, including 10 using the term in severe detail to directly dissect the argument that yelling extinction every 15 minutes doesn't mean you've justified your next mega project. Bluethricecreamman (talk) 04:39, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      Note: In the interests of not duplicating every comment, I'll just note that there is a parallel discussion happening at Talk:TESCREAL#Neutrality (to/from which some of these comments have been copied). GorillaWarfare (she/her • talk) 12:02, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Lewis Worthington Smith

    Created by SL93 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 409 past nominations.

    SL93 (talk) 00:56, 1 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Hook is interesting and appropriately sourced. Article is both long and new enough. No copyvio concerns. QPQ done. I'd wager that The Mechanism of English Style is either suitable as a redirect or an article. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 15:50, 1 July 2024 (UTC)Reply


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    The boys of Pointe du Hoc

    Moved to mainspace by MicrobiologyMarcus (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    microbiologyMarcus [petri dish·growths] 20:45, 2 July 2024 (UTC).Reply


    General: Article is new enough and long enough

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    Overall:   All sources verified. Good to go with main or either ALT. Hawkeye7 (discuss) 20:33, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    2024 MLS All-Star Game

    Converted from a redirect by SounderBruce (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 237 past nominations.

    SounderBruce 02:07, 2 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Article is newly created (converted from redirect) and long enough. QPQ has been done. The six sources in the article are reliable (ESPN) or from official press releases. But there are a couple of copyvio concerns, especially phrases like "selected by MLS commissioner Don Garber", "was created on May 13", "appeared in at least 50 percent" which can be further reworded. Personally I find the ALT1 hook more interesting, especially on its focus on the bolded article.--ZKang123 (talk) 02:33, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Accessibility of transport in London

     
    London Taxi with wheelchair ramp
    Moved to mainspace by Turini2 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Turini2 (talk) 12:44, 2 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
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    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   Some problems need fixing. TheNuggeteer (talk) 02:29, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    I've made changes and comments as required to the article. I think I'd like to focus on the positive hooks, with this photo instead? Turini2 (talk) 11:29, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
     
    London bus with wheelchair ramp
    I think I found a better hook.
    I think that is more interesting as since the TfL bus fleet has been accessible for a while. but since the LU is the oldest metro systems, its partially accessible with only a third. Also with taxis, I assume you're talking about the TfL ones since other services like Uber likely don't have the accessibility scheme in place and use a normal car. I also think something that is not mostly accessible is better and more interesting that those that are fully accessible. For example, a hook stating that the Elizabeth line is fully accessible (even including the old stations) wouldn't be interesting as new(er) systems are expected to be accessible/have step free systems. JuniperChill (talk) 09:36, 8 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
     
    Sure, I'm happy to go with that hook with a minor tweak for "step-free"- yes, I mean "London black taxi", technically Uber is not a taxi (Vehicle for hire). I didn't want to be too negative about accessibility, but the Tube one is balanced. Could use the lead photo - unsure on caption though! Turini2 (talk) 10:51, 8 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Sorry for the late reply as I was out and about. Anyway, I don't really need to see the point of the photo if we are talking about 1/3rd of LU stations accessible since I cannot think what demonstrates it, plus its very tight for images on DYK because only one image a day (or two images a day in the event of a backlog) for the ~8 hooks. Also @TheNuggeteer:, what do you think of the new hook as you initially reviewed it? JuniperChill (talk) 16:23, 8 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I think "only" should be removed, but other than that, it's fine. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 23:38, 8 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    All other issues with the article are now resolved (it has a more substantive lead, fixed words etc) Turini2 (talk) 09:03, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      Now its time to turn the signal green now that the hook issue has been fixed. I didn't know step-free has a hyphen so I'm fine with that alongside removing the 'only'. JuniperChill (talk) 10:36, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Capital Bicycle Club

     
    Sketch of Capital Bicycle Club uniform, 1883
    • Source: Bloom, John (2015). "The Extraordinary History of Cycling and Bike Racing in Washington, DC". In Elzey, Chris; Wiggins, David K. (eds.). DC Sports: The Nation's Capital at Play. pages 3–5
    Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 57 past nominations.

    Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:18, 3 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
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    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Looks good. Nice work. AGF on hook source. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:56, 4 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Riley Gale

     
    Riley Gale in 2019
    • ... that a critic compared vocalist Riley Gale (pictured) to a "rabid wolf"?
    Converted from a redirect by Kimikel (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Kimikel (talk) 01:21, 3 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    • Kimikel Article meets DYK standards – well-sourced, neutral, and free of plagiarism (the article is a defo must-read, pretty nice writing for a short article). The source comes from a reliable source which is... the bare minimum but yeah it works! The image supplied works as well, pretty nice quality. Original alt works.   Arconning (talk) 15:42, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply


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    Tomato sandwich

     
    Tomato sandwich
    5x expanded by Valereee (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 73 past nominations.

    Valereee (talk) 17:35, 7 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

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    • Other problems:   - See below.
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Great expansion; very informative article on a local delicacy. QPQ and Earwig all good. The problem is the hook, which is misleadingly written in wikivoice. The hook needs to make clear that it is not stating an objective fact, but referring to an opinion from the cited source. —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 21:58, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Thanks for the review, CurryTime7-24 -- would this work:
    ALT0a: ... that the best tomato sandwiches (pictured) are so messy, enthusiasts recommend they be eaten over the kitchen sink?
    Valereee (talk) 22:37, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    This is better, but "best sandwiches" and their suggested ideal method of eating are both opinions from the cited source. Slight adjustments to ALT0a should solve this issue. Thanks for the reply! —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 23:08, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    ALT0b: ... that enthusiasts consider the best tomato sandwiches (pictured) to be so messy that they should be eaten over the kitchen sink?
    * Pppery * it has begun... 05:19, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Thanks, Pppery...maybe a slight tweak:
    ALT0c: ... that some enthusiasts consider the best tomato sandwiches (pictured) to be those so messy they should be eaten over the kitchen sink?
    ALT1: ... that some enthusiasts consider being so messy it needs to be eaten over the kitchen sink one of the marks of a good tomato sandwich (pictured)?
    Valereee (talk) 13:09, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Ping CurryTime7-24 -- does one of these work for you? Valereee (talk) 17:48, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

      Both ALT0c and ALT1 are dandy, thanks! Great work. —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 18:14, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    John Henry Hirst

    • ... that architect John Henry Hirst was found at the bottom of the stairs at home, with a broken neck?
    • Source: "The late Mr J. H. Hirst". Western Daily Press. 8 July 1882. p. 5 col.8. "(Inquest report:) Death resulted from an accident at his residence ... Death was the result of a dislocation of the neck caused by an accidental fall downstairs".
    Moved to mainspace by Storye book (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 107 past nominations.

    Storye book (talk) 09:23, 8 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Environmental impacts of artificial intelligence

    • ... that training the model for ChatGPT used the equivalent energy footprint of driving 123 gasoline-powered passenger vehicles for a year?
    Created by Bluethricecreamman (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Bluethricecreamman (talk) 03:58, 3 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
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    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   awkwafaba (📥) 16:04, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @Bluethricecreamman: Thank you for your hard work. Please fix copyvios and sourcing issues and then we can proceed.

    Ok, i've updated the template with the corrected source for the first one (I guess I mixed up the two scientific american articles, I think they bothy say that GPT-3 releases 552 metric tons of Co2, but only one talks about the comparison to cars. Thanks for catching that! Also fixed ALT1, thanks for fixing that as well! Apologies for incorrect info, I'll try to read a bit slower with these articles. Bluethricecreamman (talk) 21:45, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      I didn't dig to hard on that spammy site earlier, sorry. I agree that they stole from enwiki and not the other way around. All three hooks are good to go. I think ALT0 is the most compelling. awkwafaba (📥) 01:05, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Specifically, I am a little concerned that statistics-heavy topics like this, when they're directly related to buzzwordy trending topics in the news cycle, tend to be very ill-suited to being patched out from headlines. That is to say, writing the shark attack and dog attack based solely on news coverage would give the impression that these were both uncommon things that do happen every once in a while, when in reality the yearly rates are eighty versus several million. This article quotes a bunch of figures from news stories back-to-back, and there doesn't really seem to be much attempt at comparison or context. For example, there is a paper cited that projects 85-143 TWh of global power consumption from neural networks by 2027, based on a conjectural optimistic scenario where NVIDIA/TSMC transition their entire manufacturing output to A100s (all of which are installed in data centers and used for nothing but LLM inference). By comparison, this paper estimated that video gaming consumed 34 TWh/year in the United States alone in 2019; this document from the DoE says that aluminum production in the US in 2000 consumed a total of 279.2 TWh/yr. The US consumes about 16% of the world's electricity, so a very rough approximation here would give a ballpark estimate of 212.5 TWh for gaming (the US does about 2% of aluminum production worldwide, giving us around 13960 TWh yearly for global aluminum production). It also seems like there is a lot of ambiguity between training (a fixed cost, as models are only trained once) and inference (the process that happens when running the model, which typically requires billions or trillions of times less computation). I am somewhat worried about having this on the front page. jp×g🗯️ 23:45, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    you are literally using us energy gov stats to WP:SYNTH a whataboutism argument… by the same logic, the criticism section of any industries environmental impact can be called misleading because theres always another more polluting industry you can point to. the comparison you suggest is “missing” is literally that training ChatGPT training took as much energy as 123 gasoline powered cars yearly footprints. and suggesting that including examples from news articles headlining the carbon footprint is a bad thing for wikipedia is inane. most articles on here use secondary souces such as news articles. and most DyK hooks are eyecatching Bluethricecreamman (talk) 00:34, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    For the specific task of literally writing an encyclopedia article about a topic, I would say that answering questions like "why is this statistic relevant" or "what does this number mean" is probably its most important purpose. I gave a couple examples to illustrate what this looks like, obviously there is no reason why aluminum manufacturing in particular is more relevant than anything else. The most appropriate source here would likely be something like a textbook or monograph about electrical consumption by various industries, and how this related to environmental concerns in general. Since this is a subject of rather large significance, it is important that our writing on it be accurate, and not news. I am opposed to running stuff on the main page where vague insinuations are made by factoids of unexplained significance -- e.g. what's a terawatt-hour? what's a gram of CO2? why are some figures given in one and some as the other, and still others given in folksy derivative units like average midsize sedan gasoline consumption rates over average suburban commutes? jp×g🗯️ 01:06, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Moreover, ALT0 is not supported by the source. Indeed, OpenAI's well-known sleazy refusal to be transparent about any of its operations or research means that the source cannot say that, because the source does not know. The figure claimed as fact in this hook is, in the source, carefully and explicitly presented as an approximate figure derived by estimation (it's from https://arxiv.org/abs/2104.10350 -- note the methods they are using). jp×g🗯️ 01:16, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I'm not arguing these bad faith arguments after this. The source link is literally right there for anyone to read. There are three links I cite with the 552 metric tons figure in the article. Most of the "environmental impacts of" are similar collections of "factoids" discussing various industry leaders. And by your logic of WP:NOTNEWS, we should remove most news articles discussing long term trends in any industry. WP:NOTNEWS specifically states no original reporting on wikipedia (we don't report the news ourselves, we cite it), and calls for enduring notability of information (we don't do an article if its just one or two articles). if you find a reputable source arguing that this is a false number or a false comparison, feel free to edit the article. I respect your work as an admin, and your experience, but this is silly. Bluethricecreamman (talk) 01:35, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    William P. Dole

    • Source: Kelsey, Harry (1979). "William P. Dole (1861–1865)". In Kvasnicka, Robert M.; Viola, Herman J. (eds.). The Commissioners of Indian Affairs, 1824-1977. Lincoln: University of Nebraska Press. pp. 139-140
     
    William P. Dole, 1860s
    Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 58 past nominations.

    Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:26, 3 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting:  
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Epicgenius (talk) 15:21, 5 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Scott Jarvis (actor)

    Created by 4meter4 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 83 past nominations.

    4meter4 (talk) 17:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Cocoa production in São Tomé and Príncipe

     
    Cocoa harvested in São Tomé and Príncipe
    • Source: Drew, Keith (6 July 2023). "How the Chocolate Islands are rediscovering their roots". BBC. Retrieved 28 June 2024. The trees thrived in the rich volcanic soil, and by the early 1900s, São Tomé and Príncipe was the biggest exporter of cacao in the world, earning it the nickname of 'The Chocolate Islands'.
    • ALT1: ... that São Tomé and Príncipe was known as "the Chocolate Islands" in the early 1900s, when it was the world's top exporter of cocoa (samples pictured)? Source: Same as above.
    • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Emmanuella Atora
    • Comment: Technically, São Tomé and Príncipe is a singular country (a Portuguese colony at the time mentioned in the hook). The hook should therefore use singular conjugations of verbs, but it sounded too odd upon my initial reading. I thus changed the verbs to their plural conjugations, as if the islands themselves are being described rather than the modern country or the former colony. I have nonetheless included my original wording as ALT1, in case the reviewer or promoter wants to compare the two.
    Created by Yue (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

    Yue🌙 07:35, 3 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Hi Yue, review follows: article created 3 July and exceeds minimum length; I reworded one sentence slightly to move it further from the source, but otherwise I don't think there is an issue with overly close paraphrasing; article is cited inline throughout to what look to be reliable sources for the subject; hook fact is interesting, mentioned in the article and checks out to source cited (BBC); a QPQ has been provided; image is properly licensed and looks fine. I changed from single to double quotation marks in the hooks to match the article and, I think, our MOS. In terms of plurals I think English_plurals#Geographical_plurals_used_as_singular discusses this; either alternative sounds OK to me but British English tends to be a bit more flexible than US English on this (see eg. Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style#Plurals) - Dumelow (talk) 09:40, 3 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @Dumelow: Thank you for taking the time to do this review! On second thought, maybe ALT1 is the better choice because ALT0 implies that there were two exporters instead of one. Yue🌙 02:53, 4 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 4

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    Highest averages method

    Improved to Good Article status by Closed Limelike Curves (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Closed Limelike Curves (talk) 17:27, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   no concerns; it's a new GA. prefer ALT1 as clearer and hook-ier to a general audience. good work! ... sawyer * he/they * talk 01:24, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Abdul Ali Deobandi

    • ... that Abdul Ali Deobandi stipulated that women were prohibited from learning reading and writing, even at home?
    • Reviewed:
    Created by Faldi00 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Faldi00 (talk) 08:12, 6 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Article is new, long enough and neutral. It cites sources inline. "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" reports very few text similiarity commenting "violation unlikely". The hokk is well-formatted and interesting. Its length is within limit. Its fact is accurate, however, a reference is needed directly at the end of the sentence in the article. No QPQ is required for the nominator. I will approve after the reference issue is addressed. CeeGee 15:19, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    •   I added the missing citing by myself because there wa no reaction in couple of days, and the issue was minor. I guess the issue was not understood. Anyway, it is now fine. Good to go. CeeGee 03:22, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Céline Dept

     
    Celine Dept in 2024
    • ... that Céline Dept (pictured) was the first Belgian YouTuber to reach 10 million subscribers?
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: Several newspapers in Belgium covered this fact at the time, so I think it's notable.
    Created by Howardcorn33 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Howard🌽33 20:26, 4 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough

    Policy compliance:

    • Adequate sourcing:   - This direct quote needs to have a footnote immediately following: "At first, it was all for fun, but suddenly it went super fast and I was busy with it full time." Per DYK guidelines, the hook fact needs to also have a footnote directly following it; I would put one where the fact appears in both the lead and body.
    • Neutral:  
    • Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:  
    • Other problems:   - I'm a little concerned about the reliablity of TVovermind. Searching for it on the perennial sources noticeboard, there's some concern that it's a low-quality clickbait website. Is there a better source available for Dept's birthday? Her nlwiki article cites Famous Birthdays, which is blacklisted and therefore unhelpful. Otherwise, WP:DOB dictates we need to remove it or only include the year, should a source be available. (Maybe check her socials? A birthday tweet or something would be acceptable.)
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   @Howardcorn33: Meets criteria, Earwig clear, very well-sourced, image is CC licensed, just a couple of tweaks needed. TCMemoire 14:40, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Comment: I have added a citation in the lead for where it mentions the DYK fact, in addition to placing a citation next to the direct quotation. As for her birth date, I have been unable to find any source, excluding TVovermind, which states her birth date in full. I have found a pinned YouTube comment in her CEMI channel which says her birthday is on December 8.[1] We know that she was 23 years old on September 26, 2023,[2] so I believe we can infer her birth date as being December 8, 1999. Would it be acceptable if I assembled these two sources to state her full birth date? ―Howard🌽33 19:28, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    1. ^ Pinned comment at "WIJ ORGANISEREN EEN VERJAARDAGSFEEST VOOR 8-JARIGE FAN.. (Ze Weet Van Niets..) #630" (Media notes) (in Dutch). 2023-10-15. Archived from the original on 2024-07-09. Retrieved 2024-07-09. Op welke dag ben jij jarig? 🎉 Michiel 6 april & Celine 8 december!
    2. ^ "Céline Dept becomes first Belgian to reach 10 million YouTube subscribers". The Brussels Times. 2023-09-26. Archived from the original on 2024-07-04. Retrieved 2024-07-04.
    @Howardcorn33: Unfortunately not; WP:DOB addresses this point, that concensus has been reached that combining sources to deduce a birthdate is considered WP:SYNTH. I would bet that TVovermind is just ripping from Famous Birthdays. Good new, though: if you go back through her celine.dept Instagram, there's a post from December 9, 2019, where she says "yesterday was my 20th birthday", we can use that. I would drop the link for you but I'm having issues linking from Instagram on my phone, sorry! Edit: She also dropped this Tiktok with #22, so that helps alleviate any concern that she wouldn't be okay continuing to advertise her birthday. TCMemoire 09:46, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @TCMemoire: I have added the Instagram and TikTok posts as references and removed Tvovermind. ―Howard🌽33 14:30, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      @Howardcorn33: Thanks. Good to go now :) TCMemoire 17:41, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Bengisu Avcı

    • Source: "En son Hawaii’deki Ka’iwi (Molokai) parkurunu yüzmeye çalıştım,", "Her açık deniz yüzücüsünün hayali olan Okyanus 7’lisinin 5. parkurunda Portekiz Man o'War denizanasına temas edince büyük acı duyan Bengisu, parkuru tamamlayamadı." (in Turkish) [29]
    Created by CeeGee (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 221 past nominations.

    CeeGee 15:51, 9 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Great work! I'm currently in Turkey and I enjoyed reading and reviewing the article, and it looks like it has no obvious issues from what I can see. I'm partial to the second hook but open to either hook being used depending on the final decision of the closing reviewer. --Sky Harbor (talk) 16:56, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    George Hunter Cary

    Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 59 past nominations.

    Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:33, 4 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 5

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    Fred Thomas (British politician)

  • Alt1... that before Fred Thomas became Member of Parliament for Plymouth Moor View, he was the Royal Marines' light heavyweight boxing champion?
  • Alt2... that before Fred Thomas became Member of Parliament for Plymouth Moor View, he learned to read and write in Arabic and studied abroad in Egypt?
  • Created by Sahaib (talk) and Gaia Octavia Agrippa (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 29 past nominations.

    Sahaib (talk) 13:44, 6 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   I am concerned about the hook for WP:BLP focusing on the negative aspects of his career. Can you share some alternatives? AnotherColonialHistorian (talk) 15:15, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

     Y Much better and more interesting! Approve Alt1. AnotherColonialHistorian (talk) 16:42, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Three Dikgosi Monument

    Improved to Good Article status by 48JCL (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    48JCL 16:01, 5 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Going to review this one, since my DYK nomination has a distribution in Botswana as well. Was on DYK previously, but guidelines were changed to allow for renominations after 5 years (previous inclusion was in 2012). New enough, long enough, sourced, neutral, and plagiarism free. Hook is cited and interesting. I'm going to hold on to the confirmation temporarily to ensure whether @48JCL: wants to include the photograph as well, since there appears to be a caption but there is no photograph included in the template. Ornithoptera (talk) 01:28, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Ornithoptera, as Botswana does not have Freedom of Panorama, we can't run this hook with an image. Schwede66 05:29, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    User:Ornithoptera Thanks, but this isn't my first time here. Regards, 48JCL 01:27, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    2024 Rose Bowl

    5x expanded by PCN02WPS (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 77 past nominations.

    PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 03:09, 6 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General eligibility:

    Policy compliance:

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    • Other problems:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Ready to go. Sahaib (talk) 15:51, 6 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Tobey (song)

    Created by Launchballer (talk) and Dxneo (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 236 past nominations.

    Launchballer 09:26, 5 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    @Arconning: We have a slight problem, in that I just came across this BBC piece which confirms that it is definitely Shady Eminem takes a chainsaw to, which means "likely" won't fly. What is your opinion of the following:
    ALT1: ... that the music video for "Tobey", in which Eminem carves into his own alter ego with a chainsaw, was delayed by three days?
    ALT2: ... that the music video for "Tobey", featuring "3 generations of Detroit", features Eminem carving into his own alter ego with a chainsaw?--Launchballer 13:06, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Launchballer Since the "likely" isn't applicable now, wouldn't it be better to omit "likely" and I'd suggest ALT1a: ... that in the music video for "Tobey", Eminem carves into his own alter ego with a chainsaw?" Though ALT1 itself is fine for me, just need your confirmation if you're okay with sticking with ALT1. Arconning (talk) 13:20, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I think it might fall foul of WP:DYKFICTION on its own, hence the extra information. I'm sure a promoter can opine.--Launchballer 13:23, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      Pass for ALT1 Arconning (talk) 13:30, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 6

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    Anderson's Grocery

     
    Anderson's Grocery sign on Clarke Avenue
    • ... that in its centennial year Anderson's Grocery (sign pictured) was one of only 10 small chain groceries 100 years or older?
    • Source: Craig, john (June 25, 2000). "A century in the family". The Spokesman-Review. Spokesman Review, Jun 6, 2000. Page B1 ...able to identify about 10 small grocery chains across the county that have been in business 100 years or more
    • ALT1: ... that during its over 100 years of business Anderson's Grocery (sign pictured) used to have egg and wool bartering, grain milling, and vehicle fueling? Source: Spokesman Review, Jun 6, 2000. Page B1 & B5
    • ALT2: ... that with a full 1955 rebuild and 1985 expansion, Anderson's Grocery (sign pictured) had never burned down with the rest of republic? Source: Spokesman Review, Jun 6, 2000. Page B5 They coped with devastating fires- Anderson's is one of the few businesses to never burn down... & ...are located where the tiny wood frame building originally stood. The store was rebuilt in 1955 and expanded and renovated in 1985.
    • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Satin berrypecker
    Moved to mainspace by Kevmin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 353 past nominations.

    Kevmin § 19:21, 6 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    • Starting review
    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    • Other problems:   - ?
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Valereee (talk) 18:04, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    • I've added a cn for an unsourced statement. There's a period missing at the end of the same sentence, maybe you got distracted just then?I'm also not a huge fan of any of the hooks, I feel like they could be tightened. For instance, what does have been rebuilt or expanded have to do with burning down? The hook seems to be relating the two. "Over its century plus of business...formerly offered" seems awkward...why does it matter that it was a century of business? Maybe something like 'that the nearly 125-year-old Anderson's Grocery used to offer' or something? I like the ALT0 idea a lot, but is it possible to update? We're basically saying that in 2000 it was blah blah blah. It's now 2024, is it still one of ten? Also "was one of only 10 small chain groceries 100 years or older?" feels awkward, it feels like it should be "was one of only 10 small chain groceries 100 years old or older?" or "at least a century in business" or something. Valereee (talk) 18:07, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @Valereee: I have to work with what sources are out there, hence the hooks that have been provided. We have a RS that discusses the Centennial, we do not have a RS thats keeping a running tally of the store now being 122yo, 123yo, 124. As such i erred on the side of DYK rules requiring sources for everything and noted the Centennial.
    The expansion hook is relevant to Republic (like most western towns) almost totally burnt down several times, Andersons got lucky and didnt, but the original building has still been destroyed with the rebuild and the expansion. so yes the hook IS relating the two based on the noted fire history of the West
    I reworded the three hooks a bit to combat verbosity. I also added the missing citation.--Kevmin § 20:51, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    So the kinds of things I was thinking are like:

    ALT0a: * ... that in its centennial year, Anderson's Grocery (sign pictured) was said to be one of only 10 US small grocery chains still in business after 100 years or more? '100 years or older' just feels awkward

    ALT1a: ... that Anderson's Grocery (sign pictured) once bartered with customers for eggs and wool and offered grain milling? Vehicle fueling doesn't seem that interesting, Kroger's does it now

    ALT2a: ... that unlike most of Republic, Washington, during its first hundred years of business, Anderson's Grocery (sign pictured) never burned?

    ALT2b:... that Anderson's Grocery (sign pictured) was rebuilt in 1955, but not because it, unlike most of Republic, Washington, had burned? I get that it's interesting that the building has been rebuilt for a reason other than typical for the area, and that so yes it's related, but we aren't saying that in ALT2. We're just stating two apparently unrelated facts. We need to either make the connection or make it so intriguing that there doesn't seem to be a connection that people's interest is piqued.

    Valereee (talk) 21:59, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    All four massaged alts look good and are factual to the souring. I would say I most like Alt0a and alt2a. --00:40, 8 July 2024 (UTC)

      Just to approve one or more of the tweaked hooks. Valereee (talk) 01:18, 8 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    @Valereee: @Kevmin: I do like ALT0a or ALT2a best, not a big fan of the other two--ALT2b is just a bit confusing. ALT0a could also be shortened to "...was one of only 10 US small grocery chains over 100 years old".
    Also: is the missing apostrophe and uneven capitalization in Andersons Grocery, A family Tradition intentional? Anderson's is missing the apostrophe in a couple of other places in the prose; please make sure one spelling is chosen and stuck with (other than when listed as a historical name) and matches the article title. TCMemoire 13:49, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Apostrophes added to areas where missing, (I've always had a bad habit of skipping them when typing). The title case structuring for "Andersons Grocery, A family Tradition" is purposeful as the store itself uses title case with modified capital A.--Kevmin § 15:05, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @Valereee, Kevmin, and TCMemoire: Looks like the source attributes to the Food Marketing Institute – could this hook do so as well? (Shameless plug to my essay on this topic.) theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 17:55, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I would be opposed to that in the hook, as the major criticism @Valereee: gave initially revolved around verbosity. The article itself already reflects the source of the Spokesman-Review information as FMI.--Kevmin § 23:30, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    You can't state that a fact is true in wikivoice if the source you're citing isn't willing to do so, it's an exaggeration of the veracity of the information. theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 00:53, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • *sigh* This is a pendantic level of quibbling that should not be holding up nominations (and also not a core DYK rule). But since you are holding up the nomination:

    ALT0B: * ... that in its centennial year, Anderson's Grocery (sign pictured) was said to be one of only 10 US small grocery's over 100 years old?

    Sorry to push yet more grammar fixes but "groceries" is misspelled, the order of its adjectives should be flipped, and "X in X" statements should be congruent with number case. Here:

    ALT0C: * ... that in its centennial year, Anderson's Grocery (sign pictured) was said to be 1 of only 10 small US groceries over 100 years old?

    @Kevmin, Valereee, and Theleekycauldron: All gucci? Now watch this hook not even get used TCMemoire 17:37, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I've never claimed perfectin at writing the language, :D This looks great to me.--Kevmin § 17:24, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      @Kevmin: Sorry, thought this one had been given a tick already :) TCMemoire 09:59, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Richard Beale Davis, Chivers' Life of Poe

    • Source: Chivers' Life of Poe, p. 15. "The state of Chivers' manuscript would suggest that he continued to revise the work at least through 1857, the year he died."
    Improved to Good Article status by Pretzelles (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Pretzelles (talk) 21:19, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   Promoted to GA on 5 July. The following sentence lacks an inline citation: "In 2010, Lofaro published Southern Manuscript Sermons before 1800: A Bibliography, dedicating the work to Davis and noting him as one of four contributing editors."

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   Moved to mainspace on 12 July. The synopsis doesn't need citations. For this DYK nomination, only one QPQ is needed, as the nominator had four nominations beforehand. Skyshiftertalk 23:41, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Wandering Souls (novel)

    Created by MarchOfTheGreyhounds (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 411 past nominations.

    SL93 (talk) 21:05, 7 July 2024 (UTC).Reply


    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Thank you for this useful article, on a subject which needs to be written about.

    • Note: The article has well over 2,000 characters (not counting the summary section, which has no citations). Therefore it is long enough. WP book-plot summaries are not usually cited, and the rest of the article is properly sourced (except see my last bullet point below)..
    • I have given the article a minor copyedit. That does not affect DYK.
    • A Very British History is not mentioned in the source you have given above, for ALT0. I have checked all the other sources in the article, and cannot find it in any of them. Am I missing something? Please tell me where the fact is cited, or add a new source for that fact to the article?

    When a source is found for the above fact, this nomination should be good to go. Storye book (talk) 09:13, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Storye book I have fixed the sourcing in the article. The gal-dem source says the episode is Whatever Happened to the Boat People? and I added a further source showing which show the episode came from. SL93 (talk) 13:26, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Thank you for your prompt reply, SL93. That is a brilliant solution, thank you. Now all is clear in the article.
      Good to go. Storye book (talk) 18:39, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Congenital anosmia

    Created by AbhiSuryawanshi (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    AbhiSuryawanshi (talk) 21:28, 6 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Why not make the hook short and snappy? Schwede66 05:34, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Much better! AbhiSuryawanshi (talk) 16:08, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • I'll take over.
    General: Article is new enough and long enough

    Policy compliance:

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited:   - ALT0 is verified. ALT1's source does not seem to mention food enjoyment. Neither of ALT2's sources from the article nor the one in Ben Cohen (businessman)'s article mention that his anosmia is congenital. Assuming that ALT3 is the same source as ALT0, it also checks out.
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   awkwafaba (📥) 15:52, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    @AbhiSuryawanshi: I just want to make sure you saw this. awkwafaba (📥) 02
    12, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
    @Awkwafaba: Thanks for the ping. I would like to know if I can add more sources such as https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/full/10.1177/01455613221111496 and https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC5865213/ for ALT3 --AbhiSuryawanshi (talk) 06:08, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @AbhiSuryawanshi: Both of those sources support the claim in ALT3 (as did the source from ALT0). The first one directly cites this article so that would probably be the best source. These should be added in the article.
    The statement "Many people with congenital anosmia often do not enjoy food as much as others because they cannot smell it." also needs to be handled. You don't want to have the article sound ableist and violate NPOV. The new source you added explicitly counters the statement in the article by saying "People with congenital olfactory loss may not miss what they never had." In this way, the congenital form of the condition is different from the acquired form, and this should be in the article.
    You also need to find a source that says Ben Cohen has the congenital form of the condition, or remove the statement from the article. awkwafaba (📥) 16:42, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @Awkwafaba: Thank you for the feedback. I have removed the sentence stating "Many people with congenital anosmia often do not enjoy food as much as others because they cannot smell it" to avoid any potential ableism and to maintain a neutral point of view. Additionally, I have revised the mention of Ben Cohen to remove the reference to congenital anosmia. Although an interview mentions his anosmia from childhood, which is often considered congenital anosmia, I understand the need for a specific reference that clearly spells out "congenital anosmia." Therefore, I am removing the term "congenital" for now until I can find a source that explicitly confirms it. --AbhiSuryawanshi (talk) 17:17, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I wanted to inform you that I have now struck through ALT1 and ALT2. I would appreciate it if only ALT3 (ALT3: ... that 1 in 10,000 individuals are born without the ability to smell?) could be considered for DYK. --AbhiSuryawanshi (talk) 18:18, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      reference issues addressed suffieciently. ALT2 is rejected. Rest are fine by me, but OP wants ALT3, so let's go with that. Thanks for the hard work! awkwafaba (📥) 18:46, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Thank you for the feedback and approval of the remaining ALTs. I'm fine with multiple ALTs if that works better. This is my first DYK, so I really appreciate your support and guidance! --AbhiSuryawanshi (talk) 19:51, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Cultybraggan Camp

     
    Cultybraggan Camp
    • ... that the area of Cultybraggan Camp (pictured) has been a royal hunting ground, a prison for fervent Nazis and the site of a underground bunker intended for use in a nuclear war?
    • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mariesa Crow
    • Comment: I reviewed this article (nominated by Pahunkat) and advised the nominator to put it up for DYK. They haven't done so but I thought it would be a shame to miss this interesting a subject so am nominating it myself. I will complete a QPQ when I get time over the next couple of days.
    Improved to Good Article status by Pahunkat (talk) and Shipsview (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

    Llewee (talk) 01:59, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Llewee, review follows: article promoted to GA on 6 July' article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't pick up any issues with overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck; image is properly sourced and licensed; hook fact is interesting and mentioned in the article, the latter parts check out to the sources cited, I will have to AGF on the hunting part as I can't read Latin; this should be good to go once a QPQ is provided - Dumelow (talk) 08:41, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • Thanks for nominating this Llewee, I've done the QPQ for you. I like the hook. The latin part was mentioned in the GA review, there's other things in the article it could be replaced by if it isn't permissible here (e.g. self-catering holiday accomodation). Pahunkat (talk) 13:23, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      Hi Pahunkat, thanks for the QPQ. I am happy to assume in good faith that the Latin source supports what's in the article and pass this review - Dumelow (talk) 14:55, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @Dumelow and Llewee: the key Latin sentence seems to be "Item misse versiis Collybrathane ad venationes Regis iij' xl panes [Also sent to Collybrathane to the King's hunting expeditions, 40 loaves of bread - via Google translate]". @Unoquha: you added the sentence to the article here, do you have a source that identifies Collybrathane and Cultybraggan? TSventon (talk) 12:45, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    The placename spelling is somewhat eccentric in this old (1836) edition of the manuscript Latin (appears twice). I can't find it spelled exactly like that elsewhere. There is no reason to think of anywhere else though, in easy reach of Stirling and Perth. Apparently, the place belonged to a royal official called Reddoch or Redeheuch.Unoquha (talk) 13:52, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Godzilla Minus One

    • ... that a Japanese essayist and film historian has called Godzilla Minus One a "dangerous movie"?
    Improved to Good Article status by Eiga-Kevin2 (talk). Nominated by Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

    Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 09:08, 7 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

      Article has achieved Good Article status. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hooks are interesting and sourced. QPQ is done. Looks ready to go. Thriley (talk) 20:27, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    McVey Fire

     
    Aftermath of the McVey Fire
    • ... that after the McVey Fire, the United States Forest Service accidentally planted thousands of non-native trees?
    • Reviewed: Céline Dept
    • Comment: QPQ pending completed. Welcome to hook tweaks.
    Moved to mainspace by TCMemoire (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

    TCMemoire 10:04, 9 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Article created 4 days before nomination. Meets adequate length requirements, properly sourced inline, Earwig doesn't pick up any issues. QPQ done, and hook is good. Nice work! B3251(talk) 17:44, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Libotonius

     
    Libotonius pearsoni fossil
    • ... that some of the first likely Libotonius (pictured) fossils collected are lost at the Smithsonian?
    • Source: Wilson 1978 doi:10.1139/e78-075 "Since then Pearson's collection was forwarded to, but never accessioned in, the Smithsonian Institution. and it cannot now be located.
      Wilson 1979 doi:10.2307/1443214 "Pearson's specimens cannot be located, but they probably included specimens of the new species described here, rather than a species of the similar Erismatopterus"
    • ALT1: ... that Libotonius (pictured) are small fish, with adults ranging between just 10.6–40.0 mm (0.42–1.57 in)? Source: Wilson 1977 Page 44 L. blakeburnensis GENERAL FEATURES Summary statistics for the species are given in Table 5. The known specimens (Fig. 13) represent only a small size range, from about 30 to possibly 40 mm
      Wilson 1979 doi:10.2307/1443214 L. pearsoni Description.-All specimens small compared with other Eocene percopsiforms, ranging from 10.6–20.8 mm (0.42–0.82 in) standard length
    Moved to mainspace by Kevmin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 354 past nominations.

    Kevmin § 15:00, 8 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:   - ALT0 is interesting, ALT1 isn’t super thrilling for me, but I would let the readers decide.
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   I like ALT0 the best, but both are cleared awkwafaba (📥) 02:41, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    2000 Cambodian coup d'état attempt

    Created by Arcahaeoindris (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

    Arcahaeoindris (talk) 15:25, 6 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:21, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Charles Tottenham, 8th Marquess of Ely

    Created by Roc0ast3r (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

     RONIN  TALK  20:26, 6 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Hi Roc0ast3r, interesting article; review follows: article created 6 July and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources for the subject matter; I didn't pick up any overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck on sources; hooks are interesting, mentioned in the article and check out to the sources cited; a QPQ is not required. Looks fine to me, nice work - Dumelow (talk) 07:56, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 7

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    Carl Friedrich Gauss

    • Reviewed:
    Improved to Good Article status by Dioskorides (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Dioskorides (talk) 21:49, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Policy compliance:

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    • Other problems:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Fantastic work bringing this to GA status! Great choice for a hook! Reywas92Talk 01:09, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Mary Jane Patterson

    • ... that Mary Jane Patterson, daughter of a slave, was the first African American woman to gain a BA degree, having taken a 'gentleman's course'?
    • Source: Blakemore, Erin (2017-05-23)' How the Daughter of a Slave Became the First African American to Earn a Bachelor's Degree.' Time
    • ALT1: ... that Mary Jane Patterson was the first Black principal of a famous high school in Washington DC? Source: Stewart, A (2013) First Class: The legacy of Dunbar, America's first Black Public School. Chicago. Ill: Lawrence Hill Books p 32
    • Reviewed:
    Improved to Good Article status by Balance person (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Balance person (talk) 11:52, 8 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Article was promoted to Good Article within the last couple of days, is easily long enough, well written and copiously referenced. In my opinion the original hook, about being the first to get a BA degree, is best - very interesting indeed. The fact is cited immediately after it, in the lead introduction, to a page hosted on the university website. If I was being picky I'd say the info about achieving a BA degree should be included in the main body of the article too, because the lead intro is normally a summary of the main article. But the GA reviewers didn't have an issue with this, so I'm happy to say good to go to the next stage. Sionk (talk) 17:59, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Hunter River Railway Company

    • Reviewed:
    Created by Willthorpe (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

    Will Thorpe (talk) 13:00, 7 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Interesting article. Article is within policy, cited to reliable sources, and no copyright violation detected. Hook fact is verified to the cited source. However the hook statement itself is not currently explicitly stated in the article. We need the hook fact clearly presented in the article with similar language with an inline citation before this can be promoted.4meter4 (talk) 18:04, 8 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    4meter4 I’ve reworded it, does this suffice? Will Thorpe (talk) 00:54, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @Willthorpe You misunderstood what I said. I didn't need you to change the hook fact, I needed you to add as inline citation inside the article itself (along with making the text of the hook fact appear in the article's body). We can only promote hooks where the hook content is written with similar language in the article and where that information is directly followed by an inline citation. Currently the Great Northern Railway is only mentioned in the lead and without an inline citation. We need to see the content of the hook fact in the body of the article and with an inline citation. That will require you editing the article to make it compliant with DYK's requirements. Best.4meter4 (talk) 13:55, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @4meter4 Oh! I’m afraid you’ve missed it! It’s in the ’Legacy’ section at the end of the article. I figure that featuring citations in the lede is usually bad practice as the content is elaborated on further down, with references there. Will Thorpe (talk) 14:41, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      Thanks I see it now. Looks good. Approving the hook for promotion.4meter4 (talk) 16:55, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Frederick Perceval, 11th Earl of Egmont

    Created by Roc0ast3r (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

     RONIN  TALK  02:35, 8 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Hi Roc0ast3r, nice article on an interesting subject; review: article created 7 July and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't pick up any issues with overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck; hook facts are interesting, mentioned in the article and check out to sources cited, I would be a little wary of ALT1 as the article (and source) state that he later regretted not taking up his seat, happy to leave to the discretion of the promoter; no QPQ is required. I picked up the dates of his eligibility for the Lords (stated in the infobox) are not cited, if these can be added or removed this should be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 07:39, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      Thanks Roc0ast3r, all good to go - Dumelow (talk) 15:17, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Côte d'Ivoire–Ghana Cocoa Initiative

    • ... that Ghana and Ivory Coast have been accused of setting up a cocoa cartel?
    Created by Yue (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

    Yue🌙 00:26, 7 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Love it! Great article, thorough and balanced, facially eligible, source is cited and in article. That the organization is greedy or corrupt seems a prominent enough perspective that I don’t think it’s undue for the hook.Zanahary 04:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • Oh, and I made a little tweak to the hook so the link includes the grammatical article, since the article is about one supposed cartel, not cocoa cartels in general. Zanahary 04:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 8

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    Ahhotep I

    • ... that the discovery of a coffin belonging to Ahhotep I, which had been reused to bury a high priest, ignited a debate among scholars over the true number of Egyptian queens named Ahhotep?
    • Source: "In 1859, a discovery was made at Dra Abu el-Naga of the burial of a queen. The deceased was named as Queen-Consort Ahhotep on her coffin... However, the identification of this Ahhotep with the historically-known wife of King Seqenenra-Tao and mother of King Ahmose was thrown into doubt with the discovery of another coffin from the Deir el-Bahari cache, which also identified the owner as Queen-Consort Ahhotep... This has led to considerable debate over their identities, familial relationships and discussions of whether there were one, two, or even three Ahhoteps." (Sidpura, pp. 21, 23)
    "In 1881, the discovery of the cache at Deir el-Bahri revealed a second coffin for a queen Ahhotep... which contained no more the original mummy but had been reused to host the body of Pinudjem I." (Betro, pp. 134-135).

    Sources:

    Betro, Marilina. (2022). "The Identity of Ahhotep and the Textual Sources". In Miniaci, Gianluca; Lacovara, Peter (eds.). The Treasure of the Egyptian Queen Ahhotep and International Relations at the Turn of the Middle Bronze Age (1600-1500 BCE). Golden House Publications. pp. 131–152. ISBN 978-1906137724.

    Sidpura, Taneash. (2016). Gregory, Steven R. W. (ed.). "Where is my Mummy…Who is my Mummy? A Re-Evaluation of the Dra Abu-el Naga Coffin of Queen Ahhotep (CG 28501) with Queen Satkamose'". Proceedings of the Second Birmingham Egyptology Symposium. 2: 21–46.
    Improved to Good Article status by Alanna the Brave (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 12 past nominations.

    Alanna the Brave (talk) 00:03, 14 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   AGF on offline and paywalled sources  — Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:40, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Poozeum

     
    Barnum
    • ... that the Poozeum holds the fossilized dinosaur feces known as Barnum (pictured)?
    Created by Gobonobo (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 122 past nominations.

    gobonobo + c 05:35, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Article is great. It is new enough, long enough, well courced, neutral, plagiarism free and a QPQ is done. The image is ree, used in the article and clear. I had two queries: first, could you pop the citation in where I added [citation needed]? Secondly, I think the hook could be hookier - maybe mention the T-rex, or indeed that its named after a person? Otherwise all good! Lajmmoore (talk) 18:19, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    • ALT1 ... that fossilized dinosaur feces (pictured) from the Poozeum was named for Tyrannosaurus discoverer Barnum Brown?
    • ALT2 ... that the Poozeum holds the largest known fossilized dinosaur feces (pictured), which may have come from a T. rex?
    • ALT3 ... that fossilized dinosaur feces (pictured) which may have come from a T. rex is held in the Poozeum?
    @Lajmmoore: I've added the citation. Hooks are always the hardest part for me. I've added some alts above. gobonobo + c 02:49, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    @Gobonobo: I totally know wha you mean - they are so hard! I think ALT1 and ALT3 work pretty well now. Thank you! Lajmmoore (talk) 06:55, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    We did it, Joe!

    • Source: "Palmer loves that meme so much, in fact, that she did her Kamala Harris, "We did it, Joe!" impression in front of Harris herself." (NBC)
    Created by Spaghettifier (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

    Spaghettifier (talk) 20:24, 9 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Article new and long enough. Passes earwig, no close paraphrasing was found, and the hook seems interesting. QPQ done. Toadboy123 (talk) 18:00, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Alexander Langmuir

    • Source: "In 1949, Dr. Langmuir created a corps of epidemiologists at what is now the Federal Centers for Disease Control and Prevention in Atlanta. The corps was ready to fly anywhere immediately to investigate reports of an epidemic or an unusual cluster of cases. Known as the Epidemic Intelligence Service, the program played a crucial role in turning what was then an obscure and fledgling operation into a large Federal agency. [...] When the possibility of biological warfare was raised during the Korean War, scientists looked to epidemiology as the first line of defense. But the country was not prepared. Dr. Langmuir seized the opportunity to strengthen disease surveillance and his program." [32]
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: I feel that initializing the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention is appropriate for readability, given that the hook specifically focuses on Langmuir's work with its subsidiary Epidemic Intelligence Service. However, if others feel that the full agency name needs to be listed, that still fits within the 200 character limit (147 vs 186).
    Improved to Good Article status by BluePenguin18 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    BluePenguin18 🐧 ( 💬 ) 19:19, 8 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    • Article was promoted to GA on 8 July, is well cited, and the hook is interesting. Hook is also cited. Copyvio detector shows high percentages, but it's mostly due to long names of people and institutions. QPQ is not needed. Nice article, happy to approve it for dyk!   Artem.G (talk) 18:14, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Verna Osborne

    • ... that San Francisco voice teacher Verna Osborne retired at the age of 101?
    Created by 4meter4 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 85 past nominations.

    4meter4 (talk) 18:13, 8 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Looks mostly good. Nice work. The only issue I see, @4meter4:, is that there appears to be excessive citations in the second paragraph of the body. Is it necessary to include 16 references for the statement She had her own regular radio program on WOR, Verna Osborne, Songs, from 1933-1936? BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:03, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Yes, because each reference is just covering a single program. I provided a representative sampling across time to demonstrate that it was a recurring program. There are many more of this kind. I couldn’t find a source talking about the program in a long term way to replace these. Best.4meter4 (talk) 16:36, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    OK. I'm not an expert with this, so I'll let it pass.   BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:42, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    National Casket Company

     
    Ol' Rip in his casket
    • Source: "A wooden, hand-carved mahogany casket, model 2040, was the chosen vessel for McKinley’s ornate resting place — at least at first, Beardsley explained. The Oneida casket was apparently used for the funeral services, and later McKinley was transferred into another casket, made in Ohio, for the actual entombment. A New York Times article from September 15, 1901 reads: '[McKinley’s casket] was furnished by the National Casket Company of Oneida and is elaborate in design. It is made of solid crotched Santo Domingo mahogany. It measures 6 feet 3 inches in length, is 22 inches wide, and 20 inches deep inside.'" from: Stone, Carly (4 November 2022). "Famed casket company in Oneida recalled". Rome Sentinel. Retrieved 8 July 2024. and "Will Wood had Old Rip preserved, courtesy of the Barrow Undertaking Company. The National Casket Company provided a tiny casket" from: Newton, Teresa S. "Old Rip". Texas Parks and Wildlife. Retrieved 8 July 2024.
    Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 852 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 20:54, 8 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Article is new enough and long enough. It is well-sourced, presentable, neutral, and BLP-compliant. Earwig is mostly picking up on proper nouns. The hook is cited and interesting. I would use U.S. and not US as this is an American company and maybe shorten the hook to just Ol' Rip, leaving off the Horned Toad if the image is used. QPQ has been done. The image has a free license, is used in the article, and renders well at a small size. Good job. gobonobo + c 02:02, 9 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 9

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    WDRB

    Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 696 past nominations.

    Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 01:49, 13 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Looks good. Nice work. A minor point: I may be missing it, but I'm not seeing the word "overuse" in quotes in the article. Any particular reason why it is in quotes for the hook? BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:53, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Symphony for Strings

     
    Sviridov circa 1940
    • Source: Sviridov, Georgy (2002). Belonenko, Alexander (ed.). Музыка как судьба [Music as Destiny] (in Russian). Moscow: Молодая гвардия [Young Guard], p. 88
    Created by CurryTime7-24 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 47 past nominations.

    CurryTime7-24 (talk) 21:16, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Article was created on the day of the nomination and is long enough for DYK standards. Given that all of the sources are offline and/or in Russian, I am unable to check each statement individually and so AGF here; however, if possible, I'd like to request a brief excerpt for the relevant statements supporting both hooks. A QPQ has been done and I didn't find any close paraphrasing. Either hook can be used (both are cited inline and AGF on their verification and sourcing), although I do have a slight preference for ALT1. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:34, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Thanks for the review! Give me a few minutes to find the book for ALT0 in my stacks. Be right back! —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 02:43, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    OK, here's the source quote for ALT0 with my translation. It comes from Sviridov's personal jottings that were intended for an essay about Shostakovich published in 1976:

    Когда я играл в Союзе Лен<инградских> комп<озиторов> свою Стр<унную> симфонию, он выступил на обсуждении и говорил: «Свиридов—это наша надежда» и еще несколько раз так говорил. (When at the Len[ingrad] Union of Comp[osers] I played my Str[ing] Symphony, [Shostakovich] spoke up at the conference and said "Sviridov is our hope" and repeated this several more times.)

    CurryTime7-24 (talk) 03:04, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    As for ALT1, here's the quote with translation:

    Одной из причин того, что она выпала из поля зрения исследователей, стал тот факт, что после 1943 г. симфония покинула концертный репертуар. [...] Тем не менее симфония не была забыта автором. [...] Вполне очевидно, что Георгий Васильевич хотел дать своему незаслуженно забытому сочинению новую жизнь. Это произошло в 2000 г., уже после кончины композитора. 28 июня 2000 г. в Большом зале Санкт-Петербургской филармонии с успехом прошла повторная премьера Симфонии в исполнении камерного ансамбля «Солисты Москвы» под управлением Юрия Башмета. (One of the reasons [the Symphony for Strings] fell from favor with researchers is the fact that after 1943 it was dropped from the repertoire. [...] Even so, it was not forgotten by its composer. [...] Clearly, Georgy Vasilyevich wanted to breathe new life into his unjustly forgotten work. After the composer's death this came to pass in 2000. The successful second premiere of the Symphony took place on June 28 at the Large Hall of the Saint Petersburg Philharmonia, played by the Moscow Soloists chamber ensemble conducted by Yuri Bashmet.)

    CurryTime7-24 (talk) 03:39, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Dov Noy

    Created by Artem.G (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 15 past nominations.

    Artem.G (talk) 13:05, 9 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Created July 3, not July 9, but as of the July 9 nomination date that was still current enough. Long enough and adequately sourced. QPQ done. Earwig is overloaded and unavailable but spot-checking found no likely copyvio. Hook interesting and within rules. Both hook claims are almost sourced by the "Doyen" footnote, except their number is slightly under 25,000. "Over 25,000" is however in the Storytelling, Self, Society footnote. I don't think we can read anything from the publication dates of those two sources, which are both obituaries of Noy from roughly the same time. Different web sources have different numbers and the archives itself [34] does not appear to provide a current number. If we want to be cautious, we could say "approximately 25,000". I'll leave it up to the hook-builder, but other than that quibble this is good to go. —David Eppstein (talk) 18:43, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Mary Owens (Abraham Lincoln fiancée)

    • ... that Abraham Lincoln felt obliged to propose to Mary Owens  (see image) – a woman he did not want to marry – but was rejected, not once but several times?
    Created by Clarityfiend (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 14 past nominations.

    Clarityfiend (talk) 10:31, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   New enough, within policy, QPQ done. It contains a lot of quotes but by my count the prose section is just long enough. The hook is great (and unusually, kind of a summary of the article), and the facts in it supported by reliable sources (though I cannot access the article in The Atlantic it is AGF). No image. The article should be good to go. Yakikaki (talk) 19:42, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      • @Yakikaki: There is now an image in the article, but I'm not quite sure how to add it to this DYK.
    • Hi Clarityfiend, I also don't know how to include it post-nomination. I've had a look at it and it appears to me to be usable, i.e. no copyright restrictions, but it is a bit grainy and I'm not sure it would be a perfect fit for the main page in any case. But formally it should be OK, if someone more savvy can find a way to include it in the nomination. Kind regards, Yakikaki (talk) 19:09, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 10

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    Charles De Geer

     
    Drawing of an aphid by Charles De Geer
    Improved to Good Article status by Yakikaki (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 137 past nominations.

    Yakikaki (talk) 19:51, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

      Substantial interesting GA of a Swedish-Dutch person writing in French, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. I like the original hook best because it includes the image of his work, which is licensed and gives an idea of both the period and his main topic. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:56, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Cuisine of Jerusalem

     
    Jerusalem kugel, a casserole typical of Jerusalem cuisine
    Created by PeleYoetz (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    PeleYoetz (talk) 08:23, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    PeleYoetz,   I don't think having the word "Pictured" is needed. The picture is fine, but I would remove the pictured, sicne it is very specific. Personally I like alt1 better, but it is not cited in the article. This is a great article, keep up the good work! 48JCL 12:33, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Thank you, 48JCL! I removed mentions of the word "pictured" and also trimmed the image caption. I added the info from alt1 to the article together with the source so it is now cited. Is everything else okay? PeleYoetz (talk) 20:48, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    PeleYoetz This is a great article, I think nominating it for WP:Good Article status would be a plausible option.   Passing ALT1. 48JCL 21:13, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Dead Pony

     
    Anna Shields performing in London in 2024
    Moved to mainspace by Launchballer (talk) and Georgeykiwi (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 238 past nominations.

    Launchballer 12:03, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    The American Pigeon Museum & Library

    Created by TCMemoire (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 12 past nominations.

    TCMemoire 18:14, 11 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    @TSventon: Good spot, thank you. Funny how they both seem to claim to be the first/only. I will remove the claims from the article and strike the first hook. TCMemoire 21:28, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    •   New enough, long enough, and properly sourced. QPQ done. Interesting enough hooks, verified. Earwig is still unavailable but spot-checking found no copyvio. I agree with the removal of ALT0; "first" hooks are often problematic and this seems to be no exception. I like ALT2 better than ALT1, but both are ok; this can be decided at a later stage of DYK preparation. —David Eppstein (talk) 00:00, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Tropical Storm Chris (2024)

     
    Satellite image of Tropical Storm Chris on July 1
    Created by IrishSurfer21 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    IrishSurfer21 (talk) 22:13, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

      The article fulfills all the standards for a DYK, being new, long, and interesting enough. I'll accept it. OhHaiMark (talk) 12:10, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Ravenswood standing stone

     
    Ravenswood standing stone
    • ... that the 4,000-year-old Ravenswood standing stone (pictured) now lies in a cul-de-sac in a 1970s Scottish housing estate?
    • Source: " It was moved from this position in about 1971 when a new housing scheme was built. The stone is being re-scheduled now to afford it protection in its new location in a modern urban setting. The stone is set into the pavement on the NW side of the cul-de-sac at the E end of Ravenswood Avenue and is surrounded by metal railings. The stone was first erected probably about 4,000 years ago." from: "Liberton, standing stone, east end of Ravenswood Avenue, Liberton/Gilmerton, City of Edinburgh". ancientmonuments.uk. Retrieved 9 July 2024.
    Created by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 854 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 11:15, 10 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Consider providing the link to housing estate in the dyk that I have provided in the article; it has different connotations in different places in the world. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:C039:9FFC:332E:C66 (talk) 18:38, 10 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 11

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    Norsk Soyamelfabrikk

    • Source: Rolf Berg, Peder Lindhjem. Norge og den 2. verdenskrig: Militaer motstand i Rogaland og Vestfold. Universitetsforlaget, 1972. p. 157
    5x expanded by Soman (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 391 past nominations.

    Soman (talk) 15:25, 13 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

      Ok so it got restored as an article after being deleted and by now the article has been expanded nearly 10 times as much as it was before. The hook is interesting and is from a Norwegian source. I say overall this gets a pass. GamerPro64 03:50, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Samoan branch of the Nazi Party

    • Source: "support for Nazi Socialism and the NSDAP leader Matthes was, in the opinion of the Administration, strongest among the 'mixed-blood' Germans ... Matthes and the men that followed him were on the margins of the brotherhood of whiteness" from:
    Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 855 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 08:35, 11 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    • Hello Dumelow, I am reviewing your DYK nomination.
    Article was written recently and meets DYK raw prose size requirement.
     Y There is a QPQ. in Your Quid Pro Quo review, please note at Template:Did you know nominations/Andy Barat that they also need to complete a Quid Pro Quo.
    Article is well written. Please do change formatting of the Flickr primary source used, the publisher isn't Flickr, rather it's the Adminstration/Police of Apia. Flickr is merely a webhost.
    Merge duplicate source of Field Michael (1989); Reed p.219
     Y I personally find ALT2 hook the most punchy and precise. Specifying the years is important because this was before WW2 started, but still in formal days of Nazi rise to power. ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 15:59, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Hi Shushugah, thanks for the review. Good spot on that ref, I have merged it into a single citation. I removed "Flickr" from that other ref. Let me know if there is anything else you would like me to do - Dumelow (talk) 06:37, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

      this DYK is ready and nominator addressed all my concerns ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 22:53, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Mariesa Crow

    Created by David Eppstein (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 186 past nominations.

    David Eppstein (talk) 00:03, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   New enough, long enough and neutral. Nothing on Earwig, similarities appear to just be names. Hook is interesting and cited. QPQ has been done. We should be good to go here, nice work David Eppstein. Pahunkat (talk) 13:16, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Roberto Quintanilla

    • Source: "Quinanilla, Roberto (colonel in the Bolivian intelligence service who ordered Che's hands to be cut off for fingerprints..." from: Harris, Richard L. (18 November 2010). Che Guevara: A Biography. Bloomsbury Publishing USA. p. 206. ISBN 979-8-216-05935-6.
    • ALT1: ... that Bolivian consul-general Roberto Quintanilla was assassinated in his Hamburg, Germany, office by Monika Ertl? Source: "por eso la hace pasar a su despacho ... En esos cinco segundos que ambos han quedado a solas, la joven saca un revólver Colt modelo Cobra calibre .38 SPL de su cartera y le pega tres balazos que ingresan por debajo de la tetilla derecha del desgraciado cónsul. ... Él está mortalmente herido y se va muriendo de a poco. Ella se llama Monika Ertl" which Google translates as "he invites her into his office ...In those five seconds that they were alone, the young woman took a Colt Cobra model revolver, caliber .38 SPL, from her purse and fired three shots that entered below the right nipple of the unfortunate consul. ... He is mortally wounded and is slowly dying. Her name is Monika Ertl" from: Di Genova, Facundo (26 January 2022). "Vivió entre nazis y fue emboscada por un amigo de su padre: Monika Ertl, la joven que mató al verdugo del Che Guevara". La Nacion (in Spanish). Retrieved 11 July 2024.
    • ALT2: ... that the death of Bolivian intelligence officer Roberto Quintanilla by assassination has been attributed to a curse resulting from his involvement in the killing of Che Guevara? Source: " In the city of Santa Cruz de la Sierra another team of Cuban doctors restored the eyesight of Mario Terân, the soldier whose superiors ordered him to shoot Guevara point-blank. Terân was one of the men beset by Che's curse. This stigma is also said to have punished La Higuera with drought. Serrano explains it as Che's vengeance on the town that turned him in. The curse has also delighted in bedeviling Gary Prado Salmon, the general who headed the mission to capture Guevara and ordered his execution. Prado spends his old age in a wheel chair. Honorato Rojas, the peasant who alerted authorities to the whereabouts of the guerrilla band, was murdered. René Barrientos, who was president of Bolivia at the time, burned to death in a freak helicopter crash in 1969. Juan José Torrez, the army chief of staff, was killed by paramilitaries in Buenos Aires. And intelligence chief Roberto Quintanilla was shot to death by a Bolivian guerrilla fighter while serving as consul in Germany" from: Ugarte, Álex Ayala; Thompson, Chandler; Creutzmann, Sven (2009). "Che Sat Here: THE MAKING (AND MARKETING) OF A MARTYR". The Virginia Quarterly Review. 85 (1): 78. ISSN 0042-675X.
    • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Pinxton Castle
    Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 856 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 14:06, 11 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Interesting article. QPQ done; no Earwig problems. ALT0 is hampered by MOS:EGG, while ALT1 isn't compelling to readers unfamiliar with the subject. So my approval goes to ALT2. —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 19:09, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply


    Thanks for the review CurryTime7-24, I do quite like ALT0 but agree the link was a bit eggy, perhaps ALT3 is OK? - Dumelow (talk) 20:57, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
     Great work modifying the hook! That's better than ALT2. Approval for ALT3 and ALT2, in order of preference. —CurryTime7-24 (talk) 21:09, 11 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 12

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    2009 Dusky Sound earthquake

    Improved to Good Article status by Panamitsu (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 42 past nominations.

    Panamitsu (talk) 00:09, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   No huge problems, although the hook says 78 years while the source and the article does not exactly say it. Also waiting for the QPQ. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 12:04, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    • QPQ done now. I was thinking that this year number is fine per WP:CALC. What do you think about this? Having a hook with both 1931 and 2009 seems a bit awkward to me and I think it dilutes the interesting-ness. ―Panamitsu (talk) 00:30, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Good to go. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 08:26, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    No kid zone

    • Reviewed:
    Created by Clovermoss (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 22:19, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    The way the hook is presented feels a bit punchy, as if children are being excluded from a friendly public library and not like from a library of similar stature to the US Library of Congress. The National Library of Korea generally has a serious academic reputation, and there are numerous local libraries in Seoul for all ages. I'm a bit skeptical of this library being used as a talking point like this (although this talking point is used in both SK/English-language media), although I do personally agree with the conclusion being drawn. The hook is true and I won't challenge it, but just wanted to share context for it. 211.43.120.242 (talk) 08:35, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I notice you've added some content cited to Korean language sources to the article. English sources didn't provide any context about other libraries (and some stated that other libraries were also no kid zones). Obviously the language cited doesn't matter for verifiability, just whether or not the given source is a reliable one. I don't speak Korean so I'm unsure if this source is reliable [36]. I'd appreciate a second opinion here. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 12:44, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    It's the weekly edition of Kyunghyang Shinmun, article by this reporter. The reporter seems to be employed by the newspaper; the piece specifically cited is just a casual society piece. It's not a particularly important ref; you can remove if want. 211.43.120.242 (talk) 13:07, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Okay, thanks for that context. Unless the publication is known for publishing unreliable content, it's probably fine. Could you provide some background on this source too? I just want to make sure there's really strong sourcing for the when statements here. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 13:15, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    It's Yonhap News Agency, one of the largest news agencies in South Korea. No particular strong particular leaning that I know of and is considered among the most reliable in Korea. Anything in particular about the article you'd like to know? 211.43.120.242 (talk) 13:25, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    경기일보 is Kyeonggi Ilbo [ko], a regional newspaper for Gyeonggi Province. No particular strong reputation that I know of; just a local paper. The Chosun Ilbo is a newspaper of record, and only cited for one sentence where it's reporting the results of a survey. The only source that's a little sus is OhmyNews in the image caption; the only reason I added that was because that's where the image comes from and it's a fairly innocuous claim being cited. Please lmk if there's any other concerns. 211.43.120.242 (talk) 14:06, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Nothing in particular comes to mind (I'll let you know if anything comes up), I just wanted to make sure everything was good since I don't speak the language. Thanks for humouring me on this. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 14:07, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Really thanks for being patient with me, sorry for stepping in. I normally would not but the topic sensitivity and potential real life impact of readership is what motivated it. 211.43.120.242 (talk) 14:21, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I'm generally of the belief that the more editors the merrier. Thank you for sharing your expertise. :) Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 14:23, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Tax Heaven 3000

    Converted from a redirect by B3251 (talk) and ReaderofthePack (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 19 past nominations.

    B3251(talk) 03:21, 12 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Length Newness Cited hook Interest Sources Neutrality Plagiarism/paraphrase

    Okay, satisfies requirements. I'm sad that there's no plot section. I'd drop the art collective name from the hook, so we can have something like ALT2: ... that you can do your American taxes with a dating simulator? Bremps... 05:47, 12 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    @Bremps: Thanks for the review. I'm not sure about that ALT because the game does specify that it was only made for filing 2022 federal income taxes. Let me know, thanks! B3251(talk) 17:27, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    ALT3: ... that you could have done your American taxes for 2022 with a dating simulator? Bremps... 17:45, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    That suggestion is alright. Would you be open with leaving these hooks here and just seeing whichever one the organizer finds more suitable? B3251(talk) 17:49, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I'd be fine with it, but the first two hooks divert the pageviews of the target article to other pages. Bremps... 17:56, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    I suppose. I'm open with whichever one the organizer picks. B3251(talk) 17:59, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
      Bremps... 18:09, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Nosy Komba

    • ... that although Nosy Komba is a center for ecotourism, environmental regulations on the island are essentially unenforced?
    5x expanded by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 61 past nominations.

    Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 08:34, 13 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Got verification of hook at exactly page 18 of cited source, thanks. Vanderwaalforces (talk) 10:04, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 13

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    Street view of Museum
    • Source: Mitchell, Charles (2024). The Golden Age of Baltimore Theater: A History from Shakespeare to Vaudeville. The History Press. p. 49. ISBN 9781467154482.
    Created by 4meter4 (talk) and TSventon (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 86 past nominations.

    4meter4 (talk) 14:36, 19 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:   - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting:  
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Looks good. Nice work. AGF on the hook / source. @4meter4: The only thing I'd say to change is the link to James Murdock (actor), as that appears to have been a different actor from 100 years later. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:41, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Ocean Parkway (Brooklyn)

     
    Ocean Parkway
    5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 663 past nominations.

    Epicgenius (talk) 20:58, 13 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Lothar von Falkenhausen

    Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 62 past nominations.

    Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:09, 14 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    The Strip (book)

    • Source: Miller, Keith (2017-09-27). "Quintessence of lust: The shabby glamour of a postmodern city". The Times Literary Supplement. No. 5974. p. 14. Archived from the original on 2024-07-13. Retrieved 2024-07-13 – via Gale.

      The article notes: "En route, we survey a dismal period when Sin City tried to pass itself off as a kind of Disneyland (this is the word that is spat out by Robert De Niro's Ace Rothstein a character strongly based on the real-life mobster Meyer Lansky, one of the great crooked visionaries behind modern Las Vegas--in Martin Scorsese's Casino) ... Even if Stefan Al doesn't show much sign of being really interested in such things, there is a wealth of incidental human detail on show: ... to Lansky (De Niro played him, too, in Donnie Brasco) walking his shih tzu to his regular poolside slot at the Riviera, ..."

    Created by Cunard (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 78 past nominations.

    Cunard (talk) 12:23, 13 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Article was an interesting read! All looks good to me on this one. I prefer ALT0, although maybe take out "the" before "gangster"? Bsoyka (tcg) 18:12, 13 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    WYOU

    Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 697 past nominations.

    Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 03:54, 13 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 14

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    Break room

     
    Employee break room in the United States
    Created by Bohemian Baltimore (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Bohemian Baltimore (talk) 10:10, 14 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   Article was nominated on day of creation. It is fleshed out with neutral coverage and reliable sources formatted with inline citations. Earwig shows no copyright violations, with the only results being quotations that are followed up by references in the prose. The hook is very informative and frankly important to share. ALT0 breaks the tiebreaker for me as it is more concise but not leaving out important information. Hook claim is backed by a reliable, primary source in the prose. No QPQ requirement needed here. Good to go! Aria1561 (talk) 23:19, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Carlos Bandeirense Mirandópolis hoax

    Created by Skyshifter (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 14 past nominations.

    Skyshiftertalk 19:22, 14 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Waiting for the QPQ. Passing the nom. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 07:10, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    TheNuggeteer done! Skyshiftertalk 01:14, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Island

    • Source: [37] page 2045
    Improved to Good Article status by ForksForks (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    ForksForks (talk) 14:19, 14 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   As a Good level article, this automatically passes several of the criteria, such as length and very obviously using in-line referencing properly and all of that. The nomination was passed yesterday, making this new enough. All three hooks are good and their refs check out for the info and for in-line usage in the article for the information. I'm more partial to the first two than the third one, personally, as the most interesting. No QPQ needs to be done as this is your first nomination. Looks good to go! SilverserenC 21:52, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Mercy Gilbert Medical Center

    Moved to mainspace by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 699 past nominations.

    Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 19:55, 14 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •  Article is a recreation with all new sourced content as stated. Checked the Arizona Republic source hosted via Newspapers.com, which confirms the hook. Good sourcing, no copy right violations, image used in info box is licensed / free to use. QPQ done. Great to see an article revived after deletion.Rain the 1 15:14, 15 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Tupou VI

    • ... that King Tupou VI was crowned in 2015 by an Australian minister, Reverend D'Arcy Wood to respect Tongan traditions?
    Improved to Good Article status by History6042 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    History6042 (talk) 02:41, 14 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   First hook looks good. Article is well sourced and is new enough. Gotta say I appricate Tongan history so good job on getting this to GA.

    Though might I suggest changing the hook to ALT2: ... that Tupou VI was crowned by an Australian minister, in order to respect the tradition of native Tongans touching the King's head? TheBritinator (talk) 22:30, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Zou Heng

    Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 62 past nominations.

    Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 05:04, 14 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Article is new enough (moved to mainspace July 14) and long enough. Article is well-sourced and neutral. No copy-vio issues flagged by Earwig or a manual spot-check of sources. QPQ is complete. Hook is interesting and cited to a reliable source -- but I notice the source doesn't specify Zou raised chickens (only "fowl", which could mean other domestic birds). I suggest changing "chicken farmer" to "poultry farmer" in the hook, just for accuracy. Alanna the Brave (talk) 14:08, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • ... that Chinese archaeologist Zou Heng was forced to work as a poultry farmer during the Cultural Revolution?
      Perfect! Happy to approve edited hook. Best, Alanna the Brave (talk) 17:09, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Articles created/expanded on July 15

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    Moain Sadeq

    • Source: "Under the joint direction of P. de Miroschedji ... and M. Sadeq (Ministry of Tourism and Antiquities, Department of Antiquities of Gaza), several soundings were conducted at the site." and "These fortifications are the oldest Egyptian fortifications presently known from excavations." de Miroschedji, Pierre; Sadeq, Moain (2008). "Sakan, Tell es-". The New Encyclopedia of Archaeological Excavations in the Holy Land. Vol. 5: Supplementary Volume. Israel Exploration Society/Biblical Archaeology Society (BAS). Retrieved 15 July 2024 – via BAS Library.
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: The wording might need some tweaking, but I've got a cold and this is as good as I can manage at the moment!
    Created by Richard Nevell (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Richard Nevell (talk) 22:13, 16 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   Hook fairly interesting. All cited and neutral. QPQ not needed. Good to go; just link to the Gaza Strip and maybe add "ancient" before Egyptian. Makeandtoss (talk) 10:14, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Good suggestion, I've added a link and added ancient. Richard Nevell (talk) 11:22, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Isaac Coe

     
    Portrait of Isaac Coe, c. 1822
    • ... that a founder of Indianapolis, American frontier physician Isaac Coe (pictured), is credited with saving the town from an 1821 outbreak of malaria?
    • Reviewed:
    Created by AnotherColonialHistorian (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    AnotherColonialHistorian (talk) 17:39, 15 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   New enough and long enough. Nominator is QPQ-exempt. Hook fact checks out to source. No textual issues. (Suggestion to nominator: avoid four references in a row in article where possible.) Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 16:56, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Nature-positive

    • ... that over 90 world leaders have commited to the Leaders' Pledge for Nature; to nature-positive policies, reversing biodiversity loss and full nature recovery by 2050?
    • Reviewed:
    Created by Manxshearwater (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Battleofalma (talk) 12:29, 15 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Interesting topic and extensive article, earwig picks up some phrases but these are just long names for government departments and names of agreements. I slightly copyedited hook for length, its a bit long but within WP:DYKTRIM rules. QPQ not needed —John Cummings (talk) 21:16, 16 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

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    Until Then

    Created by Chlod (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Chlod (say hi!) 01:42, 23 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    • Just getting into the week time limit, long enough. First nomination, no QPQ needed. ALT3 seems the most interesting hook, if that doesn't work ALT1. Article looks sourced, will do some more specific checks in a bit. Lead could use a short summary of the "Reception" section. CMD (talk) 07:52, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
        Added a summary of the reception in the lead. Still waiting for more critical reviews of the game owing to how recently it was released; I'll expand it further as needed. Chlod (say hi!) 12:55, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
        ALT3 and ALT1 are interesting, appropriately sourced, and not copyvios. No wider copyvio found either. Good to go. CMD (talk) 13:55, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Hendrik Wortman

    • Source: Horn-van Nispen, Marie-Louise ten (2004). "Hendrik Wortman". Tijdschrift voor Waterstaatsgeschiedenis. 13 (2). Vereniging voor Waterstaatsgeschiedenis: 60–68.
    Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 676 past nominations.

     — Chris Woodrich (talk) 21:03, 16 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    Abortion in Sierra Leone

    • Source: [40] “At a time when sexual and reproductive health rights for women are either being overturned or threatened, we are proud that Sierra Leone can once again lead with progressive reforms,” said President Bio, referring to the US supreme court’s decision to overturn the constitutional right to abortion, which has drawn criticism around the world.
    • Reviewed:
    Moved to mainspace by Vigilantcosmicpenguin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧(talk | contribs) 04:46, 17 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    • Source: [41] Sierra Leone is one of several former British colonies that inherited England’s 1861 Offences Against the Person Act, but it is the only one where that code is still in effect.

    — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧(talk | contribs) 15:29, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

  •   Length date, hook ok. Earwig flagged possible violation, but basically all blockquotes of statements. No QPQ needed. I prefer ALT1. --Soman (talk) 12:10, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • Max Greyserman

    or ALT1:

    • ... that PGA Tour golfer Max Greyserman and his brother Reed are the first brothers to win the New Jersey Amateur Championship?

    or ALT2:

    • ... that a year before golfer Max Greyserman earned his first PGA Tour card, he considered a different career path?

    — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2603:7000:2101:AA00:A91E:FA5D:EAB2:D6B0 (talk) 08:56, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

      • Reviewed: Masada myth
      • Comment: Nominated on behalf of an IP editor who will, as usual, provide the QPQ.
    Moved to mainspace by Schwede66 (talk) and 2603:7000:2101:AA00:A91E:FA5D:EAB2:D6B0 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 150 past nominations.

    Schwede66 08:39, 20 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   8 of the 16 citations were checked for verification and close paraphrasing; no issues arose. I prefer ALT2 because the focus is on the subject of the article. ALT1 may mention a record being set, but the PGA Tour is more prestigious than the New Jersey Amateur Championship, so I still prefer ALT2. Yue🌙 17:57, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    H. Wortman Pumping Station

    • Source: "Gemaal Wortman" [Wortman Pumping Station]. Flevoland Heritage (in Dutch). Fleurbaaij Kunst & Cultuur. Archived from the original on 25 September 2023. Retrieved 16 July 2024.
    Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 675 past nominations.

     — Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:36, 16 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Hi Chris Woodrich, review follows: article created 16 July and exceeds minimum length; sources are all in Dutch but have the appearance of reliable sources; AGF on close paraphrasing that I am unable to check; hooks are interesting enough, AGF on sourcing but Google translate suggest they support it; a QPQ has been carried out. Looks fine to me, my only note is that the source you list as "Omroep Flevoland 1983" should be "2023", I think? - Dumelow (talk) 14:21, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Tokamak de Fontenay aux Roses

     
    TFR shortly after construction was completed
    • ... that shortly after it was completed, the Tokamak de Fontenay-aux-Roses burned a hole through itself in the first example of a "disruption"? Source: Electrons and/or Arnoux for the event details and Asia Times for the terminology
    5x expanded by Maury Markowitz (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 199 past nominations.

    Maury Markowitz (talk) 13:49, 16 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    • The article was expanded 5x starting on July 16, so it's eligible. Copyvio detector is offline, but the article looks good, and few spot-checks didn't show copyvio. The hook is interesting, though the source for the "hole" part is in French, and is poorly scanned, but Asiatimes tells about both hole and disruption. The photo is good, but I can't see where it's stated that the photo is under CC-BY-SA-2.5; will assume good faith on this. Qpq done. Nice article, good to go!   Artem.G (talk) 16:17, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Pavonia praemorsa

     
    Pavonia praemorsa
    • ... that the flowers of Pavonia praemorsa (pictured) bloom and die within the same day?
    Created by Kimikel (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

    Kimikel (talk) 01:46, 17 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   Hi Kimikel, review follows: article created 16 July and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to what look to be reliable sources for the subject; I didn't pick up any overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck; image is good and is a freely licensed work by the uploader; I think ALT0 is the better hook and I am not sure on the definition of "minimum hardiness zone" in the source as it is a band from -6.7 to -9.4oC; ALT0 is mentioned in the article and checks out to the source cited; a QPQ has been carried out. Looks fine to me - Dumelow (talk) 08:47, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    North Korean Defectors' Day

    Created by Di (they-them) (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

    Di (they-them) (talk) 17:20, 16 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   The hook needs a source. Good enough for DYK! 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 03:41, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    @TheNuggeteer: Apologies! I had a citation originally but the submission messed up and I had to rewrite the hook (I think I might’ve made a formatting mistake) and I forgot to add the citation back! Here it is: https://www.cnn.com/2024/07/15/world/south-korea-north-korea-defector-day-hnk-intl/index.html - Di (they-them) (talk) 03:44, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    Changed the review, accepted.🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 08:13, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Raid on Chesconessex Creek

    • ... that in 1814 a British officer requested permission to raid a US fort in Virginia after its commander boasted of its capabilities?
    • Source: "Lieutenant James Scott had led many of these raids and Captain John Joynes was outraged at his conduct. In powerful language for the era Joynes told Scott "[I will] blow you to hell if you put your foot within a mile of my command ... Scott could not resist this challenge ... Scott had conseuqnecy gained permission to test Joynes' outburst with a raid" from Taylor, Matthew (30 May 2024). Black Redcoats: The Corps of Colonial Marines, 1814-1816. Pen and Sword Military. p. viii. ISBN 978-1-3990-3405-0.
    Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 858 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 14:44, 16 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:  

    Bryan Revilla

    • ... that politician Bryan Revilla's car caught on fire in the middle of Manila's EDSA highway?
    Created by TheNuggeteer-alt (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

    🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 07:03, 16 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

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    WKBS-TV (Philadelphia)

    Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 700 past nominations.

    Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 18:13, 17 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Looks good. Nice work. Either hook works. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:27, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Costello's

    Created by Voorts (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

    voorts (talk/contributions) 01:39, 18 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   The article, being a Good Level article, is long enough and properly uses in-line citations. It was passed today, so is new enough for requirements. The hook is interesting and is nominally referenced, but I run across a problem with it and your second reference used. According to The O'Hara Concern, the interaction with Hemingway ended with "Hemingway took the bet and said, "Not only that, but I'm going to break it over my own head". So he didn't break the blackthorn staff over O'Hara's head, but his own. Perhaps you misunderstood the line just after where it said O'Hara was "painfully pounded", but that was referring to Hemingway pounding him on the back when he walked over. SilverserenC 22:10, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
    • Alternative hook with added detail that adds more color to the story: ... that Ernest Hemingway broke a blackthorn cane over John O'Hara's head in Costello's, a New York City Irish bar, and that Costello's owner displayed the broken cane over the bar? The wording could probably use some workshopping. voorts (talk/contributions) 23:01, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Hayari Miyake

     
    Hayari Miyake
    Created by Oliwiasocz (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 413 past nominations.

    SL93 (talk) 02:04, 18 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:56, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Reduced Gravity Walking Simulator

     
    Astronaut training in the Reduced Gravity Walking Simulator. This position meant that a person's legs experienced only one sixth of their weight, which was the equivalent of being on the lunar surface.
    • ... that Apollo astronauts walked on walls (pictured) before walking on the Moon? Source: [45]: "A person lies sideways, supported by slings around their waist and rib cage, which are attached to very long cables connected to a mounting point somewhere above them. Instead of touching the floor, their feet actually touch a wall that is slightly tilted, so it’s not exactly perpendicular to the floor. This gives them a fake “ground” to practice walking, running, and jumping on without feeling the full force of Earth’s gravity."
    Created by Artem.G (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 16 past nominations.

    Artem.G (talk) 16:23, 17 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  

    Image eligibility:

    • Freely licensed:  
    • Used in article:  
    • Clear at 100px:   - I wonder if we should extract a cropped version of the photo for use in DYK just to remove the negative space around the people. We only get 100px here, so I think it might be worth it to zoom in a bit. Thoughts?
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   It took me a minute to find where the hook is mentioned in the article, and I think that's because the article mentions the walls instead as a surface "9.5° angle from horizontal". Should this be "9.5° angle from vertical" instead, since it's almost vertical? Other than these couple of questions, looks good to me. @Artem.G Bsoyka (tcg) 03:54, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

      • Hey Bsoyka, thanks for the review! I'll think about the crop, or maybe css crop can be used? Will experiment with it a bit later from a laptop. Regarding the vertical or horizontal angle, this is from a source If we want a simulated gravitational field (and free-fall acceleration) of 1.63 m/s2, then the person and floor would need to be leaning 9.6 degrees from being completely horizontal. I think 9.5 is from a 1965 paper, will check it again. Let me know if it's confusing, and I will think about better phrasing. Artem.G (talk) 10:11, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
        • @Artem.G: Not sure CSS cropping can be done here since we have to use the {{Main page image/DYK}} template—probably easier to just extract a new version solely for DYK, more details on that here. Now with the phrasing, I understand it more with that source because it says the person is almost horizontal, which makes much more sense. I think the relevant sentence in the article needs to be adjusted to say that, because it doesn't make sense to just say the walkway is almost horizontal. Bsoyka (tcg) 14:29, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    No Obligation

    Moved to mainspace by The Sharpest Lives (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    The Sharpest Lives (💬✏️ℹ️) (ping me!) 03:13, 17 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    •   The hook is just a play on words with the band and the name of their album. Not an appropriate hook, see here. Propose something else. In the meantime, let's check the other criteria
    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall:   Cambalachero (talk) 02:00, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    I will complete the review once a proper alternative hook is proposed. Cambalachero (talk) 01:51, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    @Cambalachero: whoops! I'll try some new hooks.
    I hope one of these fits! Also, thanks for reviewing. – The Sharpest Lives (💬✏️ℹ️) (ping me!) 02:42, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

      ALT2 seems to be a good one. Cambalachero (talk) 13:57, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Abortion in Liberia

    • Source: [46] Half of the midwives reported having encountered some young women who, to provoke an abortion, had inserted intravaginally cassava, chalks and local herbs such as the locally-known as ‘rocket-propelled grenade’. and [47] Teta said a friend helped her obtained a herb, commonly known as 'Christmas leaf'. They boiled it into a tea that she drank.
    • Reviewed:
    Moved to mainspace by Vigilantcosmicpenguin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    — Vigilant Cosmic Penguin 🐧(talk | contribs) 15:53, 17 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

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    Vann Molyvann

    Improved to Good Article status by Arcahaeoindris (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 12 past nominations.

    Arcahaeoindris (talk) 02:12, 20 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   @Arcahaeoindris: looks good. '''[[User:CanonNi]]''' (talkcontribs) 10:12, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    David Yong

    Created by Tails Wx (talk) and Jeraxmoira (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 23 past nominations.

    ~ Tails Wx 00:23, 18 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  

    QPQ:   - Not done
    Overall:   I want to suggest linking "an entertainment agency" and "its only artist" to their respective articles, but not sure if that would be overlinking. Just a thought—otherwise all looks good. I prefer ALT0, just waiting for QPQ now. Bsoyka (tcg) 01:45, 19 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    KTLE

    Created by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 701 past nominations.

    Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 16:25, 20 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited:  
    • Interesting:  
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall:   Always impressed at how well you write television station articles. This one looks good. Approved. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:10, 20 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

    Gothus teemo

     
    Gothus teemo
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Heckler v. Chaney
  • Moved to mainspace by Chaotic Enby (talk) and Queen of Hearts (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

    Queen of Heartstalk 00:46, 20 July 2024 (UTC).Reply

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